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Dragon ball Elniër chapter 13 Gohans dead, Elrics revenge

 

12-23-14 06:49 AM
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Chapter
13 Gohans dead, Elrics revenge




Same
time, Akaia




Goku,
Piccolo, Goten, Tien and both Trunks 
exploded in a rage.

Yamcha, Yellow and Krillin gulped in fear.

The others looked pissed.

Elric looked at what happened.

Gohan no… I-I Gohan
Elric stuttered.

Hahaha, why did you that Elric, why didn’t you protect him Obsidian said.


YOU BASTARD Elric yelled.

GOHAAAAAN Elric screamed as there came cheetah-like
hair all over his body.

The sheer force of his power pushed everyone back and
brought them to senses.

It can't be Obsidian said.

I-it’s the elniër form Yellow said.

Is that his Elniër form Tien said.

Elric began
powering up, causing the battleground to crack.

T-that’s i-impossible, that is
the hardest metal, it’s not supposed to even be scratched Shellana said.

No one can crack that, how did he Potanto said.

Elric
looked at Obsidian.

here is what you want, the legendary elniër awakened, be
grateful Elric said.

Elric punched Obsidian forward and then punched him back.


Elric kicked Obsidian upwards and punched him to the ground.

ORE BEAM, RANKING
WAVE Obsidian screamed.

E … J … Elric began.

The attacks hit.

Elric appeared out of the smoke unharmed.

L … BEAM Elric
fired.

How is that much strength even possible Obsidian said before getting
hit.

The entire battleground went to little stones.

Elric continued to fire until he didn’t had the energy to sustain his
form.

A-A-AMAZING ORANGE BROKE THE STADIUM, HE IS THE FIRST ONE TO HAVE EVER
SUCEEDED IN EVEN SCHRATCHING THE BATTLEGROUND,CAN HE TURN THINGS AROUND NOW
THAT HE DEALT SO MUCH DAMAGE TO OBSIDIAN the announcer said.

That was amazing, how did he get this
much strength Goku said.

It’s the greatest power I have ever felt Vegeta said.


How can have he that much strength Potanto said. 

The question is, can he defeat Obsidian now
Piccolo said.

I hope so, Gohan Krillin said.

I hope Elric kills him Yamcha
said.

CHEETAH … WRATH Elric began.

Obsidian loaded up a ranking wave.

FIST Elric screamed
as he flew towards Obsidian.

RANKING WAVE Obsidian fired.

Elric used instant
transmission to get out of the way.

Goku did you learn him new techniques Tien
asked.

Yeah me and Gohan taught him new techniques Goku said.

Obsidian jumped
up last moment.

Elrics other hand went upwards.

MASENKO Elric screamed.

The
Masenko hit Obsidian, knocking him out.

AND THE LEGENDARY ELNIËR WINS THE
MATCH the announcer said.

Elric flew towards the others.

Gohan … it’s done, your death won’t be in
vain Elric said.

Elric turned to Obsidian who woke up.

I could kill you now,
but I have decided to spare you, now get out Elric spoke.

You should have
killed him Vegeta said.

I agree with Vegeta on this Yamcha said.

Don’t listen
to them, you made the right choice Goku said.

Gohan probably wanted you to
spare him Piccolo said.

I hope I made the right choice Elric said.

I have to
train to keep up with you Orange Potanto said.

Elric looked to Obsidian as he
ran away.

That bastard, I hope this will haunt him Elric said.

Probably not,
knowing him he is raging because he has lost Shellana said.

TOMMOROW IS THE
FINAL BATTLE BETWEEN ORANGE AND POTANTO the announcer said.

Well at least you get your prize
Potanto Elric said.

I have a name Orange Shellana said.

Of course you do and my name is Orange Elric
said.

Potanto sighed.

you are the worst in making jokes Orange Potanto said.


Blame the writer Elric said.

DAMMIT ELRIC Vegeta screamed.




author - how will the final battle turn out, see it in the next chapter.

imamonster :
greenluigi :
juuldude;

Chapter
13 Gohans dead, Elrics revenge




Same
time, Akaia




Goku,
Piccolo, Goten, Tien and both Trunks 
exploded in a rage.

Yamcha, Yellow and Krillin gulped in fear.

The others looked pissed.

Elric looked at what happened.

Gohan no… I-I Gohan
Elric stuttered.

Hahaha, why did you that Elric, why didn’t you protect him Obsidian said.


YOU BASTARD Elric yelled.

GOHAAAAAN Elric screamed as there came cheetah-like
hair all over his body.

The sheer force of his power pushed everyone back and
brought them to senses.

It can't be Obsidian said.

I-it’s the elniër form Yellow said.

Is that his Elniër form Tien said.

Elric began
powering up, causing the battleground to crack.

T-that’s i-impossible, that is
the hardest metal, it’s not supposed to even be scratched Shellana said.

No one can crack that, how did he Potanto said.

Elric
looked at Obsidian.

here is what you want, the legendary elniër awakened, be
grateful Elric said.

Elric punched Obsidian forward and then punched him back.


Elric kicked Obsidian upwards and punched him to the ground.

ORE BEAM, RANKING
WAVE Obsidian screamed.

E … J … Elric began.

The attacks hit.

Elric appeared out of the smoke unharmed.

L … BEAM Elric
fired.

How is that much strength even possible Obsidian said before getting
hit.

The entire battleground went to little stones.

Elric continued to fire until he didn’t had the energy to sustain his
form.

A-A-AMAZING ORANGE BROKE THE STADIUM, HE IS THE FIRST ONE TO HAVE EVER
SUCEEDED IN EVEN SCHRATCHING THE BATTLEGROUND,CAN HE TURN THINGS AROUND NOW
THAT HE DEALT SO MUCH DAMAGE TO OBSIDIAN the announcer said.

That was amazing, how did he get this
much strength Goku said.

It’s the greatest power I have ever felt Vegeta said.


How can have he that much strength Potanto said. 

The question is, can he defeat Obsidian now
Piccolo said.

I hope so, Gohan Krillin said.

I hope Elric kills him Yamcha
said.

CHEETAH … WRATH Elric began.

Obsidian loaded up a ranking wave.

FIST Elric screamed
as he flew towards Obsidian.

RANKING WAVE Obsidian fired.

Elric used instant
transmission to get out of the way.

Goku did you learn him new techniques Tien
asked.

Yeah me and Gohan taught him new techniques Goku said.

Obsidian jumped
up last moment.

Elrics other hand went upwards.

MASENKO Elric screamed.

The
Masenko hit Obsidian, knocking him out.

AND THE LEGENDARY ELNIËR WINS THE
MATCH the announcer said.

Elric flew towards the others.

Gohan … it’s done, your death won’t be in
vain Elric said.

Elric turned to Obsidian who woke up.

I could kill you now,
but I have decided to spare you, now get out Elric spoke.

You should have
killed him Vegeta said.

I agree with Vegeta on this Yamcha said.

Don’t listen
to them, you made the right choice Goku said.

Gohan probably wanted you to
spare him Piccolo said.

I hope I made the right choice Elric said.

I have to
train to keep up with you Orange Potanto said.

Elric looked to Obsidian as he
ran away.

That bastard, I hope this will haunt him Elric said.

Probably not,
knowing him he is raging because he has lost Shellana said.

TOMMOROW IS THE
FINAL BATTLE BETWEEN ORANGE AND POTANTO the announcer said.

Well at least you get your prize
Potanto Elric said.

I have a name Orange Shellana said.

Of course you do and my name is Orange Elric
said.

Potanto sighed.

you are the worst in making jokes Orange Potanto said.


Blame the writer Elric said.

DAMMIT ELRIC Vegeta screamed.




author - how will the final battle turn out, see it in the next chapter.

imamonster :
greenluigi :
juuldude;

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