Forum Links
Related Threads
Coming Soon
Thread Information
Views
433
Replies
1
Rating
0
Status
CLOSED
Thread
Creator
Creator
oldschoolboyz
12-19-14 09:52 PM
12-19-14 09:52 PM
Last
Post
Post
bigger0gamer
12-21-14 10:28 PM
12-21-14 10:28 PM
Views: 254
Today: 0
Users: 0 unique
Today: 0
Users: 0 unique
Thread Actions
Thread Closed
New Thread

New Poll

Order
Bionic Moon
12-19-14 09:52 PM
oldschoolboyz is Offline
| ID: 1115068 | 1050 Words

| ID: 1115068 | 1050 Words
oldschoolboyz
Level: 36





POSTS: 162/280
POST EXP: 38292
LVL EXP: 292205
CP: 1234.7
VIZ: 158091





POSTS: 162/280
POST EXP: 38292
LVL EXP: 292205
CP: 1234.7
VIZ: 158091

Likes: 0 Dislikes: 0
“So much for his face.” The alarms were going off. He knew he only had so much time now. Everything was going according to plan, or so he hoped. The metal doors on the other side of the hangar were next. He ran to them. Once he got there he noted the control panel to the right of the doors. He smashed it with the bionic arm. The doors opened. Apply the science he thought to himself humorously. There was a long hallway in front of him. At the end of it an elevator from what he guessed. He walked down the hallway. The walls were made of glass. He stopped midway and looked through. There on the other side was the secret hangar. He could see the ship. Why build one when you could have two at twice the price. Then he saw her. She stepped out of the rear entrance of the ship. She looked beautiful as ever. Silvery hair, long, and athletic looking. She was dressed in some kind of space age uniform. She held a helmet at her side. She looked his way and he waved. She waved back and then the whole building shook as the ground shuddered. It knocked almost to his behind but, he caught himself with his bionic arm. He glanced through the glass and saw her. She was laughing he could tell but, also pointing to her wrist. They had to go. He got the rest of the way up and ran to the elevator entrance and pushed the button. The doors opened and he entered. He pressed the button for the lower level and the doors shut. The elevator went down. Music played as it descended. “Mysterious love..” the singer sang. He laughed his butt off at that. So, she was a d.j. too. Then the elevator stopped almost at the bottom and the power went out. He stood there in the dark. Shoot he thought to himself. The emergency lights came on then. He heard a banging then on the elevator doors. He heard her say, “Are you allright?”. Loudly he said, “Yeah, stand back!” Using his bionic arm he got a grip on the door and slowly he pushed it open just enough so he could squeeze through. He would have do to this on his stomach though as the elevator had not gone all the way down. He felt his inner pocket to make sure it was still there. “Stop goofing off!” she said humorously. He laughed and got on his belly and then reached through the opening. She grabbed his hands and with some difficulty pulled him partway through. Then he got stuck. He was through all the way to his waist. “Gained a little weight have we?” she said with a slight laugh. He looked at her in no uncertain terms and smiled with a blush at the same time. Then he reached in his inner pocket and pulled out the little black box and opened it in front of her. “Will you?” he said and he put on his best smile. That sound of delight every girl makes when they get a certain happy escaped her. Then she looked at him and laughed quite possibly louder than the alarms. “We look so ridiculous right now I’m gonna have to say yes!” she said. “I love you Moon.” He said. “I love you too, commando.” She said. They kissed then as he slipped the ring on her outstretched finger. Then the elevator fell the rest of the way down and the doors opened the rest of the way up. He lay on the ground and his lips had landed on her feet. “Really now?” she said amusingly. He got up and looked at her most seriously, saying “As you wish.” Then he laughed and she with him. They both hugged after that and then the ground shuddered again. “We have to go now.” She said. “Three minutes until self destruct.” Said the robot voice over the p.a. system. At that they both ran to the ship and entered through the rear entrance. The ship was designed like a helicopter but, far more advanced than typical technology, capable of space travel and a number of other things he wondered about. As if she heard his thoughts, moon spoke. “I designed it to their specifications although obtaining the material was quite difficult, however thanks to the resources of my now out of business partners it really wasn’t that hard to put together honestly.” Their specifications he thought. Their meaning them and them meaning the ones who had sent them that message some time ago. The gummi’s. What it all meant had yet to be seen or realized he thought, though he liked it, they both did. Who was behind it all though. He knew that had to be a question on everyone’s mind. Everyone. That was another thought. He had been thinking all of this as they journeyed to the helm of the ship. As they sat in their seats he spoke his thought. “How many of us do you think there are?” he said. “It’s hard to say, though I say the more the merrier.” She spoke. Moon flipped a series of switches and pressed some buttons. The ship roared to life. She looked at him and he at her. “Ready?” she said. “Ready!” he said. Moon took the controls and the sound of the hangar doors above them could be heard opening. They lifted off the ground and went up. Then they were in the sky. He looked out the window. He could see various parts of the enormous compound exploding in places. “Here we go.” She said. Moon turned a key and the ship made a lot of what he thought of as..cool sounds. They went higher. Above the clouds into the atmosphere. Their speed picked up and then finally it happened. They were in space. His dog tags floated in front of him and he marveled at the sight. “Turning on gravity.” His dog tags fell back to his chest and then that was it. They had made it out. He looked out the window and saw the planet. It was so beautiful. He smiled and looked seeing that she was smiling too. The alarms were going off. He knew he only had so much time now. Everything was going according to plan, or so he hoped. The metal doors on the other side of the hangar were next. He ran to them. Once he got there he noted the control panel to the right of the doors. He smashed it with the bionic arm. The doors opened. Apply the science he thought to himself humorously. There was a long hallway in front of him. At the end of it an elevator from what he guessed. He walked down the hallway. The walls were made of glass. He stopped midway and looked through. There on the other side was the secret hangar. He could see the ship. Why build one when you could have two at twice the price. Then he saw her. She stepped out of the rear entrance of the ship. She looked beautiful as ever. Silvery hair, long, and athletic looking. She was dressed in some kind of space age uniform. She held a helmet at her side. She looked his way and he waved. She waved back and then the whole building shook as the ground shuddered. It knocked almost to his behind but, he caught himself with his bionic arm. He glanced through the glass and saw her. She was laughing he could tell but, also pointing to her wrist. They had to go. He got the rest of the way up and ran to the elevator entrance and pushed the button. The doors opened and he entered. He pressed the button for the lower level and the doors shut. The elevator went down. Music played as it descended. “Mysterious love..” the singer sang. He laughed his butt off at that. So, she was a d.j. too. Then the elevator stopped almost at the bottom and the power went out. He stood there in the dark. Shoot he thought to himself. The emergency lights came on then. He heard a banging then on the elevator doors. He heard her say, “Are you allright?”. Loudly he said, “Yeah, stand back!” Using his bionic arm he got a grip on the door and slowly he pushed it open just enough so he could squeeze through. He would have do to this on his stomach though as the elevator had not gone all the way down. He felt his inner pocket to make sure it was still there. “Stop goofing off!” she said humorously. He laughed and got on his belly and then reached through the opening. She grabbed his hands and with some difficulty pulled him partway through. Then he got stuck. He was through all the way to his waist. “Gained a little weight have we?” she said with a slight laugh. He looked at her in no uncertain terms and smiled with a blush at the same time. Then he reached in his inner pocket and pulled out the little black box and opened it in front of her. “Will you?” he said and he put on his best smile. That sound of delight every girl makes when they get a certain happy escaped her. Then she looked at him and laughed quite possibly louder than the alarms. “We look so ridiculous right now I’m gonna have to say yes!” she said. “I love you Moon.” He said. “I love you too, commando.” She said. They kissed then as he slipped the ring on her outstretched finger. Then the elevator fell the rest of the way down and the doors opened the rest of the way up. He lay on the ground and his lips had landed on her feet. “Really now?” she said amusingly. He got up and looked at her most seriously, saying “As you wish.” Then he laughed and she with him. They both hugged after that and then the ground shuddered again. “We have to go now.” She said. “Three minutes until self destruct.” Said the robot voice over the p.a. system. At that they both ran to the ship and entered through the rear entrance. The ship was designed like a helicopter but, far more advanced than typical technology, capable of space travel and a number of other things he wondered about. As if she heard his thoughts, moon spoke. “I designed it to their specifications although obtaining the material was quite difficult, however thanks to the resources of my now out of business partners it really wasn’t that hard to put together honestly.” Their specifications he thought. Their meaning them and them meaning the ones who had sent them that message some time ago. The gummi’s. What it all meant had yet to be seen or realized he thought, though he liked it, they both did. Who was behind it all though. He knew that had to be a question on everyone’s mind. Everyone. That was another thought. He had been thinking all of this as they journeyed to the helm of the ship. As they sat in their seats he spoke his thought. “How many of us do you think there are?” he said. “It’s hard to say, though I say the more the merrier.” She spoke. Moon flipped a series of switches and pressed some buttons. The ship roared to life. She looked at him and he at her. “Ready?” she said. “Ready!” he said. Moon took the controls and the sound of the hangar doors above them could be heard opening. They lifted off the ground and went up. Then they were in the sky. He looked out the window. He could see various parts of the enormous compound exploding in places. “Here we go.” She said. Moon turned a key and the ship made a lot of what he thought of as..cool sounds. They went higher. Above the clouds into the atmosphere. Their speed picked up and then finally it happened. They were in space. His dog tags floated in front of him and he marveled at the sight. “Turning on gravity.” His dog tags fell back to his chest and then that was it. They had made it out. He looked out the window and saw the planet. It was so beautiful. He smiled and looked seeing that she was smiling too. |
Trusted Member
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 11-15-14
Location: the states
Last Post: 3718 days
Last Active: 3684 days
Team Mega Man |
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 11-15-14
Location: the states
Last Post: 3718 days
Last Active: 3684 days
12-21-14 10:28 PM
bigger0gamer is Offline
| ID: 1115528 | 91 Words

| ID: 1115528 | 91 Words
bigger0gamer
Level: 56





POSTS: 332/748
POST EXP: 48359
LVL EXP: 1347471
CP: 3933.6
VIZ: 49222





POSTS: 332/748
POST EXP: 48359
LVL EXP: 1347471
CP: 3933.6
VIZ: 49222

Likes: 0 Dislikes: 0
Really, if your plan was to confuse someone to death, you've nearly done it. Heck, I'm so confused I've stopped trying to figure out whats happening and start questioning things like "With the amount of OCs to characters from the series, is it really a fanfic or an original story with cameos from Mega Man?". Seriously I've counted 9 OCs to 2 actual characters so far. But I must say, if this made sense it would be very enjoyable, and as a writer in general you've got a lot of potential. |
Member
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 08-23-13
Location: The Heart of the Dragon Lands
Last Post: 475 days
Last Active: 271 days
Master of Bacon |
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 08-23-13
Location: The Heart of the Dragon Lands
Last Post: 475 days
Last Active: 271 days
Links
Page Comments
This page has no comments