Forum Links
Related Threads
Coming Soon
Thread Information
Views
536
Replies
1
Rating
3
Status
CLOSED
Thread
Creator
Creator
deggle
10-05-14 03:33 PM
10-05-14 03:33 PM
Last
Post
Post
StarKitten
10-07-14 07:18 PM
10-07-14 07:18 PM
Views: 281
Today: 0
Users: 0 unique
Today: 0
Users: 0 unique
Thread Actions
Thread Closed
New Thread

New Poll

Order
Tribulations Double Feature Chapter 7 & 8
10-05-14 03:33 PM
deggle is Offline
| ID: 1086866 | 2227 Words

| ID: 1086866 | 2227 Words
deggle
deg2000
deg2000
Level: 122





POSTS: 2686/4266
POST EXP: 269627
LVL EXP: 20349355
CP: 16183.9
VIZ: 509183





POSTS: 2686/4266
POST EXP: 269627
LVL EXP: 20349355
CP: 16183.9
VIZ: 509183

Likes: 3 Dislikes: 0
Hello and welcome all to the double feature of my story Tribulations seven and eight. REGARD: This is not too boost anything in Tdv I scheduled a lot of stuff for this month not knowing it was tdv. Chapter 7 & 8 Where do we go from here/The young Celes? & The tomb of the beloved king? As Kyro wakes up from his dream with water dripping down on his face and running down his cheek as the sun starts to rise shinning light throughout all the windows. Kyro- Hmm what....*regains himself* Oh yeah we all ran into the school to make sure anymore weird creatures didn't come after us now I remember...What did that dream have to do with this I must be missing something. As the others walk in seeing Kyro confused Rita says to him Rita- Is there something wrong? You seem a little odd. Kyro- ...uh.. I mean no it's nothing we should get out of here and go somewhere.. Tachi- That's a little vague isn't it. Like where exactly? Kyro- Don't worry about it I just want you to follow me through this okay. Dando- Well I'll follow and I'm sure everyone else agrees with you but one downside.. How can we survive... I mean we don't have weapons but you and Riley do. Kyro- Hmm I haven't thought about that much... Wait I have an idea to the self defense and war tactics classrooms we can gather up supplies and such there. Riley- Sounds brilliant let's go hurry and do that now.As they all walk off to the rooms and grab packs to carry all their supplies, and choose weapons of their choices and to their liking. Tachi picks up some food and a pair of brass knuckles and a few more items just to sastify himself with power. Dando and Riley pick up Rita and Trina look inside the doctor's office and find some healing supplies that would be useful well Trina finds a stick that had hard nodes at the top that come out and can hit monsters a few feet away. Rita finds a ling-shot and some moth-balls and rocks and a few ribbons(she knew she needed everything she could get). Kyro- polishing his sword found a strap for it and tied to his back and looked for more weapons obtaining a back-up sword and throwing knives. As everyone gathered in the center ready for lied ahead of them they didn't know they would need more than they had. But they knew they were ready for anything to come in there path or did they? Character Switch. ???'s pov. "I could tell something had changed in the world the birds stopped chirping the sun wasn't shinning radiantly and most of all the animals were not around" said a young girl as she picks up an Azure flower she holds it close wishing for the best of the world. Girl's Mother- My child my darling little girl where are you!? Please come quick. Girl- Hmm Mother never sounded so frightened so before I wonder what has happened she always knows I go down here to the stream to play with the animals. As the girl's mother comes running the girl notices something strange about her mother there was blood over here she was wounded as she look awestruck she takes a moment to realize what's going on they were being attacked but by whom. The small village of Careth has always been friends with everyone around them. Girl- Mother what is going on why is there blood on you? Mother- No time to tell we have to go now I know this might be hard for you being disabled and all.. Girl- Mother you know even if I can't move my legs that I'm stuck in this wheelchair I can still move and be normal Mother- Oh my dear you were always so perserverent but not I need you to survive but we have to hurry to the Locker. Girl- What locker are you talking about that weird cave with a door at the other side of the stream? Mother- The exact one we must go there as someone special is there to talk to.... She was cut short as a piercing screech blew up the silence as a giant black creature arose from the hill and with a big bloody mask on it's face smiling. Mother- Hurry my child we must hurry to the door take the key go!! The girl did as her mother told her and she knew what was going to happen her mother was going to sacrifice herself. But she knew if she looked back she would die as well and didn't want to disobey her mother. Girl- "I love you mom" She says as she hears lot's of screaming from her mother as she speeds on her wheelchair trying to get to the door. But as the girl reached the door she was too late to do the door only pressing the key into the lock only to launched away by the same creature her mother was attacked by. She looked right into it's face seeing her mother's face inside the mask slowly disappearing. She gags from the horrid sight knowing she failed her mother in escaping. As it closed in on her ready to kill the young girl someone shouted. ??- I'm sorry but I need that young girl so would be so kind to leave her alone. As mysterious voice said But as the girl couldn't find who the voice came from she crawled as fast as she could to the door opening it while the monster was distracted by the voice. Girl- "I will miss you mom" she says as she rolls inside the room turning back to only see the monster lumbering towards her. Girl- "No leave me alone" as she tries as hard as she can to slam the door but it moves itself as the monster slams into it before screaming out that it couldn't get her. As the young girl pants she notices she was in a room that was completely illuminated but only by a candle. ???- Dear Celes... Welcome I have been waiting for you. Celes- How did you know who I am and please tell me who exactly are you and why am I supposed to live. Why did my mother have to die for me? ???- In time but I'll say this your special as you know it already and your mother most defiantly knew it. Celes- Special how she knew what. The only thing about me is the darn wheelchair. ???- But that's not all you will learn these things but first I need you to meet a friend his name is Kyro I want you to find him at Randerstand's Tomb don't worry on how to get there you will know. Celes- But what if I run into more of those things those horrid creatures. ???- Don't worry about that you will b protected now follow the lighted path to Kyro and then we shall talk. Before she could understand what was going on her Wheelchair was moving all by it's self through the path. Celes- But wait you never told me who are you? ???- Just a guardian of yours don't think too much about. Chapter 7 completed. Chapter 8 Begins Kyro's pov As the group walks on the grassy path waiting for any kind of danger to strike out at them. Tachi- You sure you know where were going Kyro I'm not saying I don't trust you I'm just saying I don't trust where were going with this. Kyro- Just stop worrying your being tiresome (Hes right I'm totally winging this but I feel like something is pulling me this way like it meant for me too) Rita- I feel we should trust in Kyro's decision as he is technically our leader correct? Tachi- Wait since when did he become the leader. Dando- By the start of it I think because he has been leading us all this way Tachi- Pssh whatever I think I would be a way better leader though. Riley- Your okay with facing the monsters head on and ready to die and have your bones torn apart any second. Kyro- (I do wish he didn't make a comment like that were supposed to be brave about this not Vomit or be Horrified) Tachi- Okay you have a point (Jerk) They all stop abruptly to understand the new surrounding's... A large Desert no the grass doesn't go in it just stops like a wall and then all sand and cactus and who knows what else. Trina- What is wrong with this place! Kyro- Just keep going and don't stop.... (as he ignores everyone he keeps walking that feeling getting stronger and stronger) Riley- Ey stop yer yattering and keep moving or Kyro will leave us all behind.Everyone agreed and pressed on the path Kyro was leading them all getting tired as the day went on. Kyro- Hmm something doesn't seem right" I said those words right before Tachi might have made the worst move of his life or was it. Tachi- "Pssh it's nothing" as he walks forward every hearing a clicking noise and then sand around them all started falling down into a pit it seemed guess what they couldn't see the bottom. Kyro- "You Idiot" he said as they all fell down. 10 minutes later everyone wakes up inside an old tunnel it seems with torches lit every where on the walls and bed like parts where skeletons layed. Dando- A..A.A Burial ground "gulp". As they started trekking through the catacombs they also heard noises every few seconds like a grunting or a whimper and sounds of a liquid dropping to the ground. Or something against the wall. Kyro- Who knows what's down here stay on your best guard I know it's hard to move through here but be careful and obviously there are going to be traps so please don't touch anything for heaven's sake. But as Kyro knew it something was going to happen for the best or the worst he could never tell. Riley- Something is coming out I think were about to enter a room guys and it looks well lit. Oh it was a room but not a nice cozy one with a couch and t.v no it was a Rita- oh my gosh it's a Torture room All around the large room Torture devices ranging from Nail rippers- to Cross stabbing posts. Rita- Why do we have to go through this stuff *as her eyes start to tear up Kyro walks by and pats her shoulder it's alright. (Hmm since when would I ever do something like to someone?) Riley- Well guys we can't stay here forever look over there that room seems to be important let's see in there. Kyro- Right let's hurry up.. As everyone went through to the next room Kyro stood back to pick up some things. Kyro- These will be useful for sure what is this place and why is it here? As I run up to everyone to see a giant coffin Location Randerstand's Tomb? Kyro- Guys this is it the place I have a feeling Rita- But who is that in the coffin. ???- King Randerstand the beloved. Kyro- Who said that? I did a girl said as she rolled in on a Wheelchair she had black hair running down to her legs with glasses and a pink hair ribbon on the right side of her head making one pony-tale Rita- And who are you exactly? Celes- I am Celes Kurasto I was sent here by someone they said I need to find Kyro are you him she points to me. Kyro- Yes I am him so someone sent you to look for me? Celes- Correct the person said we were supposed to meet here and that's about all I know. ???- I know the rest of it though. Kyro- I know that voice Callabra! Callabra- You remembered me Kyro good yes that is my name. You are all chosen for something great in this but before I can say anymore you need to go through a test all of you have separate tests and can not see other doing their tests. Kyro- So to see if were all worthy we have to take these tests to show our full potential correct? Callabra- That is correct now stay about 5 feet away from each other so you can get to your own test by yourself and not with friends. They all listened a did what Callabra told them to do and from their legs their body was disolving bit by bit and the bodies were being put together but in different rooms. Stay tuned for the next chapter as they are the testings I love the support for this story and would love to hear feed-back so I know I can keep going and you guys like it Summons Eniitan : AriaAngelDream : NintendoFanKimmy : greenluigi : Bintsy : tornadocam : SUX2BU : yoshirulez! : Gingercream1 : Frodlex : awesomeguy279 Chapter 7 & 8 Where do we go from here/The young Celes? & The tomb of the beloved king? As Kyro wakes up from his dream with water dripping down on his face and running down his cheek as the sun starts to rise shinning light throughout all the windows. Kyro- Hmm what....*regains himself* Oh yeah we all ran into the school to make sure anymore weird creatures didn't come after us now I remember...What did that dream have to do with this I must be missing something. As the others walk in seeing Kyro confused Rita says to him Rita- Is there something wrong? You seem a little odd. Kyro- ...uh.. I mean no it's nothing we should get out of here and go somewhere.. Tachi- That's a little vague isn't it. Like where exactly? Kyro- Don't worry about it I just want you to follow me through this okay. Dando- Well I'll follow and I'm sure everyone else agrees with you but one downside.. How can we survive... I mean we don't have weapons but you and Riley do. Kyro- Hmm I haven't thought about that much... Wait I have an idea to the self defense and war tactics classrooms we can gather up supplies and such there. Riley- Sounds brilliant let's go hurry and do that now.As they all walk off to the rooms and grab packs to carry all their supplies, and choose weapons of their choices and to their liking. Tachi picks up some food and a pair of brass knuckles and a few more items just to sastify himself with power. Dando and Riley pick up Rita and Trina look inside the doctor's office and find some healing supplies that would be useful well Trina finds a stick that had hard nodes at the top that come out and can hit monsters a few feet away. Rita finds a ling-shot and some moth-balls and rocks and a few ribbons(she knew she needed everything she could get). Kyro- polishing his sword found a strap for it and tied to his back and looked for more weapons obtaining a back-up sword and throwing knives. As everyone gathered in the center ready for lied ahead of them they didn't know they would need more than they had. But they knew they were ready for anything to come in there path or did they? Character Switch. ???'s pov. "I could tell something had changed in the world the birds stopped chirping the sun wasn't shinning radiantly and most of all the animals were not around" said a young girl as she picks up an Azure flower she holds it close wishing for the best of the world. Girl's Mother- My child my darling little girl where are you!? Please come quick. Girl- Hmm Mother never sounded so frightened so before I wonder what has happened she always knows I go down here to the stream to play with the animals. As the girl's mother comes running the girl notices something strange about her mother there was blood over here she was wounded as she look awestruck she takes a moment to realize what's going on they were being attacked but by whom. The small village of Careth has always been friends with everyone around them. Girl- Mother what is going on why is there blood on you? Mother- No time to tell we have to go now I know this might be hard for you being disabled and all.. Girl- Mother you know even if I can't move my legs that I'm stuck in this wheelchair I can still move and be normal Mother- Oh my dear you were always so perserverent but not I need you to survive but we have to hurry to the Locker. Girl- What locker are you talking about that weird cave with a door at the other side of the stream? Mother- The exact one we must go there as someone special is there to talk to.... She was cut short as a piercing screech blew up the silence as a giant black creature arose from the hill and with a big bloody mask on it's face smiling. Mother- Hurry my child we must hurry to the door take the key go!! The girl did as her mother told her and she knew what was going to happen her mother was going to sacrifice herself. But she knew if she looked back she would die as well and didn't want to disobey her mother. Girl- "I love you mom" She says as she hears lot's of screaming from her mother as she speeds on her wheelchair trying to get to the door. But as the girl reached the door she was too late to do the door only pressing the key into the lock only to launched away by the same creature her mother was attacked by. She looked right into it's face seeing her mother's face inside the mask slowly disappearing. She gags from the horrid sight knowing she failed her mother in escaping. As it closed in on her ready to kill the young girl someone shouted. ??- I'm sorry but I need that young girl so would be so kind to leave her alone. As mysterious voice said But as the girl couldn't find who the voice came from she crawled as fast as she could to the door opening it while the monster was distracted by the voice. Girl- "I will miss you mom" she says as she rolls inside the room turning back to only see the monster lumbering towards her. Girl- "No leave me alone" as she tries as hard as she can to slam the door but it moves itself as the monster slams into it before screaming out that it couldn't get her. As the young girl pants she notices she was in a room that was completely illuminated but only by a candle. ???- Dear Celes... Welcome I have been waiting for you. Celes- How did you know who I am and please tell me who exactly are you and why am I supposed to live. Why did my mother have to die for me? ???- In time but I'll say this your special as you know it already and your mother most defiantly knew it. Celes- Special how she knew what. The only thing about me is the darn wheelchair. ???- But that's not all you will learn these things but first I need you to meet a friend his name is Kyro I want you to find him at Randerstand's Tomb don't worry on how to get there you will know. Celes- But what if I run into more of those things those horrid creatures. ???- Don't worry about that you will b protected now follow the lighted path to Kyro and then we shall talk. Before she could understand what was going on her Wheelchair was moving all by it's self through the path. Celes- But wait you never told me who are you? ???- Just a guardian of yours don't think too much about. Chapter 7 completed. Chapter 8 Begins Kyro's pov As the group walks on the grassy path waiting for any kind of danger to strike out at them. Tachi- You sure you know where were going Kyro I'm not saying I don't trust you I'm just saying I don't trust where were going with this. Kyro- Just stop worrying your being tiresome (Hes right I'm totally winging this but I feel like something is pulling me this way like it meant for me too) Rita- I feel we should trust in Kyro's decision as he is technically our leader correct? Tachi- Wait since when did he become the leader. Dando- By the start of it I think because he has been leading us all this way Tachi- Pssh whatever I think I would be a way better leader though. Riley- Your okay with facing the monsters head on and ready to die and have your bones torn apart any second. Kyro- (I do wish he didn't make a comment like that were supposed to be brave about this not Vomit or be Horrified) Tachi- Okay you have a point (Jerk) They all stop abruptly to understand the new surrounding's... A large Desert no the grass doesn't go in it just stops like a wall and then all sand and cactus and who knows what else. Trina- What is wrong with this place! Kyro- Just keep going and don't stop.... (as he ignores everyone he keeps walking that feeling getting stronger and stronger) Riley- Ey stop yer yattering and keep moving or Kyro will leave us all behind.Everyone agreed and pressed on the path Kyro was leading them all getting tired as the day went on. Kyro- Hmm something doesn't seem right" I said those words right before Tachi might have made the worst move of his life or was it. Tachi- "Pssh it's nothing" as he walks forward every hearing a clicking noise and then sand around them all started falling down into a pit it seemed guess what they couldn't see the bottom. Kyro- "You Idiot" he said as they all fell down. 10 minutes later everyone wakes up inside an old tunnel it seems with torches lit every where on the walls and bed like parts where skeletons layed. Dando- A..A.A Burial ground "gulp". As they started trekking through the catacombs they also heard noises every few seconds like a grunting or a whimper and sounds of a liquid dropping to the ground. Or something against the wall. Kyro- Who knows what's down here stay on your best guard I know it's hard to move through here but be careful and obviously there are going to be traps so please don't touch anything for heaven's sake. But as Kyro knew it something was going to happen for the best or the worst he could never tell. Riley- Something is coming out I think were about to enter a room guys and it looks well lit. Oh it was a room but not a nice cozy one with a couch and t.v no it was a Rita- oh my gosh it's a Torture room All around the large room Torture devices ranging from Nail rippers- to Cross stabbing posts. Rita- Why do we have to go through this stuff *as her eyes start to tear up Kyro walks by and pats her shoulder it's alright. (Hmm since when would I ever do something like to someone?) Riley- Well guys we can't stay here forever look over there that room seems to be important let's see in there. Kyro- Right let's hurry up.. As everyone went through to the next room Kyro stood back to pick up some things. Kyro- These will be useful for sure what is this place and why is it here? As I run up to everyone to see a giant coffin Location Randerstand's Tomb? Kyro- Guys this is it the place I have a feeling Rita- But who is that in the coffin. ???- King Randerstand the beloved. Kyro- Who said that? I did a girl said as she rolled in on a Wheelchair she had black hair running down to her legs with glasses and a pink hair ribbon on the right side of her head making one pony-tale Rita- And who are you exactly? Celes- I am Celes Kurasto I was sent here by someone they said I need to find Kyro are you him she points to me. Kyro- Yes I am him so someone sent you to look for me? Celes- Correct the person said we were supposed to meet here and that's about all I know. ???- I know the rest of it though. Kyro- I know that voice Callabra! Callabra- You remembered me Kyro good yes that is my name. You are all chosen for something great in this but before I can say anymore you need to go through a test all of you have separate tests and can not see other doing their tests. Kyro- So to see if were all worthy we have to take these tests to show our full potential correct? Callabra- That is correct now stay about 5 feet away from each other so you can get to your own test by yourself and not with friends. They all listened a did what Callabra told them to do and from their legs their body was disolving bit by bit and the bodies were being put together but in different rooms. Stay tuned for the next chapter as they are the testings I love the support for this story and would love to hear feed-back so I know I can keep going and you guys like it Summons Eniitan : AriaAngelDream : NintendoFanKimmy : greenluigi : Bintsy : tornadocam : SUX2BU : yoshirulez! : Gingercream1 : Frodlex : awesomeguy279 |
Site Staff
Minecraft Admin
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 10-09-10
Location: Teyvat
Last Post: 688 days
Last Active: 501 days
Minecraft Admin
![]() |
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 10-09-10
Location: Teyvat
Last Post: 688 days
Last Active: 501 days
10-07-14 07:18 PM
StarKitten is Offline
| ID: 1087711 | 29 Words
| ID: 1087711 | 29 Words
StarKitten
Level: 14





POSTS: 11/35
POST EXP: 1387
LVL EXP: 12889
CP: 76.1
VIZ: 9887





POSTS: 11/35
POST EXP: 1387
LVL EXP: 12889
CP: 76.1
VIZ: 9887

Likes: 0 Dislikes: 0
Oh so this is what you mean't when you said you were writing stories. I think it's a little dark but it's okay.
awesomeguy279 : you were failed summoned awesomeguy279 : you were failed summoned |
Member
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 10-07-14
Last Post: 3263 days
Last Active: 3230 days
Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'
Registered: 10-07-14
Last Post: 3263 days
Last Active: 3230 days
Links
Page Comments
This page has no comments