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11-06-09 09:26 AM
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So it goes like this..

We have a story about a kid named Tom. What we are trying to do it make a never ending using Tom as the main character. The goal is to add on to what the person posted above you, and leave your part of the story off with "..." so the person below has something to start with.


I'll start it off:

Tom woke, looked at the clock, and read 7:58. He was going to be late for school! Throwing on some close he skipped breakfast, and ran out the door. As he arrived at school, he checked his backpack for last night's homework, and realized he had forgotten it. As he sprinted back home to get it...

*Remember ANYTHING can happen.
So it goes like this..

We have a story about a kid named Tom. What we are trying to do it make a never ending using Tom as the main character. The goal is to add on to what the person posted above you, and leave your part of the story off with "..." so the person below has something to start with.


I'll start it off:

Tom woke, looked at the clock, and read 7:58. He was going to be late for school! Throwing on some close he skipped breakfast, and ran out the door. As he arrived at school, he checked his backpack for last night's homework, and realized he had forgotten it. As he sprinted back home to get it...

*Remember ANYTHING can happen.
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11-13-09 04:36 PM
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he noticed that everyone was laghing at him and looking at him funny, then he realized he wasn't wearing pants, witch made him run all the faster. When he got about halfway there an officer saw him and...
he noticed that everyone was laghing at him and looking at him funny, then he realized he wasn't wearing pants, witch made him run all the faster. When he got about halfway there an officer saw him and...
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put him in i really lousely ugly looking...
put him in i really lousely ugly looking...
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Giant hollow potato. as it started to rumble, he looked out the small circular window and noticed that it was not going foreward, but upward! he looked back at the officer and noticed that he wasn't an officer, but really a...


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Giant hollow potato. as it started to rumble, he looked out the small circular window and noticed that it was not going foreward, but upward! he looked back at the officer and noticed that he wasn't an officer, but really a...


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goomba with a police cap on...
goomba with a police cap on...
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11-29-09 01:40 PM
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The potato then took him through the sewers & Tom ended up in the mushroom kingdom next to another giant potato that Samus was destroying.
The potato then took him through the sewers & Tom ended up in the mushroom kingdom next to another giant potato that Samus was destroying.
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(edited by Surgiac on 12-16-09 04:42 AM)    

11-29-09 06:55 PM
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with a magical banana that shot socks out of its top. tom was told to stop samus at all costs, for the giant floating potatoes must not be destroyed ever...

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with a magical banana that shot socks out of its top. tom was told to stop samus at all costs, for the giant floating potatoes must not be destroyed ever...

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...Yet Tom did nothing, and Samus destroyed the giant floating potatoes which tore apart the fabric of space-time, sending Tom to an alternate dimension where people...
...Yet Tom did nothing, and Samus destroyed the giant floating potatoes which tore apart the fabric of space-time, sending Tom to an alternate dimension where people...
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....ate little pellets & became super powered for a brief period. Tom wanted to try a pellet but he couldn't because the pellet farmer chased after him with a....
....ate little pellets & became super powered for a brief period. Tom wanted to try a pellet but he couldn't because the pellet farmer chased after him with a....
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rake and he also got caught by E. T. who.....



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rake and he also got caught by E. T. who.....



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...was holding the mystical cantaloupe of fate. With this canteloupe...
...was holding the mystical cantaloupe of fate. With this canteloupe...
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...He fought his way out of...




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....the giant tomato he was trapped in. When Tom got out, he noticed that the tomato had a giant M on it that....
....the giant tomato he was trapped in. When Tom got out, he noticed that the tomato had a giant M on it that....
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(edited by Surgiac on 12-17-09 01:54 PM)    

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...would destroy the world and...






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....then decide not to destroy the world because it liked stories with more imagination. The giant M then jumped off of the tomato and....
....then decide not to destroy the world because it liked stories with more imagination. The giant M then jumped off of the tomato and....
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fought his way back to...
fought his way back to...
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the alphabet, but the other letters wouldn't let him in because...
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...'M' had violated the code of Alphabetness. This code stated that...
...'M' had violated the code of Alphabetness. This code stated that...
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Anything or anybody that didn't have pie couldn't join so...
Anything or anybody that didn't have pie couldn't join so...
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Tom decided he then needed to set out on a quest to make a pie. First he needed to gather the ingredients. Flour was the main ingredient so Tom went to the old man who lived up on the wheat field. When he got to the old man's cottage Tom stepped in and spoke....
Tom decided he then needed to set out on a quest to make a pie. First he needed to gather the ingredients. Flour was the main ingredient so Tom went to the old man who lived up on the wheat field. When he got to the old man's cottage Tom stepped in and spoke....
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