The legend of Zelda series has always been good, this game carries on the legacy very well. For a Gameboy the graphics are very good. The story line follows the original manga with a few minor changes that are very easy to overlook, overall it's a very great story line full of interesting events and a great challenge. The controls are very easy and well explained, so easy a five year old can begin to enjoy the Legend of Zelda series! 
 
   The game itself isn't very addicting, it's a very good game to play once but after you beat the game it's not as fun as the first time you beat it, there are tons of Legend of Zelda games that you can play to get the experience of still having things to do after you beat the game, but this sadly may not be one of them. The depth of the game is another thing, you can really get into the story and enjoy some of the extra things to do, but as I  said there isn't much to really do outside of the main story line. 

The Difficulty of the game is as always, very hard. The controls are easy to use but the game is hard, and that's not a bad thing! It makes the game more fun than it already is. Overall this is a great game and I recommend it to anybody, I look forward to playing another Legend of Zelda game in the future.-Jermelle 

Nod bad for a first review, you are on the right track for the most part, the only thing I would recommend is that you split it up more into the corresponding categories and then talk about it more in depth from there. Explain why each category got the score it did and also how it could be better. Also if you ever review a hack, it is a good idea to compare it to the original. 


Overall, you are off to a good start, and I think with practice and repetition you can really refine and hone your reviewing skills. If you need further guidance on how to write a review, please check out this thread: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382 as well as any other professional reviews.

I like how you tackled certain key points, the legacy of the series, the replay factor, the difficulty. Razor-987 offers good advice.  Maybe consider adding in things like how does it differ from other Zelda games? What familiar items or people might we see here, or what new game play makes this unique-- I don't see the Minish cap mentioned, and I would talk about it a little bit.

Haha. Yeah it's only my first review, I just wanted to see how I did. Thanks for the comments so far, it helps a lot

This was good for a first review but it could have been longer need time you should expain your ratings and give more detail about the game but overall this is a good first review. Hope you make some more

TheReaper7290 : Hello, thanks for taking the time to read my review, I made another one (Pokemon emerald) and I think you'll like that one =)

Jermelle : For a first review this is great. The only advice I have is making future reviews have more detail. Other than that good start!

Jermelle : Good job on this review, this is a game I had a lot of fun with.
I think the tips that I would give too have already been given: Practice, maybe explain a bit more.