I do not like the images of Pikachu seen. I strongly dislike the images with body parts missing. Seeing my favorite pokemon throbbing is torture! I also feel that the Pikachu is in pain because of them. I know the story vaguely because I played the original English version. I don't know the Spanish names of pokemon moves, I really don't know what I'm using until I use it. I can't really read the story. I won't play again even if you pay me! I don't want to see that bloody, suffering Pikachu ever again! I want a refund! If I saw those images one more time, my heart would break! I feel your pain Pikachu!  It would also make me cry! In fact, just thinking of those images made me cry!

Not bad for first review, but I have a few suggestions I can offer to make it better! 


I would recommend breaking it down into categories like graphics, sound, addictiveness, story, difficulty, depth and then talk about each one in detail accordingly. Rather than just say that it wasn't very good or it was great, you should try to be more descriptive, if it was good, what factors in the game made it good? If it was bad, what made it bad, and how could it be better? You won't need to do this for every category, but if you go in with this idea of being descriptive in your review, you will get the hang of it soon enough. Don't worry about word count though, if you talk about each category and describe it in depth, then you should be fine. Also be sure to keep your review organized and easy to read by spacing the categories out and maybe putting the topic category above your summary of it so it is easier to read, plus it looks more professional, like so: 


Graphics: 8

The graphics were good because....

The only other thing I can say is to just use my advice when making your next review and just keep reviewing like that, because once you get the basic gist of how to do it, then it should become a lot easier to do. Best of luck, and keep making more reviews!