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Bomberman and the BHB Army - Prologue

 

04-27-14 03:27 PM
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`Once, long ago, there were seven guardians in the universe, called the Elemental Knights. These knights were responsible for protecting the universe from the likes of Sthertoth, a terrible demon who is out to destroy everything we hold dear. One day Sthertoth grew too strong for them to fight. Under the command of their goddess, they sealed her and the demon away; using their special elemental gems to do so. Then, in order to keep the seal intact, they scattered their stones to the furthest corners of the universe, and went into a deep slumber...
Now... the Stones are being collected by the mysterious Black Hole Brothers Army (or the BHB Army) for nefarious purposes.

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Ashtarth peeked around the corner of the ruined wall, cautiously looking for any more traps.
   Whoever hid the stone here must have been really clever, He thought to himself, I'll have to re-install some of these traps after I retrieve the wind stone.That statue one in particular had some nice touches.
   There were no traps to be seen, but a shining green gem shaped like a crescent moon floated tantalizingly on a pedestal near the back of the area.
   That's it! The wind stone!
   The green haired being peeked around one last time, before quickly dashing over to the pedestal. He slowly stretched his hand out to grab the stone, then quickly snatched the gem out of the pedestal.
   "Hmm," Ashtarth muttered aloud, "Weird, this looks like the wind stone, but it doesn't feel like it..."
   He gently tossed the gem up. However, instead of landing back in his hand, it came back down as a bomb.
   He yelped, dropped the explosive, and quickly fled around the corner.
   Once he safely heard a loud 'Boom!', he cautiously tiptoed back around the corner again and saw, to his glee, that the pedestal had blown up, revealing the true wind stone.
   The green being went to pick it up, but he felt a sudden pain in his head, and knelt down.
   "Ugh! What the-?"
   He cut himself off as he looked back at the stone. He could see himself reflected in the stone, except, something looked off...
Why is there no scouter?
   All of the Knights were forced to wear scouters, to give the Master an easy way of seeing what was going on. Or so he said. Something about this reflection made Ashtarth start to doubt whether that was its true purpose. He would have to look into things later.
Well, either way, that's mission accomplished! Now to get back to the base and inform Master.
   He gingerly picked up the elemental stone, then looked thoughtfully at where it had rested before using the power of the winds to teleport away.
Perhaps I can get Molok and Behemos to help me set up another trap while I'm at it...
---
   Bomberman was in a good mood. He'd freed Planet Bomber from Altair's tyranny, he'd discovered that Planet KSA5 was an awesome place to celebrate on. To top it all of he even ?found this cool pink spotted egg that he was taking back with him on this brand new spaceship.
Flying through space is pretty relaxing. Maybe I can just put the ship in autopilot and take a quick nap.
   After securing the egg haphazardly with a seatbelt, he switched autopilot on and sat down in the chair opposite to the one the egg was on. No sooner did the white bomber close his eyes, when everything began flashing red and a loud siren wailed continuously.
   "Warning! Warning! Danger ahead!" The ship's monotone voice blared repeatedly throughout the interior.
   "Oh for crying out loud!" Bomberman irritably got up and strolled back over to the steering wheel, "Computer! What is the danger?"
   "Warning! Black Hole Ahead! Begin evasive manoeuvres?"
   "Oh no!" he yelped, "AAAAAH!" Panicking, he picked up the egg and started running in circles. The ship began to rumble.
   "Are you sure you want me to shut down?"
   "No! Get us out of here!" Bomberman was hysterical now.
   "Shutting down."
   "Wait what? No!!" Bomberman cried out.
That settles it, the next spaceship I get isn't having any voice control!
   As the adrenaline drained from him and despair set in, Bomberman stopped to take a good look out of the windshield. The last thing he saw before getting thrown into a chair and losing hold of the egg was the large black hole sucking him to his doom...
~~
And there we have it. Let me know what you think, what I can do to improve etc.
EDIT: I apologize, I forgot to disable my layout first
`Once, long ago, there were seven guardians in the universe, called the Elemental Knights. These knights were responsible for protecting the universe from the likes of Sthertoth, a terrible demon who is out to destroy everything we hold dear. One day Sthertoth grew too strong for them to fight. Under the command of their goddess, they sealed her and the demon away; using their special elemental gems to do so. Then, in order to keep the seal intact, they scattered their stones to the furthest corners of the universe, and went into a deep slumber...
Now... the Stones are being collected by the mysterious Black Hole Brothers Army (or the BHB Army) for nefarious purposes.

-----
Ashtarth peeked around the corner of the ruined wall, cautiously looking for any more traps.
   Whoever hid the stone here must have been really clever, He thought to himself, I'll have to re-install some of these traps after I retrieve the wind stone.That statue one in particular had some nice touches.
   There were no traps to be seen, but a shining green gem shaped like a crescent moon floated tantalizingly on a pedestal near the back of the area.
   That's it! The wind stone!
   The green haired being peeked around one last time, before quickly dashing over to the pedestal. He slowly stretched his hand out to grab the stone, then quickly snatched the gem out of the pedestal.
   "Hmm," Ashtarth muttered aloud, "Weird, this looks like the wind stone, but it doesn't feel like it..."
   He gently tossed the gem up. However, instead of landing back in his hand, it came back down as a bomb.
   He yelped, dropped the explosive, and quickly fled around the corner.
   Once he safely heard a loud 'Boom!', he cautiously tiptoed back around the corner again and saw, to his glee, that the pedestal had blown up, revealing the true wind stone.
   The green being went to pick it up, but he felt a sudden pain in his head, and knelt down.
   "Ugh! What the-?"
   He cut himself off as he looked back at the stone. He could see himself reflected in the stone, except, something looked off...
Why is there no scouter?
   All of the Knights were forced to wear scouters, to give the Master an easy way of seeing what was going on. Or so he said. Something about this reflection made Ashtarth start to doubt whether that was its true purpose. He would have to look into things later.
Well, either way, that's mission accomplished! Now to get back to the base and inform Master.
   He gingerly picked up the elemental stone, then looked thoughtfully at where it had rested before using the power of the winds to teleport away.
Perhaps I can get Molok and Behemos to help me set up another trap while I'm at it...
---
   Bomberman was in a good mood. He'd freed Planet Bomber from Altair's tyranny, he'd discovered that Planet KSA5 was an awesome place to celebrate on. To top it all of he even ?found this cool pink spotted egg that he was taking back with him on this brand new spaceship.
Flying through space is pretty relaxing. Maybe I can just put the ship in autopilot and take a quick nap.
   After securing the egg haphazardly with a seatbelt, he switched autopilot on and sat down in the chair opposite to the one the egg was on. No sooner did the white bomber close his eyes, when everything began flashing red and a loud siren wailed continuously.
   "Warning! Warning! Danger ahead!" The ship's monotone voice blared repeatedly throughout the interior.
   "Oh for crying out loud!" Bomberman irritably got up and strolled back over to the steering wheel, "Computer! What is the danger?"
   "Warning! Black Hole Ahead! Begin evasive manoeuvres?"
   "Oh no!" he yelped, "AAAAAH!" Panicking, he picked up the egg and started running in circles. The ship began to rumble.
   "Are you sure you want me to shut down?"
   "No! Get us out of here!" Bomberman was hysterical now.
   "Shutting down."
   "Wait what? No!!" Bomberman cried out.
That settles it, the next spaceship I get isn't having any voice control!
   As the adrenaline drained from him and despair set in, Bomberman stopped to take a good look out of the windshield. The last thing he saw before getting thrown into a chair and losing hold of the egg was the large black hole sucking him to his doom...
~~
And there we have it. Let me know what you think, what I can do to improve etc.
EDIT: I apologize, I forgot to disable my layout first
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(edited by Gamin'Gal on 04-27-14 03:30 PM)     Post Rating: 2   Liked By: sonicthehedgehog57, Sword Legion,

04-27-14 03:51 PM
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Awesome job! This story is off to a exciting start. I look forward to reading more!
Awesome job! This story is off to a exciting start. I look forward to reading more!
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