Legend of greenluigi
Zoro’s Mask chapter 1:

The carnival and the weird puppet.
Meanwhile with the
Elephant Bandits… they were making another plan to destroy the vizzed heroes. It
was like a giant puppet they created. The elephant bandits:”with this puppet no
one will stop us! We should call it…. TITAN DWEEVIL! MWA HA HAAHHAHA!” for no
reason they laugh like the old villains but why those villains laugh like that?
Well let’s not worry about than anymore how about we see what’s going on in
vizzed town? Greenluigi was on a tree playing his magic flute of wind. Davideo7
along with the admins were making vizzed town even better and it had like 1 000
000 000 of people who visit it! The vizzed members were playing with some
kokiris in vizzed town. And NintendoFanKimmeh just received a letter! But from whom
it was? And she rushes to greenluigi to tell him about the letter. She yelled:”green!”
green did not listen. She repeats:”green!” he doesn’t listen and she yells
stronger:”GREEN!!!” green falls down from the tree and he said:”HEY what’s
wrong with you kimmeh!? Are you nuts?!” kimmy:”well I yelled because you weren’t
listening to me! Anyway I just received this letter have a look!” green takes
the letter by force. He smells it because to check if there was any bombs,
traps etc… he opens the letter and he reads this:”Dear vizzed heroes, we heard
that you have destroyed the evil dark force of evil and that’s great news! Not
only that because dark bowser is defeated, greenluigi you are now referred as “the
legendary sword man”! And nintendofankimmy you are now referred as “the
legendary pokemon trainer”! Well I went to ask is… would you like to enjoy some
vacations in clock town? It will be great please come please accept! Sincerely,
the Mayor Dotour.” Green said:”since when he knew about us!?” kimmy:”what makes
you think that I know!? Anyway let’s ask davideo7 if we can have a vacation in
clock town!” greenluigi and nintendofankimmy rushes to davideo7 to ask if they
can have a vacation. Davideo7 said:”from the mayor dotour?! Well of course you
can and also say hi to him from me because we where great young friends!”
greenluigi and kimmy prepares every items they have then before they go to
clock town mr. zed tells to kimmy this:”guys before you go take this rainbow
star just in case if anything happens! But use it wisely!” kimmy:”thx zed!”
green and kimmy were walking in the road and they saw some guardians. The guardians
said:”WHO ARE YOU!?” green replies:”we are the vizzed heroes! Greenluigi and
nintendofankimmy!” and the guardians laughed:”XD XD LOL HA HA HA YOU ARE THE
VIZZED HEROES YOU CHUMPS!? WELL PROVE IT!” kimmy showed them the master ball
and green showed them the magic flute of wind. Then the leader of the guardians
arrived and she said:”hey you guys you shouldn’t judge people by appearance!”
one of the guardians said:”but miss…” the leader:”NO BUTS! Anyway vizzed heroes
excuse me but you may pass to clock town.” Green and Kimmy arrived in Clock
town. They saw like a carnival. Green asked one of the people:”euh excuse me
but why is there a carnival?” they replied:”oh because it’s one of the
wonderful days! Kafei, the son of the mayor dotour has married Anju few years
ago and today they received a baby!” kimmy said:”omg congrats! Wait where we
should put our stuff?” they replied:”just put them next to the bulletin board!
Kimmeh and green put their stuffs in the bulletin board and green asked kimmy:”now
what should we do?” kimmeh said:”we just have to have some fun! Oh green THAT’S
A SILLY QUESTION!” oh look there’s a sword competition! Let’s go!” the mayor
dotour arrived and he said:”ladies and gentleman I finally became a grandpa and
my wife a grandma. Now the sword competition will begin. If somebody wins he or
she will be able to hug the baby now GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!” green:”THAT’S THE
PRIZE!? THERE’S NO WAY I’LL… kimmy punched green:”oh come on green! Be a
gentleman for once!” she took green’s sword of vizzed and she said:”look ha ya!
See? You have to do this!” then the mayor dotour saw her and he thought that
she was a sword woman and he said:”you’re strong enough so compete!” kimmeh
said:”wait my cousin is a sword man not me I was just testing his sword!” the
mayor dotour:”NO BUTS! Anyway go to the first round!” green said:”XD LOL KIMMY
YOU’RE GOING TO LOSE!” kimmeh said:”BUT MY COUSIN IS 1000X BETTER THAN ME IN
SWORD!” green said:”wait a minute kimmy doesn’t know how to use the sword of
vizzed! Nobody can master it except me! Well at least this will be fun nierck
nierck…” the mayor dotour:”okay first round kimmy vs stingmo! Ready and….
BEGIN!” kimmy was running away because she doesn’t know how to use a sword. Stingmo
said:”well give up you coward!” kimmy said:”GREEN CATCH!” she throws the sword
of vizzed in the air and green caught it he said:”kimmy this is your fight not
mine!” stingmo then charges at greenluigi. Green:”you went me? YOU GOT ME!” he
does his tornado sword and he easily beats stingmo. The mayor dotour said on
himself:”that green sure has talent I think he will possibly win…” Suddenly a
huge puppet with claws appeared. The mayor dotour:”AHH THE COMPETITION WILL BE
CANCELLED FROM NOW ON NOW LET’S GET OUT OF HERE!! Kimmeh said:” oh man so big
puppet wanna dance? LET’S DANCE!” the elephant bandits from up:”because of the
gbckhskbjradar we were able to find the vizzed heroes here so we will control
that puppet and destroy them!” kimmeh sends out her scythe and green prepares
the sword of vizzed and the shield of vizzed. The giant puppet was about to cut
kimmeh’s hair but she falls because she’s good at falling. Falling its good for
dodging. Then green comes from behind and he punches the puppet’s face. But it
did no damage so he grabs and the puppet uses eyes lasers but green grabs his
hand and he says:”how about we get a little serious little man?!” green goes
fire greenluigi and he burns the puppet’s hand which cause it no damage… green
said:”ma ma mi aim doomed!” but kimmeh saw something that was controlling the
puppet and she said:”wait a minute IT’S A PUPPET! Scythe cut the ropes that its
controlling it!” scythe cuts the ropes and the puppet is now off. The elephant
bandits:” oh uh we’re doomed!” green sees the elephant bandits from up and he
jumps in front of them. He says:”looks like somebody is ready to burn…” then
one of the elephant bandits took a gun and he shoot it in the sky. Green says:”do
you think this will help you to kill me?! Well SAY ADIOS!” he blasts them away
with a fire ball. Then kimmy smells something funny it was that clock town was
in fire! Because one of the elephant bandits shot in the sky and that little
fire thing in the gun did some damage in clock town. Green said:”oh man! NOW
WHAT!?” the people returned:”oh no this is horrible! We’re doomed!” kimmeh
said:”don’t panic you guys my lugia will use hydro pump to clear the fire! Anju
said:”but wait… MY BABY IS ON THE SWORD COMPETITION’S ROOM! MY BABY IS ON
DANGER!” green runs to the room he says:”I’LL BRING THE BABY!” kimmy:”green no
its too dangerous!” green arrived on the room and he sees a baby crying. He grabs
the baby and he flew away before the room destructs itself. Kafei said:”thank
you young sword man for saving our baby. Her name is Iris.” Green said:”okay
then iris.” Lugia cleared all of the fire. Green throws a 1up mushroom at the
damage houses and buildings and of course the competition. The mayor dotour:”now
we can finally resume the competition!” the competition is resumed and it looks
like green won! Green:”omg I knew it I will win this was so easy like as if I was
challenging the elephant bandits.” Kimmeh said:”yay you won green!” green face
palmed:”now I have to hug iris : (!” he came and he hugs iris. Iris takes green’s
hat green says:”HEY THAT’S MY HAT!” iris starts ruffling green’s hair. Anju
starts laughing:”it seems like iris likes you! Its ok if iris keeps that hat
for one night? Green screamed like a girl:”FOR ONE NIGHT! ABSOLUTLEY NOT! IM
NOTHING WITHOUT MY HAT! IM NOT FABULOUS, AND IM NOT A MAN LIKE THIS!” kimmy
punches green:”GREEN! Please don’t cause a drama…” green:”fine you can have it
ONLY FOR ONE NIGHT!” anju smiled:”thank you! We promise tomorrow your hat will
be just fine.” The mayor dotour said:”now let me show you your house and your
bedrooms!” kimmy:”SWEET!” they took their stuffs from the bulletin board and
the mayor dotour shows them their houses and their bedrooms. Kimmy and green
takes a shower. Kimmy has finished but green not. She said:”strange it’s the first
time im done before green.” Then she heard a smoke coming from green’s shower
and she screamed:”AHHHH GREEN! YOU….. SMOKE!?!?” green:”yeah do you have a
problem?! Kimmeh starts beating greenluigi up. She said:”TELL ME ANOTHER TIME
WHEN YOU SMOKED!” he said:”in the kokiri planet after I locked the phantom door
I smoked and the battle against giga bowser when he knocked me down, I smocked.”
Kimmy:”WHY YOU… well its ok why im mad anyway!?” green faints and he said:”nevermind
let’s go to sleep…

greenluigi : Not bad! But could you space out your work more? It seems pretty weird seeing someone squish writing.

But still, nice work! Love it so far.

Black Bot : it took me too much time to write the first chapter i'll be more careful next time

greenluigi : That is fine! No problem. It's just a little hard to read if your reading it from my perspective.

It's good to see young people being so creative, keep up the good work.

greenluigi : IAM SO EXCITED FOR ALL OF THE CHAPTERS! great work

greenluigi : wow  Drama Llama it's just a hat XD^^ haha this was funny and are you sure your the only one who can master the sword of Vizzed glad theres another story to read can't wait for the next chapter and this one was really long