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Ultra heroes (original story) chapter 1

 

03-07-14 10:53 AM
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Ultra heroes
(original story) chapter 1:

the story about the ultra heroes before they protect lumiose city.
A young man wears a
blue suit, a mighty horn blue helmet, along with a buster also known as the x
buster. His name is jimmy. He founded his enemies “the mavericks” and he used
his phone to contact his friends that he founded them. He contacts paul and rex,
his friends. He said on the phone:”paul I founded the mavericks!” paul
said:”good job well im facing their leader! Rex is in another tower fighting
the other maverick group!” Paul wears a purple saber sword, a purple helmet and
a purple scouter. Rex wears a green suit, a green helmet and green guns. Jimmy
used his x buster and he shot all of the mavericks and he recontact paul:”Paul
I beat all of the mavericks! I’ll come help you!” jimmy rushes for paul’s help.
Paul and jimmy kills the mavericks’s leader and they both rush to rex. They killed
the remaining mavericks. Rex said:”Missio complete return to the base!” they
returned to their base. They opened their computer, the computer which is
VINdows 8 it can say the new mission at a speed of light. The computer says:”Your
new mission is to defeat bamboo pandemonium because he is burning the jungle!”
the three heroes said:”alright let’s a go!”
Ultra heroes
(original story) chapter 1:

the story about the ultra heroes before they protect lumiose city.
A young man wears a
blue suit, a mighty horn blue helmet, along with a buster also known as the x
buster. His name is jimmy. He founded his enemies “the mavericks” and he used
his phone to contact his friends that he founded them. He contacts paul and rex,
his friends. He said on the phone:”paul I founded the mavericks!” paul
said:”good job well im facing their leader! Rex is in another tower fighting
the other maverick group!” Paul wears a purple saber sword, a purple helmet and
a purple scouter. Rex wears a green suit, a green helmet and green guns. Jimmy
used his x buster and he shot all of the mavericks and he recontact paul:”Paul
I beat all of the mavericks! I’ll come help you!” jimmy rushes for paul’s help.
Paul and jimmy kills the mavericks’s leader and they both rush to rex. They killed
the remaining mavericks. Rex said:”Missio complete return to the base!” they
returned to their base. They opened their computer, the computer which is
VINdows 8 it can say the new mission at a speed of light. The computer says:”Your
new mission is to defeat bamboo pandemonium because he is burning the jungle!”
the three heroes said:”alright let’s a go!”
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greenluigi : agh you have so many good stories to read why? i liked this chapter hope it will unfold a little more in the next chapter
greenluigi : agh you have so many good stories to read why? i liked this chapter hope it will unfold a little more in the next chapter
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Nice new story there, Green! I don't see why you thought I wouldn't enjoy it. It's fantastic! The Mavericks, eh? Funny. It doesn't get underlined red when I type it in. Oh, that's right. It's a basketball team! Nice little idea. "Let's a go!" That was cute.

Anyway, this story has potential, and don't think I missed the Paul. Jimmy, Rex, and Paul all sound pretty cool to me. Can't wait until they make history. This is going to get exciting, I can feel, and I already anticipate the next events despite how little I know about this story.


I can't wait until the plot and details unfold, because I have a feeling this is going to be marvelous! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, Green. Good job.
Nice new story there, Green! I don't see why you thought I wouldn't enjoy it. It's fantastic! The Mavericks, eh? Funny. It doesn't get underlined red when I type it in. Oh, that's right. It's a basketball team! Nice little idea. "Let's a go!" That was cute.

Anyway, this story has potential, and don't think I missed the Paul. Jimmy, Rex, and Paul all sound pretty cool to me. Can't wait until they make history. This is going to get exciting, I can feel, and I already anticipate the next events despite how little I know about this story.


I can't wait until the plot and details unfold, because I have a feeling this is going to be marvelous! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, Green. Good job.
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NintendoFanKimmy : actually i took the mavericks from the mega man x series lol and also i never knew that a basketball team was called "mavericks".
NintendoFanKimmy : actually i took the mavericks from the mega man x series lol and also i never knew that a basketball team was called "mavericks".
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Awesome story!! Never knew you had another story theN legend of green but it's nice!
Awesome story!! Never knew you had another story theN legend of green but it's nice!
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