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Tribulations chapter 4

 

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Kyro: gah ha! As I pant loudly who are you?
you forgot me? Hey I thought we were budds?
Kyro: ( me friends with people man was I an idiot when I was a kid).....hmm...uh!(that face it cant be) Riley?
 
Chapter 4 I didn't want others to get hurt by this. in these later chapters i will switch the character's perspectives on the story so hopefully you can figure who's it is.
 
Yatishi Residence 8:30PM

As I ran home from the clubhouse thinking aw man that was a close one. Good thing they didn't get too suspicious.
I get home and do my homework eat my dinner play on the computer take a shower and sleep getting ready for another dream. Sadly nothing happened I thought it was a little odd. But I knew it would be a good idea to sleep a bit more.

Kitchen 8:30 AM Trina's perspective.

Trina: Mom hasn't Kyro been acting strange lately?
Mom: hasn't that boy always been a mystery as she sighs.
Trina: I think I'll go check on him.
Right then a bird crashes through the window driving straight into Trina's head as she screams in pain as blood starts to pour from her head. And the bird explodes.
Mom: Trina?! As she puts her on the couch and gets a warm wash cloth and gauze to help stop the bleeding. then she starts to regain herself
Trina: ugh my head she groans i can't see where i am.
Mom: Trina Trina do you remember anything tell me who are you what happened?
Trina: my name is Trina Yatishi age twenty-one i have long blackish-brown hair and i have blue eyes. um i was attacked by a bird. as she starts to fully get the concept. and the pain comes back ugh! she groans
Mom: phew she sighs it's a good thing your alright dear i hope you'll feel better soon can you stand are you able to wake Kyro up for school or he'll be late.
Trina: Yes Mom as i start to climb the steps they seemed to feel interminable. as i reach Kyro's door.
character switch Kyro
hmm this mask feel a bit odd as i feel it and my finger goes right through it gah! what the heck as i back up knocking into a cup of water and it spills all over the mask and the colors start to fade away how did this happen.

Last night Clubhouse 9:00 Rita's perspective.
Dando: hehe as he pulls a mask from his pocket
Rita: i gasp Dando you stole one of Kyro's masks ( What's he thinking i told him not to touch them they seem evil. oh Kyro what have you gotten into) 
Tachi: it's alright Rita Kyro won't mind unless he figures out he has a fake. as he pat Dando and Dando drops the mask
Dando: opps Tachi watch what your doing as all of them try to pick it up which they shouldn't have they see the dark abyss of weird figures and voices and blood everywhere. as they all wake up gasping for air like they weren't ale to breath. 
Rita: gah hah as i try to breath i didn't know what to think on what i saw. i knew this was a bad idea and we needed to find Kyro and quick. 
Kyro's room 9:00 AM
i start to hear footsteps approaching aw crap gotta hide them.
Trina: Kyro she knocks and starts to walk in.
i put all the masks away but one. i grab it but i slipped on the watery slippery ground and it tosses into the air. having Trina catching 
Kyro: No! Trina!
Trina: what it's just a ....... as she falls to the ground. 
Kyro: no i i i didn't want this to happen as i turn her over to she her eyes are dark and cloudly and i start to wildly shake her 
Kyro: wake up dang it wake up now!
Trina's dream.
hello young man how are you doing
Boy: fine sir just finding my way home.
Figure: let me help you.
Boy: okay.
Trina: huh what is this place. as i follow the figure and the boy into the house and wish i didn't
as the man turns into this weird monster biting off the kids head off in front of his parents blood going everywhere as it uses it's nails to jab right into the mother and bit off some of her the dad tried to fight back getting his head chopped off. just leaving them there dead but painting the house with their blood.
Trina: i start to gag and cough. and blink waking up in Kyro's arms screaming my name it seemed.
Kyro: wake up you dummy wake up! 
Trina: Kyro! as my sister starts to cry her face i haven't felt this happy since i was a kid. but not happy enough to shed a single tear for her.
after i comforted her we went to school together today. as we walk the dark foggy path. 
Dear readers: sounds like a mystery doesn't it. back to the story.
we got to school fine. but into a big problem
Kyro: (hmm that's odd no dream in a while something isn't right that's for sure Trina still looks pretty scared from that thing that happened to her i wonder what she saw?)
Kyro: hey let's do some classes together since you still look pretty shaken
Trina: sure right.
School 13:00 PM
after all of our classes it was finally lunch me and Trina walked outside to the playset where the kindergardners played. we sat down when
Dando: Kyro! there you are
Tachi i'm gonna get you!
Rita: guys don't scare him let's be reasonable come on wait for me anyway!
Kyro the hell is this.
as we all turn around due to a big shadow looming over us and we see a giant just staring at us
Kyro: gah as i choke out some of my food. and feel something on my back to see my sword is back but but how i didn't fall asleep this time.
Dando: Wah! the school it's all messed up!
as we see the school as it looks like it's been abandoned for years. and is falling apart. then we hear this child humming and it's a little boy named Karol who walks past the giant not noticing it waving to us then realizing there is something behind him but it was too late for the child's fate.
as we all stare in horror as the giant picks Karol up by his feet and bit him in half blood getting everywhere some splatting on my shirt. and swallows him whole then Roars.
Rita: what is that what happened to poor Karol.
Kyro: i stare petrified not being able to move (Hey! Wake Up Kyro! hurry! yell Rift beam by slashing your sword in a circular motion now.
as that voice knocked me into my senses.
Kyro: Rift Circle as these beams of air from these holes in the ground keep attacking the Giant as it's getting hit it starts to lose limb as the limbs are taken by the Rifts and the giant is no more. as for Karol half of him is on the ground. 
Kyro: What! is this! i scream from the top of my lungs i didn't know others would get hurt i don't anybody to be hurt no!

that chapter was fun.

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Kyro: gah ha! As I pant loudly who are you?
you forgot me? Hey I thought we were budds?
Kyro: ( me friends with people man was I an idiot when I was a kid).....hmm...uh!(that face it cant be) Riley?
 
Chapter 4 I didn't want others to get hurt by this. in these later chapters i will switch the character's perspectives on the story so hopefully you can figure who's it is.
 
Yatishi Residence 8:30PM

As I ran home from the clubhouse thinking aw man that was a close one. Good thing they didn't get too suspicious.
I get home and do my homework eat my dinner play on the computer take a shower and sleep getting ready for another dream. Sadly nothing happened I thought it was a little odd. But I knew it would be a good idea to sleep a bit more.

Kitchen 8:30 AM Trina's perspective.

Trina: Mom hasn't Kyro been acting strange lately?
Mom: hasn't that boy always been a mystery as she sighs.
Trina: I think I'll go check on him.
Right then a bird crashes through the window driving straight into Trina's head as she screams in pain as blood starts to pour from her head. And the bird explodes.
Mom: Trina?! As she puts her on the couch and gets a warm wash cloth and gauze to help stop the bleeding. then she starts to regain herself
Trina: ugh my head she groans i can't see where i am.
Mom: Trina Trina do you remember anything tell me who are you what happened?
Trina: my name is Trina Yatishi age twenty-one i have long blackish-brown hair and i have blue eyes. um i was attacked by a bird. as she starts to fully get the concept. and the pain comes back ugh! she groans
Mom: phew she sighs it's a good thing your alright dear i hope you'll feel better soon can you stand are you able to wake Kyro up for school or he'll be late.
Trina: Yes Mom as i start to climb the steps they seemed to feel interminable. as i reach Kyro's door.
character switch Kyro
hmm this mask feel a bit odd as i feel it and my finger goes right through it gah! what the heck as i back up knocking into a cup of water and it spills all over the mask and the colors start to fade away how did this happen.

Last night Clubhouse 9:00 Rita's perspective.
Dando: hehe as he pulls a mask from his pocket
Rita: i gasp Dando you stole one of Kyro's masks ( What's he thinking i told him not to touch them they seem evil. oh Kyro what have you gotten into) 
Tachi: it's alright Rita Kyro won't mind unless he figures out he has a fake. as he pat Dando and Dando drops the mask
Dando: opps Tachi watch what your doing as all of them try to pick it up which they shouldn't have they see the dark abyss of weird figures and voices and blood everywhere. as they all wake up gasping for air like they weren't ale to breath. 
Rita: gah hah as i try to breath i didn't know what to think on what i saw. i knew this was a bad idea and we needed to find Kyro and quick. 
Kyro's room 9:00 AM
i start to hear footsteps approaching aw crap gotta hide them.
Trina: Kyro she knocks and starts to walk in.
i put all the masks away but one. i grab it but i slipped on the watery slippery ground and it tosses into the air. having Trina catching 
Kyro: No! Trina!
Trina: what it's just a ....... as she falls to the ground. 
Kyro: no i i i didn't want this to happen as i turn her over to she her eyes are dark and cloudly and i start to wildly shake her 
Kyro: wake up dang it wake up now!
Trina's dream.
hello young man how are you doing
Boy: fine sir just finding my way home.
Figure: let me help you.
Boy: okay.
Trina: huh what is this place. as i follow the figure and the boy into the house and wish i didn't
as the man turns into this weird monster biting off the kids head off in front of his parents blood going everywhere as it uses it's nails to jab right into the mother and bit off some of her the dad tried to fight back getting his head chopped off. just leaving them there dead but painting the house with their blood.
Trina: i start to gag and cough. and blink waking up in Kyro's arms screaming my name it seemed.
Kyro: wake up you dummy wake up! 
Trina: Kyro! as my sister starts to cry her face i haven't felt this happy since i was a kid. but not happy enough to shed a single tear for her.
after i comforted her we went to school together today. as we walk the dark foggy path. 
Dear readers: sounds like a mystery doesn't it. back to the story.
we got to school fine. but into a big problem
Kyro: (hmm that's odd no dream in a while something isn't right that's for sure Trina still looks pretty scared from that thing that happened to her i wonder what she saw?)
Kyro: hey let's do some classes together since you still look pretty shaken
Trina: sure right.
School 13:00 PM
after all of our classes it was finally lunch me and Trina walked outside to the playset where the kindergardners played. we sat down when
Dando: Kyro! there you are
Tachi i'm gonna get you!
Rita: guys don't scare him let's be reasonable come on wait for me anyway!
Kyro the hell is this.
as we all turn around due to a big shadow looming over us and we see a giant just staring at us
Kyro: gah as i choke out some of my food. and feel something on my back to see my sword is back but but how i didn't fall asleep this time.
Dando: Wah! the school it's all messed up!
as we see the school as it looks like it's been abandoned for years. and is falling apart. then we hear this child humming and it's a little boy named Karol who walks past the giant not noticing it waving to us then realizing there is something behind him but it was too late for the child's fate.
as we all stare in horror as the giant picks Karol up by his feet and bit him in half blood getting everywhere some splatting on my shirt. and swallows him whole then Roars.
Rita: what is that what happened to poor Karol.
Kyro: i stare petrified not being able to move (Hey! Wake Up Kyro! hurry! yell Rift beam by slashing your sword in a circular motion now.
as that voice knocked me into my senses.
Kyro: Rift Circle as these beams of air from these holes in the ground keep attacking the Giant as it's getting hit it starts to lose limb as the limbs are taken by the Rifts and the giant is no more. as for Karol half of him is on the ground. 
Kyro: What! is this! i scream from the top of my lungs i didn't know others would get hurt i don't anybody to be hurt no!

that chapter was fun.

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Hey, it looks good and its a nic length for a chapter. i cant wait to see more.
Hey, it looks good and its a nic length for a chapter. i cant wait to see more.
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