I know this is a good game, and I will buy it, but thousand year door was perfect. I LOVED it. It was my first, and still my favorite RPG. I remember waking up early before school to play it. Sometimes at 4 in the morning, and then falling asleep on the couch and missing school completely. That kind of magic I have not found in a game since.
I love the Mario RPG series (Super Paper Mario notwithstanding) I'm currently inclined to pass on this game. Badges were my favorite part of the Paper Mario series and I hate to see them completely abandoned in favor of an arbitrary choice.Good game-just as charming as you'd want a Paper Mario, but if this game could be remembered by one word, I think it would be "pointless." Some of the game's central elements feel meaningless or forced, and it's disappointing that other elements that made the previous Mario RPGs so great have been completely stripped away. Still, I'm enjoying it. Thnx

Most of this review you were talking about your experiences with this game not detail about the game itself. You should put it in to the categories you rated above and talk about each topic in their own column. You really need to make this review longer and not get distracted as much in the review.

This review needed to be longer. It was too short. Instead of saying how you wanted to future proof yourself of beating the game, and just submitting the votes of the game and not explaining why, I think you should take those advices in consideration and elaborate more.

asdren : While this review meets all the requirements, you should think about making future reviews longer. Also you should add more detail to your reviews as well. Other than that good job on this review.

This game review could have been better especially when you didn't write enough for it to be a legit game review. You didn't meet the length requirements.

First of all, you should split parts of a game to talk about each of their aspects. Most game reviews on this website normally split their sections with gameplay, graphics, sound, difficulty, storyline, and addictiveness. That way, your game review can flow smooth and readers can get a general idea of each component of a game. Do not overfluff your game review on saying how a game is the best without backing it up with crucial details on why you like the game. Some people tend to do this and it can drive off people away at times in general. In a typical game review, details and length play important roles and it is important to keep your readers informed on games that they may have played or may have not played. I never played this game but I remember playing part of Paper Mario from the Wii and I didn't like it. However, you must convince me and other people on why others should play this game that you are basically advertising as a game review. That way, you can change a person's mind and maybe persuade them to play this game.

You are off to a little good start though.

Improve more by following the feedback of others because they can help you shed a light on what you can improve on when making a better game review. Remember that and don't give up on making more game reviews in better quality in the future!