The game is just amazing,and in HD its even better.The game offers hours of fun and challenges. The addictiveness of the game leaves you wanting to play it again and again.The story is pretty simple,your sister is kidnapped and you have to save her.The graphics are just amazing.The original game graphics were an 7-8,but this HD version is a instant 10!The difficulty comes from the enemys and collectibles.What you collect are feathers,eggs,jiggys,honeycombs and more!By more i'm also talking about the abilitys that Banjo and Kazooie can learn from bottels the mole.The main worlds are Mumbo's Mountain, Treasure Trove Cove, Clanker's Cavern, Bubblegloop Swamp, Freezeezy Peak, Gobi's Valley, Mad Monster Mansion, Rusty Bucket Bay,and Click Clock Wood.Thats my review.I'm done here.See ya!I forgot my wallet.Who stole it!Oh, a penny!Aww, it was just a dime... wait! Heres my wallet!Fert.

In all honesty, this review wasn't that good.
Divide the review into catagories like:
Graphics: score here
text here
Also, what's up with that wallet part? Or the fact that you listed all the worlds, which was completly unneeded.
It feels as though you added that just to get your review up to 100 words.

hmm wow that sounds fun!!! I'll have to check that one out looks fun and sounds fun thanks for recommending this!!!

This review was not good. You really need to add more detail into the game and by that I do not mean listing some of the pointless things in your review that you did. I mean talking about the game in great detail.

i know every body is thinking what i am. next time use lot's more details split the subjects in categories. okay hope this helps you. find david's review making thread to help you.

I am glad you liked this game but everyone here is right. This is not a proper review. It doesn't have nearly enough information to be one and seemed forced to hit a word limit. The best reviews on this site are done by people who loved the game they are talking about. Take the time to read some of the reviews on other games on this site and see how they have done it. Also as was said go look at the requirements for a review post. Don't worry everyone starts somewhere and don't give up!