i had no idea that i was messing up so let's just make this fun by me ordering you what to do yeah!
Okay we did all of our boring stuff now let's start on the hopeful fun.
alright let's leave the crusaders lodge we are done there guess what secret treasure alert. okay you see the dark map piece of the map when you are right next to the lodge see it? okay see the overgrown grass there go right through it. A little destroyed tent has three treasures for us. okay the one on the bottom is a Hi-Potion the top one is 2 Potions the middle treasure is 400 gil yes! now let's go into the house on the bottom left. the lady sells us  some Items like Potions, Phoenix Down, and Antidotes good ones for the beginning of the game now let's leave as we have nice amounts. right now your Items should be 9 Potions 4 and 4 of Phoenix Downs and Antidotes now we head to back to Wakka's house which is the middle right. he asks for you if you want a nap say yes duh. huh! whats this who is the man talking to Wakka he tells Wakka to see how some people are doing. then Wakka says something about not being allowed to interfear with something. little suspish. no! they walk out of the house. now Tidus wakes up finally. Flashback time! some people are talking about searching for someone its seems that we are seeing Tidus's mom and him in his childhood. and as usual Tidus is acting like a snob. he saying he doesnt care about who the chiz this guy is. Mom: this guy is probably going to die oh no. woah Tidus says let him die then. ouch feel bad for this dude. she asks if he hates this guy. (No tidus loves this guy from his attitude) tidus shakes his head yes. his mom says if he dies Tidus can't tell him how much he hates him. now we wake up from the flashback. oh no Wakka is missing let's find him back to the temple guys first let's save in the lodge. forgot to explain this to you the keyosk thingy computer looking thing shows you all the tutorials and rules also controls helpful correct? and you ask the lady to sleep there if you like just a waste of time though. temple time! Tidus asks if something is wrong. so a summoner hasn't returned from it's trial thing. so we learn there is a room in the place where the priest wouldn't let us enter. called the cloister of trials. where i guess the apprentice summoner has to pray. so if their prayer is heard by who knows what they become a fully fledged summoner person and can defeat sin yesh! now Tidus finally get's whats going on and asks if it's dangerous i there. Wakka says sometimes which doesnt help. and the apprentice has guardians? and you're not allowed to disturb them. and Tidus acting stupidly runs in there. and says what if the summoner dies?! then the dang priest says the precpt must be obeyed. then Tidus like i care and now we are entering the trial listen! CLOSELY! this place can get a little annoying. now a little talk from the narrator. Maybe this wasnt such a good idea after all. YAY! tutorial on how the trials work. okay so we need to finish every puzzle correctly  to get to the chamber of the fayth. talk to the door. now a werid symbol appears on the wall to out right. go and touch it oo a hole in the wall talk to the pedistall on at the bottom of the stairs it says we need a sphere to go any further now we learn about the kinds of spheres. Glyph spheres open the way to the chamber of the fayth. Destruction spheres lead to hidden rare treasures. and it seems Besaid spheres are also necessary. now we pick up a Glyph sphere and we are only allowed to hold one sphere at a time. now we go to the exact bottom of the stairs and put our sphere in the door. you can take the sphere back from the door you know. keep running until you see writing on the wall on the left of you well it takes like 7 steps to get there. put the sphere in it. go in the hole grab the Destruction sphere. go further on put the destruction sphere in the pedistal thing now we have access to a Besaid sphere. take it. put in the place where you got the Destruction sphere now go back to the Destruction sphere now put it in the place where you got the Besaid sphere yay now we can get a treasure. get out of the hole go up then take a right turn open up the treasure for a Rod of Wisdom a rare weapon for one of out characters we get later. now it tells us that we can get rare weapons using Destruction spheres. now get back the Besaid sphere put it on the pedistall on the left from the where our Destruction sphere is. and the wall turns into a path way. now we push the pedistall okay we have to move it to the correct place. and that shiny thing on the ground is a restarter it puts everything back where it belongs so if you mess up use it. just keep pushing it forward until it goes in the hole in the ground. now Wakka finally caught up to us. and asks us whats wrong with us but it's okay? whaa he says only summoners and apprentices and their guradians? are allowed to enter. it's tradition. and Tidus asks what about you. then Shocker Wakka is a Guardian woah!! now we go down on a circle elevator thing. now Wakka explains to us what Guardians are. okay so these summoner people go on these pilgrimage things to pray? at every temple in Spira. and Guardians protect them. now he talks about the other two Guardians one has a short fuse and no one has any idea what the other thinks. now he says well we have already went to far might as well finish whats coming. now we enter a room with a tiger guy and a snobby gothic lady. she asks why Wakka is here that he thinks that she and the tiger couldn't handle things here. no...duh..uh he studders horribly. oh no she sees us ah! Wakka: see i told you. Tidus: is the summoner alright. Who are you? dun dun dun. what? a girl comes out of the room anime cutscene. she be all sweaty and falles down the stairs. then the tiger saves her. she stands up and smiles and says i did it i have become a summoner. no narrator time. Man was i surprised and here i was thinking all summoners were all old geezers ( ouch that was offensive to some people) run out of the temple. Wakka tells us to come over to where he is. and then he grabs us by the neck and drags us over to where the summoner is. and says wait till you see this. he smacks Wakka away saying he can't see anything at all. now we see the summoner summon a creature. all these lights and stuff and the creature looks cool. then she pets it. narrator says it was strange but he could sense a strange gentleness coming from it. now we name the Aeon Valefor Aeons are the summons in this game. narrator I remember that night we talked for the first time. I didnt know it then but that night everything changed. For everyone for me. now it's night time at the bonfire in the square. now Wakka want to introduce us to the blitzball team and says our memory is a little fuzzy so don't take mind if he says something odd. say hi Tidus asks whats our goal? they say to do our best! Wakka: nope new goal our new goal is victory! to win every match and beat every team  to bring the cup to our island. now they annoyingly chant victory! and Tidus stares at the summoner (creeper) she looks back smiling finally no more chanting. now go to the summoner to get ridiculed by old people. You heathen! Stay away from the summoner you're a bad man! Lady Yuna be careful Yuna: it was my fault to begin with anyway. I'm Yuna thanks for the help earlier. Tidus: sorry. i guess i wasnt supposed to do that. ( I will say the minified version of what they are saying. or not say it att all) she says she was overconfident Tidus: i say the Aeon thing that is Amazing. Really? she asks you think i could be a high summoner ( they are the best) yes he nods his head. Dumb child: Lady Yuna play with me more. she nods her head yes. so tomorrow then. huh? we are going on the sane boat right? we can talk more. yuo can tell me all about Zanarkand. Waait hold on how does she know about that! Wakka asks shes cute ya? you can choose Yeah! or She's not my type. choose eitheir it doesn;t effect the story. ten he says hey when you get tired tell me. AKA talk to him now. tell him yeah to go to bed. and then we have a Flashback Tidus wakes up on this platform run to Yuna on the top of the platform whers the boat? everyone will find us if it doesn't come soon. can you take me to Zanarkand? Rikku: Hey! you said you'd go with me. oh no Jecht invaded Tidus's dream saying stop dreaming. you with a women you cant catch a ball. cry cry thats all you're good for. Tidus: I hate you. huh? what you say? Yuna: you have to speak louder. I hate you! Jecht: wha? Rikku: good job thats the spirit. then yuna says you can do it ( do what? ) waking up screaming i hate you! and Wakka is talking to that mean lady. she says hes dead. he does look like Chappu you shouldn'y have brought him here. thats it enough Wakka! then storms away, then Wakka walks in Tidus says Scary! who is Chappu. My little bro he looks like you. was killed by Sin. okay we go to sleep now Wakka gives us a Sword named the Brotherhood Lulu: you need all that stuff she tells Yuna as then she agrees with Lulu and leaves all her stuff now we leave and learn some intresting things about the fiends like that Tidus can't really damage flying enemies but Wakka can and both them can't really damage flans so we get a tutorial on Magic and fiends. so both of them have elements like this Fire and water defeat each other like Lightning and Water deafeat each other good got it. let's defeat some fiends. now in the main menu we can check our Aeon's stats which gain with Yuna's stats. when leveled in the sphere grid. Lulu: tells us to take our time. now let's go to the statue with Wakka and pray with him. now save! now we get into a battle with the tiger. use cheer a few times then attack wathc out when he does the jump ability. use a Potion then Wakaa stops the battle. Lulu: Kimahri Ronso of the Ronso tribe. he can learn the powers of fiends. now let's keep going on the trail and we gain a S.level i think. use all three levels to get some stat boosts and the flee ability, now get into another battle and we have Yuna defeat this enemy by summoning. use L1 to switch Tidus out for Yuna and Aeons Have abilities and Stats just like us use sonic wings and use it again then use attack then sonic wings normal attack and do what you want for the rest of the battle don't waste your overdrive. run back and save and that's it thanks for reading guys. 

Not a bad guide. It has a fair amount of detail and it is straightforward. 

What I can suggest though it is make some spacing and divide it into paragraphs and fix some grammar and spelling errors. Other than that, keep it up!