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01-09-14 09:05 PM

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The graphics are very well done. DarkRisingGirl and her staff have done a very good job, though it ends before it was meant to end. I think it having the 6th generation on a GBA emulator is a very nice touch. As for the story its pretty good, There are some bugs like in the 4th gym after about 4 battles the fifth trainer it blue screens so battle 4 then continue to gym leader. I'm not sure if it happens to everyone but that's what happened to me. This game is very addictive in my opinion. It is pretty difficult but gets pretty easy as you progress and get the hang of the game. The music is excellent addition very nicely added and smooth. The game itself is nice some glitches here and there but a very good game I'd recommend playing it.

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01-09-14 09:20 PM

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This review was not the best but you should get better over time. I would recommend making categories to put each topic under like this

graphics:
then put the words you want here.

If you do that with each thing you need to talk about it will look professional and will also be much easier to read then just packing all the words into one box sort of thing.You also need to add more detail like what makes the game good. These are the most common mistakes people have with their first review though. Just fix those things and you could have a good review.

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01-09-14 09:43 PM

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Not bad on this review, I think awesome guy gave some good advice though, just make sure to separate the review and break it down into categories such as graphics and sound, etc. once you do that, then you can go from there with what you have to say for each category. Spacing is also important too, although it isn't required, I think it looks more professional if it is spaced out and broken down.

Overall, all I can say if you want to get better at this is to keep at it. You only get better through practice, the more frequently you review, the sooner you'll master it. Keep up the great work and keep reviewing man!