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Poke Story Ch.1 : The beggining

 

12-28-13 01:44 PM
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Ch.1
As I awakened to my surprise I laded on my head on the floor note to self don't sleep walk I said aloud. What is it honey my mother shouted from down the hall. I slept walked again suddenly I realized why I slept walked my mind was thinking of Professor Sequoia giving me my Pokémon I then ran to grab my clothes changed in a flurry and rushed to the lab without telling my mother then she followed me In her night gown asking me where I was going but it would take too long to answer so I just started sprinting towards the lab as I did I bumped into Xhero my arch nemesis we were like two sides of a quarter I was heads because I was very smart and tidy he was tails because of his brute size and strength . As I fell onto my back he screamed at me what was that you little jerk he yelled and grabbed me by my jacket collar I then weaseled out of the jacket to reveal my pale blue t-shirt and started sprinting however all I could here behind me was my mother beating Xhero to a pulp me still sprinting was the first to the lab because even professor sequoia wasn't there yet I was an hour early awh dangit I  said sitting next to the lab door well Matt you can think about your starter while waiting for the senile old guy to show up. My region Broto (I know dumb name right) have all the Pokémon from the first 5 generations and a few from the 6 the generation (because I only know like 4 of them) As I awaited I thought about the 3 starters tododile chimchar and turtwig I thought and though because these were my favorite Pokémon equally. However when it came down to it me a scrawny pale boy with brown hair most resembled a ratata because it is weak and scrawny like me. Then I thought to myself I will meet the starters and meet the one that was most like me. As professor sequoia appeared xhero and my mother were right behind him then I saw professor sequoia walk up to me and ask why I was so early I answered with its Pokémon gees why wouldn't I be early. Then he opened the doors and in me and xhero went and my mother said come back to the house before you leave for the journey. As I walked in I realized Professor Sequoia said Mat you may pick 2 starters because there are 2 of you in the town and 3 starters and because my grandson really hurt you and ohh here's your jacket back he said. I caught the jacket and said thank you and grabbed tododile and turtwig suddenly xhero snatched turtwig out of my hand and screamed this ones mine suddenly I jumped on his shoulder bit his ear and caught turtwigs pokeball no he's mine I said calmly. Then I said sorry to professer Seqouia for hurting his grandson and he responded whispering thank you for doing that I'm terrified of him. Then I walked out put my jacket on and said this is gonna be a great adventure then told my mother goodbye and walked on to route 1.
Ch.1
As I awakened to my surprise I laded on my head on the floor note to self don't sleep walk I said aloud. What is it honey my mother shouted from down the hall. I slept walked again suddenly I realized why I slept walked my mind was thinking of Professor Sequoia giving me my Pokémon I then ran to grab my clothes changed in a flurry and rushed to the lab without telling my mother then she followed me In her night gown asking me where I was going but it would take too long to answer so I just started sprinting towards the lab as I did I bumped into Xhero my arch nemesis we were like two sides of a quarter I was heads because I was very smart and tidy he was tails because of his brute size and strength . As I fell onto my back he screamed at me what was that you little jerk he yelled and grabbed me by my jacket collar I then weaseled out of the jacket to reveal my pale blue t-shirt and started sprinting however all I could here behind me was my mother beating Xhero to a pulp me still sprinting was the first to the lab because even professor sequoia wasn't there yet I was an hour early awh dangit I  said sitting next to the lab door well Matt you can think about your starter while waiting for the senile old guy to show up. My region Broto (I know dumb name right) have all the Pokémon from the first 5 generations and a few from the 6 the generation (because I only know like 4 of them) As I awaited I thought about the 3 starters tododile chimchar and turtwig I thought and though because these were my favorite Pokémon equally. However when it came down to it me a scrawny pale boy with brown hair most resembled a ratata because it is weak and scrawny like me. Then I thought to myself I will meet the starters and meet the one that was most like me. As professor sequoia appeared xhero and my mother were right behind him then I saw professor sequoia walk up to me and ask why I was so early I answered with its Pokémon gees why wouldn't I be early. Then he opened the doors and in me and xhero went and my mother said come back to the house before you leave for the journey. As I walked in I realized Professor Sequoia said Mat you may pick 2 starters because there are 2 of you in the town and 3 starters and because my grandson really hurt you and ohh here's your jacket back he said. I caught the jacket and said thank you and grabbed tododile and turtwig suddenly xhero snatched turtwig out of my hand and screamed this ones mine suddenly I jumped on his shoulder bit his ear and caught turtwigs pokeball no he's mine I said calmly. Then I said sorry to professer Seqouia for hurting his grandson and he responded whispering thank you for doing that I'm terrified of him. Then I walked out put my jacket on and said this is gonna be a great adventure then told my mother goodbye and walked on to route 1.
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   Considering I was able to visualize multiple of the scenes within my mind, I had enjoyed the short story. Though you could have included greatly improved punctuation and greatly improved grammar, overall, the short story had been intriguing. Keep up the astounding work. Good luck!
   Considering I was able to visualize multiple of the scenes within my mind, I had enjoyed the short story. Though you could have included greatly improved punctuation and greatly improved grammar, overall, the short story had been intriguing. Keep up the astounding work. Good luck!
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12-28-13 01:55 PM
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sorry about the puncation and grammar just trying to get the story across sorry not the best with grammar
sorry about the puncation and grammar just trying to get the story across sorry not the best with grammar
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