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A bit more cheerful after yesterday's stuff... A color poem
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12-09-13 05:12 PM
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(NOTE: Thank you all so much for all of the great feedback on these color poems! I may not have responded to every comment, but just so you know, I read them all and they are wonderful. Seriously, thank you! Anyway, the next color poem is here, following purple, blue, green, black, white, and gray. Enjoy!)


Yellow is joy
Cheerful and young
Face shining bright like the sun
It’s awake and alive,
Energetic and bright
Ready to dance and have fun
(NOTE: Thank you all so much for all of the great feedback on these color poems! I may not have responded to every comment, but just so you know, I read them all and they are wonderful. Seriously, thank you! Anyway, the next color poem is here, following purple, blue, green, black, white, and gray. Enjoy!)


Yellow is joy
Cheerful and young
Face shining bright like the sun
It’s awake and alive,
Energetic and bright
Ready to dance and have fun
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Nice work. I haven't commented on most of the poems yet, but I will if I get around to it.
Good writing, as usual.
Nice work. I haven't commented on most of the poems yet, but I will if I get around to it.
Good writing, as usual.
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PokefanKala : Wow . Would you believe that when I saw this one I said .... " Yellow ... its joy right ? " ... and BOO the first line in he poem says it . Thats how much I think you're desrciptions are accurately accurate Nice work
PokefanKala : Wow . Would you believe that when I saw this one I said .... " Yellow ... its joy right ? " ... and BOO the first line in he poem says it . Thats how much I think you're desrciptions are accurately accurate Nice work
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Another good poem,a nice positive message on this one after all the darker colours
Another good poem,a nice positive message on this one after all the darker colours
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