Graphics- Very good graphics, very chipper, colorful, happy, when you are over lava you can almost see the heat, when you are in the snow you can see the snow falling from the trees.

Sound- Good sound, remastered music that fits the scenes, when you are in the castle it is deep and gloomy, when you are in the fields it is chipper and  high.

Addictiveness-  Very addicting, it is the type of game that if you die you have to try again till you win and you can't take a break, you have to play to the end just so you don't freak out. 

Story- The story over all is good, it makes it take place after the original Yoshi's Island, the story doesn't really follow you through the game, you see it at the beginning and the end,  the story would be slightly better if they changed the beginning video like in other mods I have played, but over all a very good story line.
 
Depth- A pretty good game when it comes to this, has a lot of secret areas and mini-games, even after you beat the final boss you want to go back and get 100 on all the levels.

Difficulty- A perfect balance of difficulty and simplicity, very hard to dodge all enemies and avoid falling down cliffs,  controls are easy to get the hang of, great game if you are looking for a challenging game that reminds you of the SNES

Pros-Remastered music, long, good story, same style as the original, great graphics, good balance of difficulty

Cons- the only con I can think of is that the video at the beginning is the same

 So overall this is in my opinion the best Yoshi's Island mod there is.

I'm glad to see a good, organized review. Well done, Toontown!

The game itself is a pretty good game. I mean, it continues the story somewhat as well. I'm very impressed with it.

Nice review, It was a good clean write, the only thing I may suggest is a layout for writing them so the  text can be a little more clear. Good job. If you wish: You can express the game even further, but don't express it too much or the audience might lose interest. Keep it up!

I agree with supercrash, I think you had a pretty solid review here, all I will say is, to go into detail a bit more and really express you opinion on the game so the audience knows what they are getting when they play this game. But not too much because they will not be as interested. But do it enough to get their attention and hook them into reading the rest of the review. Otherwise your review is nice and organized and easy to read and understand which is something a lot of reviews lack, so you did well there. 

Overall you did a pretty good job and I think you made a fantastic review considering you are a newbie, keep up the great work and keep making more reviews, the only bit of advice I can really give is to do it frequently, the more you review the better you will get and you will master it so you can make them longer naturally. Keep reviewing and Merry Christmas.