I love this game! As the first Pokémon game you have to remember it was made on the game boy not even the color so it will not have boss graphics. Despite this this game is awesome! There are several hacks that are in this game that are removed in Fire Red and leaf Green (the re-makes). This game inspired a whole army of fans. There are several Pokémon from #001 to #151. There were many things that only this game has. 1st is the whole Giovanni is the 8th GYM Leader. Then there is the whole Blue/Gary/What ever being the champ. Then there is the fact that until X and Y the EXP share only this and Blue (and Yellow I think) had the EXP share give ALL your Pokémon a share. So that's all for now!

It would appear that you submitted this game review a few times too many XD that is understandable,  it has happened to me before.

Now then, for your actual review, I am going to go easy on you since you are new. You at least me the 100 word requirement which is good. To be honest I think you are off to a good start and you have the right idea for making game reviews. I would just recommend trying to break it down into categories and then talk about it from there. Once you break it down and really start talking about it, then it gets easier to talk about and word count shouldn't be a problem.

Overall I think you are off to a good start with reviewing, just keep practicing if you really want to master it though, that is all I can really say about that. Keep up the good work dude and keep making more reviews, the more you do, the better you will get, that I can promise!