Yesterday was the end of Sonic Week... who cares I never made a finale and the week will end off with a review of the one that started it all... Sonic the Hedgehog. The first one not the crappy 06 version.
Basically Dr. Robotnik (egg man) stole little animals to power his robots and will use the chaos emeralds to power his army up even further to take over the world. This game is just Sonic and Robotnik, one on one(GOD if we knew they would add so many characters). There are 6 worlds you must go through to get to the final stage.
Green Hill: a happy meadow of happiness, except for all the robots out to KEEL you.
Marble: guess whether the world is made of marble, or marbles. Now that I think about it marble sounds weird... marble marble marble.
Spring Yard: a yard in spring, what else?
Labyrinth: trust me, you will NEVER get a good score on time here...
Star Light: an 8-bit version of starlight carnival in Sonic Colors.
Scrap Brain: or hell, eighter way works.
Each world has 3 stages, at the end you face the boss. The graphics are pretty amazing for it's time (1991) and the gameplay is pretty fast paced, they make you go fast but also think about your actions because if you don't jump right now you go face first into wall spikes. There are branching paths leading up and down meaning you can play differently every time you go in a stage. Also if you end the first or second stage with a certain amount of rings you get a bonus stage for more lives and score. The hardest zone if you couldn't tell is the scrap brain zone. Hard traps, enemies, and it's not easy to get rings. However upon beating this forsaken level you reach the final stage and face off against Robotnik's final plan. Now I leave the other bosses to you guys, but I will still tell you the final boss anyways. There are 4 columns that will crush you, 2 pop out at a time, 1 has egg man in it. Avoid them and hit the one with Robotnik. Then a laser shoots 4 blasts down you have to avoid. Then try to keep hitting eggers until you win. Afterward he runs to his escape pod to get the heck outta there. And you win! Yay! Wait... why is Robotnik...

Basically Dr. Robotnik (egg man) stole little animals to power his robots and will use the chaos emeralds to power his army up even further to take over the world.

Oh crap...
So to beat the game for real you have to get the 6 chaos emeralds in each special stage (yes 6, the seventh is discovered in the next game) and once you have all 6 you get to see egg man throwing a temper tantrum. Yay! I won for reals! Then the emeralds fly to different locations for the next game... may the journey continue. Wait who the heck are you?
I'm Tails! I'm your new partner!
... get out...
But Sega said I could...
Sega? Did you say... SEGA? I AM SEGA!!!

Your review is good. You give it enough details to show what the game is about and even make a little story out of it.

However, you could take advantage of better structure, i.e. separate the sections clearly. It's a little too clumped up and makes the reading difficult.

I noticed that you made a slight typo in the Scrap Brain part of your review. You accidentally typed "eighter" instead of "either". Besides that, I think you made a good review. Though like Janus said, you could've structured the sections better. Overall though, I think you did a pretty good job.

Nice review, I just wish you edited your layout so it can be a bit more readable, because I had trouble reading it because of the layout . Also, I recommend you put it into categories for even easier reading. Other than that, it's great! Good luck on future reviews!

Why is everyone replying to this now? This was back in November 11th 2013 O_e

Mecha Leo :
janus :

It seems as if Janus bumped it, which he isn't allowed to do, especially for a thread that's over a year old....