well lets start review  this is a harder version of pokemon shiny gold with more difficulty and harder than it  overall  i give it 9 lets see why its graphic is from pokemon fire red so its very good obviously but due to nothing new in graphics i gave it 9 now sound its not that good so i give it 7 now about addictiveness what can i say? its very addictive those who have played gen.2 games of pokemon like pokemon gold and pokemon silver will love it to play in gba styile so i give it 9 in addictiveness now story it contains same story as pokemon gold and pokemon silver with some different events,rivals and mostly its harder than gold and silver the depth of the game is not so long it ends soon now difficulty its a very hard game like it contains harder rivals,gym leaders and trainers i give it 9 overall give this game a try if you want to play those old days gold,silver in gba version    

Lipun.tripathi@y : alright this is a nice review you made. But you could make it a little longer (like 300+ words)..and you should break it down into different categories.....its hard to read when the words are all together. But overall nice job. Have a nice day.

thanks mate but due to i am a newbie it will take some time to understand anyway have a nice day too

This reminds me of when I first started writing game reviews. Although I never did it in one big block like you, I still rushed them.
Hey maybe you could break it down into different categories. Also you could try and make it longer as well as with more information. I know your a newbie but maybe you should wait a while before writing another review.

I think this is a good start, myself. I liked how you mentioned each category that you rated. I'm sure you'll put out an even better one next time. Keep on writing reviews, man.

supercool22 :
98Gamingstar :
He actually did categorize the review, he just didn't use paragraph spacing. You have to admit, it wasn't bad. He'll keep getting better as he goes too. Let's try not to be too hard on a new reviewer.