This hack is disappointing in my opinion, but that may be because I own and have played the original. The idea is worthwhile and certainly worth a play through, but only because the length matches the amount of interest the story generates. Well written and well drawn, the game lacks balance and length, and the ending leaves much to be desired. Even if the bugs are ignored (not many), the entire game comes off as lacking, leaving the player to continue for the sake of finding the insentive that never shows up...

I would suggest the programmer (hacker) expand on this and continue the game. There is a lot of potential to rebalance and extend the entire thing. What is present is explained in great detail and the style used is most impressive. I see no reason to limit it. It's just a title that needs some work.

Summery: Great idea, decent execution, needs growth.

(I would love to see a full size game made out of this short)

I think this isn't the perfect forum to post this... maybe you can contact the staff. They have an answer for everything! They should help you out!

Hey, when you get to the last choice in the game, press the B button. There's more plot after that. Just thought I'd let you know. I suggest you play the full game before you review it next time.

   I personally found this review great for your first. Not because of the length. Not because you described it well. But because of the wording. You worded this whole review very well and I think you should keep doing this in future reviews but I also think that you should probably try to increase the length of your review.
 
   Next time I advise you talk about everything instead of just the story and such. Speak about the graphics and sound a bit more, maybe? Also when writing a review most people on this site like it to be like how you say the subject and then you describe about the game. Then they usually want you to do that based on the things you rated. I know I did not describe it very well so I will give you an example.
 
   Graphics: 9/10
   
   (Words you want here.)
 
   So overall I think that the wording was the best part of this review and that you should work on a few other things to make this a better review.

This review is very short, however, I think you organized the review well so that's a plus. In the future, I think you should add more detail in future reviews.

This review is very short. Since you played the original game you could have compared it and say why the hack was so bad.

Mat Pat says this is the game that brought about one of the most popular games to come onto Steam, But if you don't know what it is... I won't spoil that for you or anyone else.