Ok . I will not talk or reply to posts . The only thing I will do on vizzed will finish making my story . Now where was I  Oh yeah ..





Day 8 . Mid day .



Zed and Roger are sailing together on the Unlucky Charm . They are just doing normal captain pirate stuff like drink rum and reading the map . 


Roger - * Looks at map *  " Um. Zed . This Barrel Island . Why does it have a .... deep red patch on it . Is this a sign of blood . I think it means that there are normally bloodbaths on this island . Wars . Battles . What do you think ? "
Zed - * Looks at map * " I think it looks like a rum stain . Sorry about that . * Looks at another part of the map * ?Now that looks like blood . Maybe there is something strange about this island . I wonder what it means . "


The two captains continue to observe the map . Both trying to descifer what the red marking meant . Until they were interupted by a sudden knock on the door . Roger approached to open the door .


Crew member 1 - " Sir . It seems we be approaching land . "
Roger - " Let me see the telescope "
Zed - " What is it ? "
Roger - " An island . "
Zed - " Really now ? Well let me have a look see . " * Looks through telescope * " Oh dear . "
Roger - " What is it Zed ? "
Zed - " You know that smudge you said was sign and I said it was a rum stain  "
Roger - "  Yesss "


( Listen to this till I say stop )?http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eN5ExwsXUiQ






Zed - " I just remembered that I left the map in a drawer . I checked the drawer this morning . I drank the rum last night . I never drank rum at anytime when I was around the map . That wasn't a rum stain "
Roger - " And then thats not an island . Then what is it ? "
Zed - " What color was that mark on the map ? "
Roger - " Red "
Zed - " Ok . let me have another look at this " island "  * Looks again through telescope * " It has teeth . It is red and .... its moving ??? "
Roger - " Moving ? Islands don't move . Do they ? "
Zed - " Nope . SO what is red , can swim , and has teeth all over ? "
Roger - "  Who is one eyed , red bearded and does not know the answer to that question ? "
Zed - " Maneaters . "
Roger - " What ? "
Zed - " MANEATERS !!! "
Roger - " What are man eaters ?
Zed - " Only the most ferocious , red eyed creatures alive . They move in shoals . Devouring ships and their contents along with it . The only reason they are red . .... is because they suck the blood out of any living creature apart from themselves . "
Roger - " You are what you eat . How do you know so much about theses creatures ? "
Zed - " I was almost killed by them. You never know more about something .... until this thing is going to take your life . ?Good times . Luckily I also learned a weakness of these creatures . They all connected , which is why they are always so clustered together . And is also why the look like an island .They are all supported by a single heart in the center of the shoal . But it can only be destroyed by fire "
Roger - " Ok then "



That was part 1 . Part 2 coming soon.