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10-06-13 05:30 PM
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Am I really on chapter eight already? I was about to put in seven until I saw that I already made a chapter seven. Anyway, welcome to chapter eight! Enjoy!

CHAPTER 8

I looked around and noticed Divine Aurora in the corner of the room. How could I be so stupid! Apparently Razor-987 read my mind, because his facial expression suddenly changed too. "Alright well I guess we can discuss this later." I said. "Maybe we should talk about something else. Like about how Divine Aurora is a traitor." Everyone stared at him. "What do you mean?" he said innocently. "Why do you think I am a traitor?" "I heard you the other night." I said "You were talking on the phone with Singelli." "And computer records show that you have been spending a lot of time on their website." TornadoMudkip added. "Now come with me." The super-genius PixelBrick said. "I will erase your brain and spare your life. But if you struggle, we will have to kill you." "Then I guess you will have to kill me" Divine Aurora said as he punched PixelBrick in the face.

Razor-987 turned into a knife - that was new - and flew straight at Divine Aurora. He used his super speed to easily dodge it. B619ook shrunk down to mini size and climbed up to Divine Aurora's armpits and tickled him, making him vulnerable. goodboy used his super strength and knocked him out with one hit upside the head. PixelBrick brought him downstairs and they did the memory erasing procedure while he was unconscious. When he woke up, he was tested to make sure that they didn't erase too much of his memory and turn his brain to mush, and we let him go into the outside world,

"That was close." goodboy said. I am glad no one got hurt. "Yeah." I said. "Wait. Where is B619ook?" We looked around and couldn't find him "The last time I saw him he shrunk himself and tickled Divine Aurora." said Eniitan. Everyone nodded in agreement. "There!" I said. On the ground was a mini B619ook. "How do we make him normal size again?" I asked. Just as I finished my sentence, B619ook grew. PixelBrick did all sorts of different heart and breathing tests and stuff on him. I don't think anyone knew what he was doing, but we let him work. "No no no." he muttered. He started pressing down on his chest. "No!" he said louder. He stopped pressing on his chest and looked up at us, tears in his eyes. "He is gone."

And that is the end of chapter eight! Sorry it was so short.

goodboy :
Razor-987 :
Divine Aurora :
B619ook : Sorry buddy, but you are dead.
Eniitan :
Singelli :
TornadoMudkip :
Am I really on chapter eight already? I was about to put in seven until I saw that I already made a chapter seven. Anyway, welcome to chapter eight! Enjoy!

CHAPTER 8

I looked around and noticed Divine Aurora in the corner of the room. How could I be so stupid! Apparently Razor-987 read my mind, because his facial expression suddenly changed too. "Alright well I guess we can discuss this later." I said. "Maybe we should talk about something else. Like about how Divine Aurora is a traitor." Everyone stared at him. "What do you mean?" he said innocently. "Why do you think I am a traitor?" "I heard you the other night." I said "You were talking on the phone with Singelli." "And computer records show that you have been spending a lot of time on their website." TornadoMudkip added. "Now come with me." The super-genius PixelBrick said. "I will erase your brain and spare your life. But if you struggle, we will have to kill you." "Then I guess you will have to kill me" Divine Aurora said as he punched PixelBrick in the face.

Razor-987 turned into a knife - that was new - and flew straight at Divine Aurora. He used his super speed to easily dodge it. B619ook shrunk down to mini size and climbed up to Divine Aurora's armpits and tickled him, making him vulnerable. goodboy used his super strength and knocked him out with one hit upside the head. PixelBrick brought him downstairs and they did the memory erasing procedure while he was unconscious. When he woke up, he was tested to make sure that they didn't erase too much of his memory and turn his brain to mush, and we let him go into the outside world,

"That was close." goodboy said. I am glad no one got hurt. "Yeah." I said. "Wait. Where is B619ook?" We looked around and couldn't find him "The last time I saw him he shrunk himself and tickled Divine Aurora." said Eniitan. Everyone nodded in agreement. "There!" I said. On the ground was a mini B619ook. "How do we make him normal size again?" I asked. Just as I finished my sentence, B619ook grew. PixelBrick did all sorts of different heart and breathing tests and stuff on him. I don't think anyone knew what he was doing, but we let him work. "No no no." he muttered. He started pressing down on his chest. "No!" he said louder. He stopped pressing on his chest and looked up at us, tears in his eyes. "He is gone."

And that is the end of chapter eight! Sorry it was so short.

goodboy :
Razor-987 :
Divine Aurora :
B619ook : Sorry buddy, but you are dead.
Eniitan :
Singelli :
TornadoMudkip :
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Dun dun dun!  And so the story move on...As well as one of our characters.  Poor guy.  He was always an open BOOK.  I mean, you could always READ that he was an honest guy on his face.  Let us WRITE a new chapter in his memory.    Indeed, I can't wait to see where this goes next!
Dun dun dun!  And so the story move on...As well as one of our characters.  Poor guy.  He was always an open BOOK.  I mean, you could always READ that he was an honest guy on his face.  Let us WRITE a new chapter in his memory.    Indeed, I can't wait to see where this goes next!
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Aw man, awesome! Just pure awesome! I love these stories!

Was it my super slap to the head that killed armpit climbing B619ook? If so... Oops.

Anyways, keep going! I'm loving it.
Aw man, awesome! Just pure awesome! I love these stories!

Was it my super slap to the head that killed armpit climbing B619ook? If so... Oops.

Anyways, keep going! I'm loving it.
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Is it evil that I laughed at my own death?Well you did good on making this suspenseful so good work tgags!
Is it evil that I laughed at my own death?Well you did good on making this suspenseful so good work tgags!
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B619ook : Is that even possible? You would be dead, so you wouldn't be able to laugh. Woah! You just broke my mind!

Thanks for the compliments!
B619ook : Is that even possible? You would be dead, so you wouldn't be able to laugh. Woah! You just broke my mind!

Thanks for the compliments!
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tgags123 : Im just joking, i didnt really laugh i just sat there just saying i actually died. Itwas upseting though.
tgags123 : Im just joking, i didnt really laugh i just sat there just saying i actually died. Itwas upseting though.
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I like it ^^ the comedy and action and dialog truly entertaining I can't wait to see how it ends.
I like it ^^ the comedy and action and dialog truly entertaining I can't wait to see how it ends.
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