Remove Ad, Sign Up
Register to Remove Ad
Register to Remove Ad
Remove Ad, Sign Up
Register to Remove Ad
Register to Remove Ad
Signup for Free!
-More Features-
-Far Less Ads-
About   Users   Help
Users & Guests Online
On Page: 1
Directory: 49
Entire Site: 7 & 552
Page Staff: pokemon x, pennylessz, Barathemos, tgags123, alexanyways, supercool22, RavusRat,
04-18-24 07:16 AM

Forum Links

Thread Information

Views
457
Replies
3
Rating
0
Status
CLOSED
Thread
Creator
tgags123
10-06-13 12:47 PM
Last
Post
tgags123
10-06-13 04:52 PM
Additional Thread Details
Views: 163
Today: 0
Users: 0 unique

Thread Actions

Thread Closed
New Thread
New Poll
Order
 

My Story - Chapter Seven

 

10-06-13 12:47 PM
tgags123 is Offline
| ID: 899404 | 427 Words

tgags123
Davideo123
Level: 162


POSTS: 1988/9026
POST EXP: 546465
LVL EXP: 54300716
CP: 36104.0
VIZ: 4595232

Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
My Story is back with its 7th chapter! I hope you like it!

CHAPTER 7

So Divine Aurora was a spy. I couldn't believe it. "What happens now?" I thought. "Do we confront him about it? Do we pretend we don't know? Do we just avoid him?" I looked around the table to find everyone staring at me. I was the leader. I was supposed to be the one to make these decisions. "Umm... I think we should... uhh... confront him about it?" I said, very unsure of myself. "Makes sense." said the brainiac PixelBrick. "We outnumber him 8 to 1. He doesn't stand a chance." "Alright so when-" I started. Just then, the someone knocked four times, paused, then knocked seven more times. The code. goodboy opened the door and Divine Aurora burst in.

"I saw one!" he said. "A Thing! They were just standing out there, but it was definitely one of them!" "Who was it?" I asked. "Was it Singelli?" "No, no," He said. "Not Singelli. I think it was her assistant Davideo7." "That's not good." PixelBrick explained. "Davideo7 has the power to shut us down if we get to close to him." "Shut us down?" I asked, confused. "How does he do that?" "Well basically what happens is he messes with your brain and you just drop to the floor, unconscious." explained goodboy. "He can make it last for a while. The longest so far was 22 hours." Oh boy.

"Who else works for Singelli?" I asked. "And what are their powers?" "Well, according to their records, their are 426,200 of them." TornadoMudkip said. Crap. "Their are 426,200 of them and only 8 of us1?" I exclaimed. "Well, most of them either don't want to be their and will not fight for them, or don't care either way. There are around 50 of them that actually like Singelli, and only around 10 that we really need to watch out for." That made me feel better. "So those Things that don't like Singelli. If we can help them escape, will they fight for us?" I asked. "Probably." said Razor-987, who had been quiet for the rest of the discussion. "Alright then I guess we are busting out some Things!" I exclaimed. All of us seemed to have forgotten that Divine Aurora was in the room the whole time.

goodboy :
Singelli :
Razor-987 :
PixelBrick :
TornadoMudkip :
Divine Aurora :
David: Not going to summon you, but you are in the story! And you are evil! -)

Hope you guys are enjoying it!
My Story is back with its 7th chapter! I hope you like it!

CHAPTER 7

So Divine Aurora was a spy. I couldn't believe it. "What happens now?" I thought. "Do we confront him about it? Do we pretend we don't know? Do we just avoid him?" I looked around the table to find everyone staring at me. I was the leader. I was supposed to be the one to make these decisions. "Umm... I think we should... uhh... confront him about it?" I said, very unsure of myself. "Makes sense." said the brainiac PixelBrick. "We outnumber him 8 to 1. He doesn't stand a chance." "Alright so when-" I started. Just then, the someone knocked four times, paused, then knocked seven more times. The code. goodboy opened the door and Divine Aurora burst in.

"I saw one!" he said. "A Thing! They were just standing out there, but it was definitely one of them!" "Who was it?" I asked. "Was it Singelli?" "No, no," He said. "Not Singelli. I think it was her assistant Davideo7." "That's not good." PixelBrick explained. "Davideo7 has the power to shut us down if we get to close to him." "Shut us down?" I asked, confused. "How does he do that?" "Well basically what happens is he messes with your brain and you just drop to the floor, unconscious." explained goodboy. "He can make it last for a while. The longest so far was 22 hours." Oh boy.

"Who else works for Singelli?" I asked. "And what are their powers?" "Well, according to their records, their are 426,200 of them." TornadoMudkip said. Crap. "Their are 426,200 of them and only 8 of us1?" I exclaimed. "Well, most of them either don't want to be their and will not fight for them, or don't care either way. There are around 50 of them that actually like Singelli, and only around 10 that we really need to watch out for." That made me feel better. "So those Things that don't like Singelli. If we can help them escape, will they fight for us?" I asked. "Probably." said Razor-987, who had been quiet for the rest of the discussion. "Alright then I guess we are busting out some Things!" I exclaimed. All of us seemed to have forgotten that Divine Aurora was in the room the whole time.

goodboy :
Singelli :
Razor-987 :
PixelBrick :
TornadoMudkip :
Divine Aurora :
David: Not going to summon you, but you are in the story! And you are evil! -)

Hope you guys are enjoying it!
Local Moderator
Winter 2019 TdV Winner


Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 04-26-13
Location: Long Island, NY
Last Post: 3 days
Last Active: 19 hours

(edited by tgags123 on 10-06-13 05:00 PM)    

10-06-13 03:50 PM
supernerd117 is Offline
| ID: 899562 | 16 Words

supernerd117
Level: 142


POSTS: 1859/6187
POST EXP: 404633
LVL EXP: 34894645
CP: 17926.3
VIZ: 12818

Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
tgags123 : Wow, playing the David card.  I did not see that coming.  Nicely done.  
tgags123 : Wow, playing the David card.  I did not see that coming.  Nicely done.  
Vizzed Elite
WOOOOOOOO


Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 03-21-10
Location: Location
Last Post: 1601 days
Last Active: 79 days

10-06-13 04:50 PM
SacredShadow is Offline
| ID: 899621 | 111 Words

SacredShadow
Razor-987
Level: 152


POSTS: 3150/7753
POST EXP: 960743
LVL EXP: 43774288
CP: 34604.9
VIZ: 985840

Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
Awesome job on these stories man, they are getting progressively better each and every chapter. So nice work and I think this chapter is especially good, I like how you made divine aurora a spy and davideo7 evil. I think that is cool. I cannot wait for your next story and I just know it is going to be good, you and goodboy are both making some pretty awesome stories!

So nice work on this and I am looking forward to chapter 8!

By the way, congrats on making it past 2,000 posts, that is an amazing achievement! At this rate you will be at 5,000 in no time at all! 
Awesome job on these stories man, they are getting progressively better each and every chapter. So nice work and I think this chapter is especially good, I like how you made divine aurora a spy and davideo7 evil. I think that is cool. I cannot wait for your next story and I just know it is going to be good, you and goodboy are both making some pretty awesome stories!

So nice work on this and I am looking forward to chapter 8!

By the way, congrats on making it past 2,000 posts, that is an amazing achievement! At this rate you will be at 5,000 in no time at all! 
Vizzed Elite

Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 01-14-13
Last Post: 396 days
Last Active: 363 days

10-06-13 04:52 PM
tgags123 is Offline
| ID: 899626 | 34 Words

tgags123
Davideo123
Level: 162


POSTS: 2023/9026
POST EXP: 546465
LVL EXP: 54300716
CP: 36104.0
VIZ: 4595232

Likes: 0  Dislikes: 0
Razor-987 : Thank you, thank you, and thank you! I am glad you like them! And I cannot believe that I am at 2000 posts already! Remember when I was only at 100 last TdV?
Razor-987 : Thank you, thank you, and thank you! I am glad you like them! And I cannot believe that I am at 2000 posts already! Remember when I was only at 100 last TdV?
Local Moderator
Winter 2019 TdV Winner


Affected by 'Laziness Syndrome'

Registered: 04-26-13
Location: Long Island, NY
Last Post: 3 days
Last Active: 19 hours

Links

Page Comments


This page has no comments

Adblocker detected!

Vizzed.com is very expensive to keep alive! The Ads pay for the servers.

Vizzed has 3 TB worth of games and 1 TB worth of music.  This site is free to use but the ads barely pay for the monthly server fees.  If too many more people use ad block, the site cannot survive.

We prioritize the community over the site profits.  This is why we avoid using annoying (but high paying) ads like most other sites which include popups, obnoxious sounds and animations, malware, and other forms of intrusiveness.  We'll do our part to never resort to these types of ads, please do your part by helping support this site by adding Vizzed.com to your ad blocking whitelist.

×