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Tales Of wanted Dead Zed . Chapter 3 :D
10-05-13 01:56 PM
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Ok this is chapter 3 of book 2 of my story . It is basically a continuation of chapter 2 . But I could not post in hcpater 2 becasue I am the last person who posted and users cannot post two times in a row . Enjoy Day 1 Continued from chapter 2 : Now every member of the two ships were safely on board their respective vessels . John - " Um.. Captain . They are aiming at us . How are we going to get away ? " Zed - " The fins that we cut off from the Lockness Monster . We can use the as paddles . " Luke - " Good idea Captain . But how are we going to escape the fire ? of Roger's ship ? " Zed - " You leave that to me . Now get below deck . The lot of ya !!!! Start rowing . Along with the sea breeze blowing in our sails , ye will propel this ship ... out of the path of the Jailbird ( Roger's Ship ) " The crew scampered at the captain's orders . All heading below deck . Each running as fast as possible to their duties . Mean while on Roger's ship : Roger - " Ready the canonsah !!!! Zed is not going to get away this time " Crew member - " Sir . Have a look " * Hands the already extended telescope to the captain * Roger - * Looks through the telescope * " They are running away ? Why that Zed . He will not elude my grasp this timeeeeah " The Unluchy Charm had already turned its back to The Jailbird and had taken off . Though it was still in shooting rang Amy - " Zed . It looks like they are ready to fire at us " Zed - " Really ? Ok . You see that unusually large net over there ? " Amy - " Yes . " Zed - " Tie the four ends of it to four canon balls and load them into the canon " Amy and Zed worked swiftly . Each loading two of the balls into four induvidual canons on deck . Amy - " What now ? " Zed - " Wait for it " The Jailbird had positioned itself right behind the Unlucky Charm and was awaiting orders from its captain to fire six canon balls at the Charm . Roger - " Ready . " Amy - " Zed " Zed - " Wait foor it " Roger - " Aimah " Amy - " Zed ! " Zed - " Waaaaaiiiit 4 it " Roger - " FIRE !! " Amy - " ZED !! " Zed - " Now !!! " When Roger's canons were fired so we Zed's . Roger's six canon balls flew directly toward Zed's and the Canon balls attached to the four corners of rope were fired at the same time . Since the net was tied to the balls it was fired like a net that was wide opened . The six balls from Roger's ship were caught in the net and did not reach Zed's ship . The bundle of balls fell into the water . The two captains were watching through a telescope . Roger - " What tha ? " Zed - " Ha . Choke on that Roger . Na na na na naaahhh na " Roger was shocked at this . How did the captain devise such a quick plan ? Roger - " Fire again !!! " Crew member - " Sorry captain . The ship is out of range . We only had one chance " Roger - * Angrily throws telescope into the water * Blast you Zed !!! I will get you next timeeeeeah " Zed and his ship have now safely escaped the Jailbird and were now off sailing for the map . Mean while in Dedmond's waters : An English cargo ship was sailing through the reaper's seas . Dedmond's Waters was a portion of the North Atlantic Ocean located In betwixt America and Portugal . Ok. That was chapter 3 part i . Part 2 coming out soon . Just need someone to post . So post Day 1 Continued from chapter 2 : Now every member of the two ships were safely on board their respective vessels . John - " Um.. Captain . They are aiming at us . How are we going to get away ? " Zed - " The fins that we cut off from the Lockness Monster . We can use the as paddles . " Luke - " Good idea Captain . But how are we going to escape the fire ? of Roger's ship ? " Zed - " You leave that to me . Now get below deck . The lot of ya !!!! Start rowing . Along with the sea breeze blowing in our sails , ye will propel this ship ... out of the path of the Jailbird ( Roger's Ship ) " The crew scampered at the captain's orders . All heading below deck . Each running as fast as possible to their duties . Mean while on Roger's ship : Roger - " Ready the canonsah !!!! Zed is not going to get away this time " Crew member - " Sir . Have a look " * Hands the already extended telescope to the captain * Roger - * Looks through the telescope * " They are running away ? Why that Zed . He will not elude my grasp this timeeeeah " The Unluchy Charm had already turned its back to The Jailbird and had taken off . Though it was still in shooting rang Amy - " Zed . It looks like they are ready to fire at us " Zed - " Really ? Ok . You see that unusually large net over there ? " Amy - " Yes . " Zed - " Tie the four ends of it to four canon balls and load them into the canon " Amy and Zed worked swiftly . Each loading two of the balls into four induvidual canons on deck . Amy - " What now ? " Zed - " Wait for it " The Jailbird had positioned itself right behind the Unlucky Charm and was awaiting orders from its captain to fire six canon balls at the Charm . Roger - " Ready . " Amy - " Zed " Zed - " Wait foor it " Roger - " Aimah " Amy - " Zed ! " Zed - " Waaaaaiiiit 4 it " Roger - " FIRE !! " Amy - " ZED !! " Zed - " Now !!! " When Roger's canons were fired so we Zed's . Roger's six canon balls flew directly toward Zed's and the Canon balls attached to the four corners of rope were fired at the same time . Since the net was tied to the balls it was fired like a net that was wide opened . The six balls from Roger's ship were caught in the net and did not reach Zed's ship . The bundle of balls fell into the water . The two captains were watching through a telescope . Roger - " What tha ? " Zed - " Ha . Choke on that Roger . Na na na na naaahhh na " Roger was shocked at this . How did the captain devise such a quick plan ? Roger - " Fire again !!! " Crew member - " Sorry captain . The ship is out of range . We only had one chance " Roger - * Angrily throws telescope into the water * Blast you Zed !!! I will get you next timeeeeeah " Zed and his ship have now safely escaped the Jailbird and were now off sailing for the map . Mean while in Dedmond's waters : An English cargo ship was sailing through the reaper's seas . Dedmond's Waters was a portion of the North Atlantic Ocean located In betwixt America and Portugal . Ok. That was chapter 3 part i . Part 2 coming out soon . Just need someone to post . So post |
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10-05-13 02:31 PM
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great story bro i didnt even realize you made a new story did the Adventures of captain zed end or something i havent been on so yeah i really dont kno whats going on but over all this chapter is pretty good keep it up hopefully part two will be out before i get off to boxing so yeah im looking forward to reading it |
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10-06-13 01:49 PM
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Ok . Part 2 of chapter 3 . Captain of the English Vessel ( Reginald ) - " Ahh . This is a marvelous day for sailing All we need to do now is sail straight ahead till we reach the drop off point in Ghana " Crew member 1 - " Yes sir . And the weather here is so peaceful too " Reginald - " It looks like smooth sailing onward from here boys " Crew member 2 - " Umm. Sir . I think we are heading into a storm " Reginald - " What ? Impossible . There is not a cloud in the sky " Crew member 2 - " Here . Have a look for yourself " * hands extended telescope to captain * Reginald - " You're right . Prepare for weather men !!! We be sailing into a storm !! Batten down the hatches . Drop the sails . . " Crew member 1 - * Interrupts * Umm . Sir . The ship has stopped moving and there seems to be a black spot in front of us " Reginald - " Black Spot ? " Listen to this until I say to stop : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E Suddenly the weather changed . Storm clouds started to role in . Followed by the glittering flash of lightening and loud booms of thunder . Rain drops the size of books descended from the heavens . It seemed as if they had sailed right into a hurricane . Crew member 3 - " Sir . Something is coming up from the spot " From the Black spot in the water , arose a skull . As the skull continued to rise underneath it could be seen a pole . And as that continued to rise , A ship came up under the pole . The Reaper's Bride . The ship was covered with mist which then spread to the English Vessel . The ship was made up of 50 % bone and the rest was rotten wood . It looked perfectly kissed with the curse of Death and decay . And the captain of it was of course Captain Dedmond . ( You can stop listening to the theme now ) A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was transported or teleported from his ship to the English ship . Dedmond - " You are trespassing in my water " Reginald - " The Ocean belongs to no one . And I am free to sail where ever I desire " Dedmond - " Aye . These waters are cursed . Me , my ship and crew .. along with it . Henceforth I am these waters and I own them . " Reginald - " HAHAHAH !!! Curse ? There are no such things as curses . Is this a joke ? " Demond - " There are lots of curses like love and sorrow . The fact that you believe in them remains to be seen " Reginald - " Well thanks for the lesson but I have cargo to deliver . Now please leave my ship or I will have you thrown over board " Demond - " Whatever you say . Reginald " Reginald - " I don't know or care how you know my name but I do know that if you don't leave this instant it will be your funeral " Dedmond - " " A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was telelported back to his ship . His ship then descended into th eblack hole , granting the vessel pass . The rain stopped , the thunder ceased and the weather went back to normal . Reginald - " Curses ? Who does he think he is ? I should have had him arrested . On ward . To Ghana " Suddenly the horrible weather came back , and mist once again covered the English Vessel . The Vessel started to shake and quake . The atmosphere changed from one of relief to one of peril . Then ... The black spot appeared under the English ship . The ship's wood started to rot and the sails started to rip . . Then .. a sound of tearing wood could be heard under the ship . It continued until the skull that is normally seen on the highest pole of Dedmond's ship burst out from the center of the main deck . It continued to rise and rise . Dedmond's ship was rising under the English Vessel . Until the English vessel was lifted into the air over Dedmond's ship . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond appeared on the English vessel . Dedmond's crew then climbed from the ship below to the one above . Dedmond - " Kill them . KILL THEM ALL !!! " On the captain's command a crew of Skeletons and half dead men started slashing away at the crew of Englishmen . Some having their throats slit and others being beheaded . Those who tried to jump ship were eaten by ravenous sharks before the even hit the water . This continued until only the captain of the Vessel was left . Dedmond then approached the destraut man . Dedmond - " Do you believe in curses now Reginald ? " Reginald - " ......... ( He was speechless ) " Dedmond then trust his blade through the chest of the captain , killing him instantly and sealing his soul in Dedmond's blade . Dedmond - " That is what I thought . HAHAHAHAHAH !!! I love Mondays !!!! " Mean while a similar ship who had just entered Dedmond's waters saw what had happened through a telescope . They immediately turned around and started sailing away from Dedmond's waters but ..... A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond appeared on the deack of the English ship in front of the captain . Dedmond - " Tell your Precious Queen and King back in England ... that these waters be mine and ... trespassers Will . Be . Punished " A flash of lightening struck again Dedmond was teleported back to his ship . The Enlglishmen then started to sail back to their homeland to deliver the message . That was chapter 3 part 2 . Chapter 4 coming soon Captain of the English Vessel ( Reginald ) - " Ahh . This is a marvelous day for sailing All we need to do now is sail straight ahead till we reach the drop off point in Ghana " Crew member 1 - " Yes sir . And the weather here is so peaceful too " Reginald - " It looks like smooth sailing onward from here boys " Crew member 2 - " Umm. Sir . I think we are heading into a storm " Reginald - " What ? Impossible . There is not a cloud in the sky " Crew member 2 - " Here . Have a look for yourself " * hands extended telescope to captain * Reginald - " You're right . Prepare for weather men !!! We be sailing into a storm !! Batten down the hatches . Drop the sails . . " Crew member 1 - * Interrupts * Umm . Sir . The ship has stopped moving and there seems to be a black spot in front of us " Reginald - " Black Spot ? " Listen to this until I say to stop : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E Suddenly the weather changed . Storm clouds started to role in . Followed by the glittering flash of lightening and loud booms of thunder . Rain drops the size of books descended from the heavens . It seemed as if they had sailed right into a hurricane . Crew member 3 - " Sir . Something is coming up from the spot " From the Black spot in the water , arose a skull . As the skull continued to rise underneath it could be seen a pole . And as that continued to rise , A ship came up under the pole . The Reaper's Bride . The ship was covered with mist which then spread to the English Vessel . The ship was made up of 50 % bone and the rest was rotten wood . It looked perfectly kissed with the curse of Death and decay . And the captain of it was of course Captain Dedmond . ( You can stop listening to the theme now ) A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was transported or teleported from his ship to the English ship . Dedmond - " You are trespassing in my water " Reginald - " The Ocean belongs to no one . And I am free to sail where ever I desire " Dedmond - " Aye . These waters are cursed . Me , my ship and crew .. along with it . Henceforth I am these waters and I own them . " Reginald - " HAHAHAH !!! Curse ? There are no such things as curses . Is this a joke ? " Demond - " There are lots of curses like love and sorrow . The fact that you believe in them remains to be seen " Reginald - " Well thanks for the lesson but I have cargo to deliver . Now please leave my ship or I will have you thrown over board " Demond - " Whatever you say . Reginald " Reginald - " I don't know or care how you know my name but I do know that if you don't leave this instant it will be your funeral " Dedmond - " " A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was telelported back to his ship . His ship then descended into th eblack hole , granting the vessel pass . The rain stopped , the thunder ceased and the weather went back to normal . Reginald - " Curses ? Who does he think he is ? I should have had him arrested . On ward . To Ghana " Suddenly the horrible weather came back , and mist once again covered the English Vessel . The Vessel started to shake and quake . The atmosphere changed from one of relief to one of peril . Then ... The black spot appeared under the English ship . The ship's wood started to rot and the sails started to rip . . Then .. a sound of tearing wood could be heard under the ship . It continued until the skull that is normally seen on the highest pole of Dedmond's ship burst out from the center of the main deck . It continued to rise and rise . Dedmond's ship was rising under the English Vessel . Until the English vessel was lifted into the air over Dedmond's ship . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond appeared on the English vessel . Dedmond's crew then climbed from the ship below to the one above . Dedmond - " Kill them . KILL THEM ALL !!! " On the captain's command a crew of Skeletons and half dead men started slashing away at the crew of Englishmen . Some having their throats slit and others being beheaded . Those who tried to jump ship were eaten by ravenous sharks before the even hit the water . This continued until only the captain of the Vessel was left . Dedmond then approached the destraut man . Dedmond - " Do you believe in curses now Reginald ? " Reginald - " ......... ( He was speechless ) " Dedmond then trust his blade through the chest of the captain , killing him instantly and sealing his soul in Dedmond's blade . Dedmond - " That is what I thought . HAHAHAHAHAH !!! I love Mondays !!!! " Mean while a similar ship who had just entered Dedmond's waters saw what had happened through a telescope . They immediately turned around and started sailing away from Dedmond's waters but ..... A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond appeared on the deack of the English ship in front of the captain . Dedmond - " Tell your Precious Queen and King back in England ... that these waters be mine and ... trespassers Will . Be . Punished " A flash of lightening struck again Dedmond was teleported back to his ship . The Enlglishmen then started to sail back to their homeland to deliver the message . That was chapter 3 part 2 . Chapter 4 coming soon |
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