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The tales of Wanted dead Zed . Chapter 1 :D

 

09-27-13 05:59 PM
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Ok this is book two of my story . It is also chapter 1 of book two . Enjoy 

Day :  


Zed and his crew ( And by crew I mean everyone on board his ship ) Are sailing happily through out the world . Nothing to worry about or get afraid of . Just the sea breeze and a wide , blue , watery , road known as the sea to sail upon . Yes sir . Life couldn't be better for the Captain .  Zed - " Ahh . This is the life Ehh Mr . Luke ? " 
Luke - " Aye sir " 
Zed - " Yup . The fresh open air . This nice ship with attachments of a monster . That pile of gold we took from that ship which was sinking . And most importantly .... 
Amy- * Blushes *
Zed- " Rum !! " 
Amy - * Face dampens * 
Zed - " Nothing could ruin this life " * Starts drinking his fifth bottle of rum *
Matthew - " Um .. Sir . There be a black spot in the water .  " 
Zed - * Spits out rum * "  Did you just say Black Spot ? "
Matthew - " Aye sir. I did just say Black Spot " 
Zed - " Of course you did .  Ok .  It seems that the good days are past us .  .  I think Death himself may be paying us a little visit " 


( Listen to this until I say to stop ) :  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E



The sky around The Unlucky Charm ( Zed's ship ) From the Black spot , arose a skull.  Underneath the skull , a pole . And  Underneath the pole , A ship . The Reaper's Bride .  And its captain . The Reaper of the Seas himself ... Captain Dedmond .  A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleported to Zed's ship . ( You can stop listening to the theme now )  .   



Dedmond - " Zed .  " 
Zed - " Dedmond " 
Dedmond - "   The map   "
Zed - " What map ? "
Dedmond - "  The one that secured your safety through my waters "
Zed - "  Ohh . That map .  Why didn't you say so ? "
Dedmond - " You don't have the map . Do you ? "
Zed - " Well would you beleive ... that I was just on my way to get it ?  Yes . It is located somewhere on an island ... on earth . "
Dedmond - " THats it . I am going to kill you where you stand !!!! .   * Draws sword *
Zed - " * Draws sword * Now lets not do anything we might regret here now   "
Dedmond - " What have you got to loose ? "
Zed - "  My life and ship and .. rum "
Dedmond - " Exactly " .
Zed - " I don't get it ? "
Dedmond - " KILL THEM . KILL THEM ALL !!!! "


Dedmond's crew of skeletons swing over onto Zed's ship . Drawing their swords . Zed's crew also draws their swords and  get ready to fight .



SWORDFIGHT :


* While the crews begin to fight Zed and Dedmond kick it off . Zed swings at the Head of the captain . Dedmond blocks with his sword and counter attacks and swings his blade at Zed's stomach . Zed dodges . Dedmond then swings at Zeds face repeatedly but Zed blocks then dodges then blocks then dodges then dodges then blocks then swing at Dedmond's chest  .  The swing barely scraped off some of the rotten flesh of which the dead captain was compiled of .  Zed swings his sword right but Dedmond blocks . Then he swings it to the left then Dedmond blocks . Zed then walks backwards until he stops at a wall unexpectedly .  Dedmond - " Gothca !! "   Dedmond thrusts his blade at Zed's heart but the captain ducks and barrel rolls between Dedmonds legs to escape. Dedmond's sword is stuck in the wall .  Zed - " Haha "   Meanwhile a skeleton accidentally cuts the rope which holds up  a canon . The canon falls on a baord set flat over a barrel of rum . On the other end of the board was a single bottle of rum which then flies into the air towards Zed . ( All of the ship stop fighting and watch the scenario unfold ) The rum starts to decend and is going to falls . Zed drops his sword and catches the bottle . Zed - " Whew . Close one " Zed turns around only to find the blade of Dedmond in his face . Dedmond Swings at Zed's belly and Zed steps backwards , loses his balance , and falls on the floor . Dedmond Points sword at Zed . 




Dedmond - " Now you die !!
Zed - " Wait !!  . I know I am supposed to get you the map and I am a bit late but would you rather have all the money and gold lost and hidden for ages . Or  would you rather kill one lousy scrawny  dusty ...
Amy - " Untrustworthy " 
Matthew - " Kind of cruel " 
Luke - " Selfish "
Zed - " Ok I think he gets it . What I am trying to say is that you could kill me or you could not kill me and get all the gold and money , furtunes untold from Atlantis .  Just think about it . Captain Dedmond . Discoverer of the Lost City Of Atlantis "
have no use for fame or fortune . The one thing I loved was lost long ago . And you will help fill the gap "
Zed - " But what if there was a way to bring her back ? "
Dedmond - " You are lying . Like you always do . "
Zed - " Nope . Not lying . No sir ree .
Dedmond - " Elaborate "
Zed - "  There is a jewel . It has the ability to bring back things that were lost from the heart of those who touch it .  You can get it but only if you let me get a map to it . And I can't do that if I am forever trapped inside your  .. sword . "
Dedmond - " Fine . But be warned . Cross me again and I will Kill you "  
Zed - " Of course you will "


The holes were Dedmond's eyes are supposed to be start to grow .  The sword in his hand  starts to glow as well and Dedmond thrusts his sword into the belly of Zed . Carving out out a skull in his belly . Using the Sword as a writing utensil .  He also marks around Zed's body . This did not kill him but secured a seal with The Captain . Dedmond withdraws his sword .


Dedmond - " Within Ten days the captain of this ship will die in this spot . And his soul  will be immediately transported to my blade . But if he delivers the item in question to me then the seal is broken . Within these ten days the captain shall not face death unless it be by my sword . You have Ten days Zed "



A flash of lightening strikes and the captain is telelported back to his ship  .  Zed gets up and shakes him self off .

 Zed - "  That was a close one " 
Matthew - " Well you seem quite happy for a man who has ten days to live .  "
Zed - " I prefer to think of it as ten days of adventure and rum . * Opens bottle of rum he saved from falling and starts drinking it *
John - "  Where too Captain ? "
Zed - " Let me check the Map .  Ok continue sailing in this direction then  turn left at this fish sign here "
Amy - " I hope you know what you are doing Zed "
Zed - "  I always know what I am doing . When I am not doing anything that is "   



That was long . Anyway I hope you enjoyed it . Chapter 2 coming soon  Also tell me what you think of the  "  Swordfight thing " And do you think that The dialogue is better displayed ? 
Ok this is book two of my story . It is also chapter 1 of book two . Enjoy 

Day :  


Zed and his crew ( And by crew I mean everyone on board his ship ) Are sailing happily through out the world . Nothing to worry about or get afraid of . Just the sea breeze and a wide , blue , watery , road known as the sea to sail upon . Yes sir . Life couldn't be better for the Captain .  Zed - " Ahh . This is the life Ehh Mr . Luke ? " 
Luke - " Aye sir " 
Zed - " Yup . The fresh open air . This nice ship with attachments of a monster . That pile of gold we took from that ship which was sinking . And most importantly .... 
Amy- * Blushes *
Zed- " Rum !! " 
Amy - * Face dampens * 
Zed - " Nothing could ruin this life " * Starts drinking his fifth bottle of rum *
Matthew - " Um .. Sir . There be a black spot in the water .  " 
Zed - * Spits out rum * "  Did you just say Black Spot ? "
Matthew - " Aye sir. I did just say Black Spot " 
Zed - " Of course you did .  Ok .  It seems that the good days are past us .  .  I think Death himself may be paying us a little visit " 


( Listen to this until I say to stop ) :  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E



The sky around The Unlucky Charm ( Zed's ship ) From the Black spot , arose a skull.  Underneath the skull , a pole . And  Underneath the pole , A ship . The Reaper's Bride .  And its captain . The Reaper of the Seas himself ... Captain Dedmond .  A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleported to Zed's ship . ( You can stop listening to the theme now )  .   



Dedmond - " Zed .  " 
Zed - " Dedmond " 
Dedmond - "   The map   "
Zed - " What map ? "
Dedmond - "  The one that secured your safety through my waters "
Zed - "  Ohh . That map .  Why didn't you say so ? "
Dedmond - " You don't have the map . Do you ? "
Zed - " Well would you beleive ... that I was just on my way to get it ?  Yes . It is located somewhere on an island ... on earth . "
Dedmond - " THats it . I am going to kill you where you stand !!!! .   * Draws sword *
Zed - " * Draws sword * Now lets not do anything we might regret here now   "
Dedmond - " What have you got to loose ? "
Zed - "  My life and ship and .. rum "
Dedmond - " Exactly " .
Zed - " I don't get it ? "
Dedmond - " KILL THEM . KILL THEM ALL !!!! "


Dedmond's crew of skeletons swing over onto Zed's ship . Drawing their swords . Zed's crew also draws their swords and  get ready to fight .



SWORDFIGHT :


* While the crews begin to fight Zed and Dedmond kick it off . Zed swings at the Head of the captain . Dedmond blocks with his sword and counter attacks and swings his blade at Zed's stomach . Zed dodges . Dedmond then swings at Zeds face repeatedly but Zed blocks then dodges then blocks then dodges then dodges then blocks then swing at Dedmond's chest  .  The swing barely scraped off some of the rotten flesh of which the dead captain was compiled of .  Zed swings his sword right but Dedmond blocks . Then he swings it to the left then Dedmond blocks . Zed then walks backwards until he stops at a wall unexpectedly .  Dedmond - " Gothca !! "   Dedmond thrusts his blade at Zed's heart but the captain ducks and barrel rolls between Dedmonds legs to escape. Dedmond's sword is stuck in the wall .  Zed - " Haha "   Meanwhile a skeleton accidentally cuts the rope which holds up  a canon . The canon falls on a baord set flat over a barrel of rum . On the other end of the board was a single bottle of rum which then flies into the air towards Zed . ( All of the ship stop fighting and watch the scenario unfold ) The rum starts to decend and is going to falls . Zed drops his sword and catches the bottle . Zed - " Whew . Close one " Zed turns around only to find the blade of Dedmond in his face . Dedmond Swings at Zed's belly and Zed steps backwards , loses his balance , and falls on the floor . Dedmond Points sword at Zed . 




Dedmond - " Now you die !!
Zed - " Wait !!  . I know I am supposed to get you the map and I am a bit late but would you rather have all the money and gold lost and hidden for ages . Or  would you rather kill one lousy scrawny  dusty ...
Amy - " Untrustworthy " 
Matthew - " Kind of cruel " 
Luke - " Selfish "
Zed - " Ok I think he gets it . What I am trying to say is that you could kill me or you could not kill me and get all the gold and money , furtunes untold from Atlantis .  Just think about it . Captain Dedmond . Discoverer of the Lost City Of Atlantis "
have no use for fame or fortune . The one thing I loved was lost long ago . And you will help fill the gap "
Zed - " But what if there was a way to bring her back ? "
Dedmond - " You are lying . Like you always do . "
Zed - " Nope . Not lying . No sir ree .
Dedmond - " Elaborate "
Zed - "  There is a jewel . It has the ability to bring back things that were lost from the heart of those who touch it .  You can get it but only if you let me get a map to it . And I can't do that if I am forever trapped inside your  .. sword . "
Dedmond - " Fine . But be warned . Cross me again and I will Kill you "  
Zed - " Of course you will "


The holes were Dedmond's eyes are supposed to be start to grow .  The sword in his hand  starts to glow as well and Dedmond thrusts his sword into the belly of Zed . Carving out out a skull in his belly . Using the Sword as a writing utensil .  He also marks around Zed's body . This did not kill him but secured a seal with The Captain . Dedmond withdraws his sword .


Dedmond - " Within Ten days the captain of this ship will die in this spot . And his soul  will be immediately transported to my blade . But if he delivers the item in question to me then the seal is broken . Within these ten days the captain shall not face death unless it be by my sword . You have Ten days Zed "



A flash of lightening strikes and the captain is telelported back to his ship  .  Zed gets up and shakes him self off .

 Zed - "  That was a close one " 
Matthew - " Well you seem quite happy for a man who has ten days to live .  "
Zed - " I prefer to think of it as ten days of adventure and rum . * Opens bottle of rum he saved from falling and starts drinking it *
John - "  Where too Captain ? "
Zed - " Let me check the Map .  Ok continue sailing in this direction then  turn left at this fish sign here "
Amy - " I hope you know what you are doing Zed "
Zed - "  I always know what I am doing . When I am not doing anything that is "   



That was long . Anyway I hope you enjoyed it . Chapter 2 coming soon  Also tell me what you think of the  "  Swordfight thing " And do you think that The dialogue is better displayed ? 
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Mr. Zed : nice! I loved the sword fight! That was a great story captain zed! In my opinion I think you shouldn't change a thing! So keep up the good work!
Mr. Zed : nice! I loved the sword fight! That was a great story captain zed! In my opinion I think you shouldn't change a thing! So keep up the good work!
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Great writing as usual. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Great writing as usual. I'm looking forward to reading more!
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Oh, so there are two books, I am going to have to do a lot more reading today then I had originally planned on doing. Other than that, I liked the swordfight, the characters are interersting, and i like how the book is shaping.
Oh, so there are two books, I am going to have to do a lot more reading today then I had originally planned on doing. Other than that, I liked the swordfight, the characters are interersting, and i like how the book is shaping.
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