I'm desperate for a story to use to make an RPG Maker game. If I like your storyline, I'll pay you for with worth 1000-1500 Viz. I'd like it to be intricate, with good side story. It can be long or short. Thanks.

I'm having the same problem but I have an idea, (kepp in mind I will probably use this myself as well)

setting: Erytuhar

Main character: Lucas (or make it a choice) (Boy)

Plotline: Normal kid (15) lives alone in small village whne he gets a notice that an unkown relative died and in his will, gave Lucas three items; a necklace with a large red bead, an unopenable box (shut with magyk), and a sword with the depiction of a dragon on the blade. Lucas gos to market to try and pawn the necklace but is attacked by a thief trying who steals the sword. Lucas gets to the pawn shop and the owner takes him to a back room to examine the necklace, telling him it's a Ryoushi. A Dragon's Eye. He gos on to tell Lucas that he can use the Ryoushi to preform certain Magyks depending on the type of Ryoushi. The one he ahs grants him the power to use fire. Lucas asks why the man is telling him this and the man answers by teleporting them to the hidden hideout of O-Card (the Organization for the Capture of and Analysis of Ryoushi for Dragon-race) and tells Lucas that he needs recruits. The player is given a choice to join or go find and fight the thief that stole the sword. If the first, then the player gets introduced to the various members including a Techie, a crazy, and a swordsman, the Pawn shop owner is the strategiest. Then Lucas tells them about the thief. O-card agrees to help him retrieve his sword amd send the swordsman with him. If the player chose the second choice they come directly to the thief without the swordsman. after defeating the thief, you get the sword and the techie appears and takes you back to the hideout to examine the sword. He figures out that the sword reacts to Ryoushi and will change form depending on what Ryoushi is inserted in the hilt. the player then gets four missions to choose from.

1. Training in the wild (this can be done infinately)

2. Search for Ryoushi in the castle up north.

3. Take down the thief's remaining followers

4. Leave and go to Glysdon (unlocked after beating the previous three)


That's all I got for now, I'll work on the four missions in depth later. Right now I have to sleep

Heres a story:
Start:
The main charecter is enjoying life when suddonly a rip in the sky appeares. The sky darkens and creatures of pure dark appear. The world is in peril.
What happens:
There is a way to beat them but they are immune to all human known weaponry.
You must find tha blade of light as it is all that can harm them.
You also can aquire scrolls to do magic attacks.
End:
A giant beast comes from the sky destroying multiple towns and cities. And this is the final boss.
Once beat all the dark creatures decintegrate as does the blade of light. The sky brightens and the rip closes.
THE END.

here a story:

setting: hyrule
Main charaacter: link,his talking sword, villagers, devil evil

story:
once upon a time link and villagers is living peacefuly.
and devil evil came he attack villagers and link.
climax:
link and sword goes to devil evil castle,And he kill devil evil.
End:
devil evil died,the villager is now happy and live peacefully.

deeppurple's sound good. I have a story for you to use. I was developing it an RP for about a year but never got it started at any of the previous boards I frequented. A couple things to note before I get to the details: First, the RP is mostly based on time travel. The characters will go through several time period and meet new allies along the way. Second, the story is the first of a 3-part saga. Any names I have will probably be changed by you, unless you see fit to use them.

The plot- The characters start off in a nice village called Avena surrounded by lush green fields and sparkling streams, the kind of environment you'd see at the beginning of most games or anime shows. (In my RP the number of members participating make up the party. This could be anywhere from 2 to 20. You of course are making a game, so I imagine you'll have just 2 or 3 to start with, if that.) Recently, though, there have been reports across the continent (not named) of different parts of the land slowly rotting or becoming infertile over the years. Large patches of fields and forested areas are noticeably going barren and have almost a desert-like feel to them. Most kingdoms are religious, so they sought out after a brave group that would investigate the problem, which they believe is a dark god casting darkness upon the land (keep in mind no gods or other deities exist in this world). This of course is where your group comes in You and your party travel to the Holy City of Falriel. After a battle (details later) you meet with the high Priest's Daughter, Aena and she joins your party. You are told that the dark god resides in the underworld where you are to go and defeat it to cure the rotting land. After being instructed to travel to a celestial alter of some kind which is located in the Nai Mountains you begin your travel. Upon reaching the destination the party steps onto the alter are transported to the underworld. Or so they believe....

After some flashy streams and bright, dazzling lights they finally emerge from a portal and drop to the ground. They get up and find themselves standing near a town. Around the town they can see the land, which a lot of it is visibly bare. Patches of dry sand are scattered through the grass fields and forests have fewer trees than back in the area of Avena. This of course looks nothing like an "underworld", so they go to the town to get an explanation of where they are. They come to find themselves in a land of what we called ninjas and martial artists. They meet an especially skilled ninja named Jeran, who shows the group around for a bit. After much talking the party realizes they infact did not travel to the "underworld", but that they traveled to the future in time. Knowing this, they naturally want to go home. Jeran agrees to help to take them to a similar alter. Boss battle ensues somewhere and sometime. They eventually reach the alter and Jeran suddenly passes out and gets a vision, one of his town. In it he sees a vast city, there are mighty towers of iron and glass that reach past the clouds in the sky. "Metal birds", big and small are in the air and on the ground everywhere. Colored lights sprinkle the city and the whole place is surrounded by a wall of soft light. Outside the wall of light he barely makes out what seems to be a never-ending desert of poison. Black clouds loom in the sky and in the last vision, just before he wakes up, he looks deep into the atmosphere and sees what looks like a giant, colored cloud. After coming to he is fascinated by this "dream" and, knowing the alter may be some kind of time portal, decides to join the party on hopes of arriving at the surreal city.

The party goes through a bunch of these warps or portals which exist at the alters or some other place, going far into the future and meeting new characters which join them. The further they go into time the more the land is dying and life seems gloom. Wars break out over areas of vegetation still as of yet unaffected by the world-wide rot. I can go into great detail if you become interested in this, Cookieman.

There are three side-quests in this story. The first one is a cave near the town of Avena, in which a large Black Dragon resides. The characters have access to this cave immediately at the start of the RP. However, the the dragon has 60k hit-points. Fighting would be an instant death to them all that point. This should tell you that party is able to go back in time to their original era, and after having gained experience and strength they can opt to beat him then. The rewards are extremely great for doing so.
The second involves going back to the city of Falriel. The city is under attack by monsters being controlled by a "dark" person who wants revenge on the kingdom. Beat him to get more good stuff.
The third side-quest takes place in the future, in the city Technolopolis, which is part of the story. The city is overrun by large mechs, robots and ground and flying-type machines. They are everywhere. No people live there anymore. The party can choose to go into a lengthy, sealed underground lab, named "Lab 04", which is still functional. They fight various creations made by scientists before deserting the place. At the end the party steps into a room tremendous in size. They activate a console screen. Here they find the recorded journal of the famous Dr. Xylo Protian, a very skilled cyberneticist and overseer of the various tests and experiments done in the lab. And here they learn the horrible truth about why the planet is rotting away- It is not caused by some dark god from the underworld. There is, infact, an enormous, dense colored mist of energy hovering near the planet. This mist is somehow draining the energy from the world, sucking the life out of it and absorbing it. Named "Energy Xtraction Entity" ('EXE' for short), giant cloud is the reason the planet is rotting. Over the course of a few thousand years it has been slowly eating and storing this energy for a purpose Dr. Protian never figured out. Nobody know where it came from or why it is there. Only that within several hundred years everything would be gone. No water, no plants, no life. The only option would be to travel to the nearest planet, rich in oxygen with mostly water on the surface and one giant continent. The problem with this is that millions of monstrous lizards live there. They have been found to be aggressive and people would never be able to live there without cities being crush and people eaten, despite the defenses put up.
It is after learning this they read about his last creation before disappearing- a very powerful robot capable of absorbing and using magic energy. Dormant in a capsule across the lair, the party activates it and engage in a fierce battle. After winning they install a program chip into it (what the Dr. lost disappeared in time trying to find). The robot reactivates and joins the party to destroy the EXE.

After completing tasks in the city they finally come to a metal structure. Met by a man in a thick hooded robe, whose face you cannot see, he activates to portals. The party has two options: take the warp that leads immediately to the EXE, or take the portal to a time tunnel, traveling to the EXE in the past. They fight enemies along the way. In the first choice the EXE is stronger. In the second choice the EXE is weaker in the past but they risk losing trying to fight their way to it.

At the end of the story the EXE is destroyed, but alas the planet continues to rot away. In the past, if they chose to fight it then, another EXE replaces the one destroyed and the draining process continues. All life eventually perishes, cities crumble and the planet turns to a cold, reddish barren wasteland. But not before people of the future flee the world to go somewhere else.
In the very last event the hooded man from before walks into a fire-lit room, kneels down and speaks to someone. He explains what your party did and the outcome of the battle. You hear an evil voice reply saying that it is his time to rise and that "they" will be sought after. The very last scene shows a stone statue of a strange being. The evil voice is heard again coming from the statue, saying "their time to fall is at hand". You hear him laugh as the everything goes dark. This is where the second part of the saga begins.

Long read, I know. I've went so far with this story as to create a list of the characters you meet and a little background for them. Characters

I also compiled a bestiary of all the enemies in the RP, categorized by the area they are in and listed their HP money dropped and experience gained from them. Enemies

In addition to this, I made a short video as the opening scene to the RP. It's not the greatest quality, but I had planned to redo it. I recommend letting it load for most of way before playing it. RP Story Intro

So, does all this sound like something to create a game with so far?

ok this is my story:

Ok you start out waking up realizing your not in reality. Then you realize your in a video game. And a nurse comes in and askes "Hello, have you eatin yet," and then you say "no i haven't but could you tell me where i am?" Then She'll say "oh your in the Land Of Vizz" then you say "no way!" then she says what are you talking about uhhh...mmm.... whats your name again?" then you input your name. Then she says "oh yes. I remember now. and yes you are in the land of vizzed (your name here)." then the owner of the Hospital comes in and basicly tells you the way you got in there and he says " I've been trapped in this game world for Forty years!" And he says "the only way they could get out is if the defeated the evil pixle king but once you destroy the pixle monster the quality will be distorted for 1-2 days and the good spirit of the pixle king is released and then the quality will go back to high quality and you teleport back to the Real World and they go home."

Originally posted by Cyro Xero

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deeppurple's sound good. I have a story for you to use. I was developing it an RP for about a year but never got it started at any of the previous boards I frequented. A couple things to note before I get to the details: First, the RP is mostly based on time travel. The characters will go through several time period and meet new allies along the way. Second, the story is the first of a 3-part saga. Any names I have will probably be changed by you, unless you see fit to use them.

The plot- The characters start off in a nice village called Avena surrounded by lush green fields and sparkling streams, the kind of environment you'd see at the beginning of most games or anime shows. (In my RP the number of members participating make up the party. This could be anywhere from 2 to 20. You of course are making a game, so I imagine you'll have just 2 or 3 to start with, if that.) Recently, though, there have been reports across the continent (not named) of different parts of the land slowly rotting or becoming infertile over the years. Large patches of fields and forested areas are noticeably going barren and have almost a desert-like feel to them. Most kingdoms are religious, so they sought out after a brave group that would investigate the problem, which they believe is a dark god casting darkness upon the land (keep in mind no gods or other deities exist in this world). This of course is where your group comes in You and your party travel to the Holy City of Falriel. After a battle (details later) you meet with the high Priest's Daughter, Aena and she joins your party. You are told that the dark god resides in the underworld where you are to go and defeat it to cure the rotting land. After being instructed to travel to a celestial alter of some kind which is located in the Nai Mountains you begin your travel. Upon reaching the destination the party steps onto the alter are transported to the underworld. Or so they believe....

After some flashy streams and bright, dazzling lights they finally emerge from a portal and drop to the ground. They get up and find themselves standing near a town. Around the town they can see the land, which a lot of it is visibly bare. Patches of dry sand are scattered through the grass fields and forests have fewer trees than back in the area of Avena. This of course looks nothing like an "underworld", so they go to the town to get an explanation of where they are. They come to find themselves in a land of what we called ninjas and martial artists. They meet an especially skilled ninja named Jeran, who shows the group around for a bit. After much talking the party realizes they infact did not travel to the "underworld", but that they traveled to the future in time. Knowing this, they naturally want to go home. Jeran agrees to help to take them to a similar alter. Boss battle ensues somewhere and sometime. They eventually reach the alter and Jeran suddenly passes out and gets a vision, one of his town. In it he sees a vast city, there are mighty towers of iron and glass that reach past the clouds in the sky. "Metal birds", big and small are in the air and on the ground everywhere. Colored lights sprinkle the city and the whole place is surrounded by a wall of soft light. Outside the wall of light he barely makes out what seems to be a never-ending desert of poison. Black clouds loom in the sky and in the last vision, just before he wakes up, he looks deep into the atmosphere and sees what looks like a giant, colored cloud. After coming to he is fascinated by this "dream" and, knowing the alter may be some kind of time portal, decides to join the party on hopes of arriving at the surreal city.

The party goes through a bunch of these warps or portals which exist at the alters or some other place, going far into the future and meeting new characters which join them. The further they go into time the more the land is dying and life seems gloom. Wars break out over areas of vegetation still as of yet unaffected by the world-wide rot. I can go into great detail if you become interested in this, Cookieman.

There are three side-quests in this story. The first one is a cave near the town of Avena, in which a large Black Dragon resides. The characters have access to this cave immediately at the start of the RP. However, the the dragon has 60k hit-points. Fighting would be an instant death to them all that point. This should tell you that party is able to go back in time to their original era, and after having gained experience and strength they can opt to beat him then. The rewards are extremely great for doing so.
The second involves going back to the city of Falriel. The city is under attack by monsters being controlled by a "dark" person who wants revenge on the kingdom. Beat him to get more good stuff.
The third side-quest takes place in the future, in the city Technolopolis, which is part of the story. The city is overrun by large mechs, robots and ground and flying-type machines. They are everywhere. No people live there anymore. The party can choose to go into a lengthy, sealed underground lab, named "Lab 04", which is still functional. The fight various creations made by scientists before deserting the place. At the end the party steps into a room tremendous inside. They activate a console screen. Here they find the recorded journal of the famous Dr. Xylo Protian, a very skilled cyberneticist and overseer of the various tests and experiments done in the lab. And here they learn the horrible truth about why the planet is rotting away- It is not caused by some dark god from the underworld. There is, infact, an enormous, dense colored mist of energy hovering near the planet. This mist is somehow draining the energy from the world, sucking the life out of it and absorbing it. Named "Energy Xtraction Entity" ('EXE' for short), giant cloud is the reason the planet is rotting. Over the course of a few thousand years it has been slowly eating and storing this energy for a purpose Dr. Protian never figured out. Nobody know where it came from or why it is there. Only that within several hundred years everything would be gone. No water, no plants, no life. The only option would be to travel to the nearest planet, rich in oxygen with mostly water on the surface and one giant continent. The problem with this is that millions of monstrous lizards live there. They have been found to be aggressive and people would never be able to live there without cities being crush and people eaten, despite the defenses put up.
It is after learning this they read about his last creation before disappearing- a very powerful robot capable of absorbing and using magic energy. Dormant in a capsule across the lair, the party activates it and engage in a fierce battle. After winning they install a program chip into it (what the Dr. lost disappeared in time trying to find). The robot reactivates and joins the party to destroy the EXE.

After completing tasks in the city they finally come to a metal structure. Met by a man in a thick hooded robe, whose face you cannot see, he activates to portals. The party has two options: take the warp that leads immediately to the EXE, or take the portal to a time tunnel, traveling to the EXE in the past. They fight enemies along the way. In the first choice the EXE is stronger. In the second choice the EXE is weaker in the past but they risk losing trying to fight their way to it.

At the end of the story the EXE is destroyed, but alas the planet continues to rot away. In the past, if they chose to fight it then, another EXE replaces the one destroyed and the draining process continues. All life eventually perishes, cities crumble and the planet turns to a cold, reddish barren wasteland. But not before people of the future flee the world to go somewhere else.
In the very last event the hooded man from before walks into a fire-lit room, kneels down and speaks to someone. He explains what your party did and the outcome of the battle. You hear an evil voice reply saying that it is his time to rise and that "they" will be sought after. The very last scene shows a stone statue of a strange being. The evil voice is heard again coming from the statue, saying "their time to fall is at hand". You hear him laugh as the everything goes dark. This is where the second part of the saga begins.

Long read, I know. I've went so far with this story as to create a list of the characters you meet and a little background for them. Characters

I also compiled a bestiary of all the enemies in the RP, categorized by the area they are in and listed their HP money dropped and experience gained from them. Enemies

In addition to this, I made a short video as the opening scene to the RP. It's not the greatest quality, but I had planned to redo it. I recommend letting it load for most of way before playing it. RP Story Intro

So, is does all this sound like something to create a game with so far?

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oh my god, that is a long post. how do you get things like this done? id never have the imagination to do something like that, amasing job!

I already wired him the Viz. I like it.

Took me a minute to figure out why I had been wired 1500 Viz. I almost forgot about this request. There are some details I can go over with you if need be. Otherwise it's you can create your own details to the plot.

Alright, once I get back into the motions again with RPG Maker. I'll probably will be hitting you up. I got really good with the program, then stopped using it because of my College football season takin' all my time. But once I get the drive to do it again, I'll use the story for sure.

I've got a story.

One day, Kakamizi was born. She holds in powers she will never fully wield properly. She must go on a quest to figure out why she got the powers and how to try to control them. She can command anything she wants, as long as it is solid. The only exception: The wind. She meets friends along that dark road. She only has a sword and a wooden shield to help her. Can she do it?

Name: Kakamizi's Quest.

Once upon a time, in a far away kindom there was a knight called 'sir beeck'. He wares a suit of gold armor, wicth mirrerd his heart of gold. He battled a fearless dragon that terrerised the town two years ago. But he wanted the best for both the dragon and the people, but the grumpy king ordered him to slay the dragon, he felt very sad for the dragon and inturn made him question the kings wizzdom, "Was the king the monster or the dragon". The end

main charater mario.
one day in the mushroom kingdom, a weird storm appered.
in the storm was a suberine. in the suberine was,bowser falling off the side??? mario was sure bowser was attacking,but he was not. he was magically flung off. "mario!!!"bowser said. "you better not be attacking!!!"mario said. they (of course) fighted and (of course) mario won. bowser told them sligs. he was the one who pushed bowser off. mario and bowser have to pass 13 worlds with rpg action in super mario rpg 2nd run!!!

I will tell you my story, but I keep the rights of writing it:

Title: Pandora's Hope

There is a boy named Ryuza who inherits a weapon called Pandora's gauntlet, and he must fight through the many evils that came out of Pandora's box, such as: Despair, Fear, Pain, Death, and etc.

If interested, PM me and I will give you a list of details

the main characters would be two girls and two guys. one of the girls(with a shy and stuck up attitude) and one of the guys(a joking comedian personality)would bebrother and sister. the other girl would come in later and have a weird personallity and be hyper most of the time. all four would be orphans while the two guys would be good freinds. the main hero (the other guy not the guy with a sister) would have a cool headed attitude but is bent on revenge. after the jester takes out his orphanage and kills his brother he goes on a quest with the other surviving orphans.(the brother and sister)after the group defeats the jester they learn of the plot to resurect thier fallen master and start a new quest to stop this evil from coming about.

on to the bad guys. all nine are team mates. you can decide the name for thier organization.

rose- the only female of the organization and can control plant. the only thing that she considers a freind is the giant poisonouse flower that is attached to her body.

blade- the leader of the organization. uses two sword to fight. the only people he considers equalls and freinds would be arrow and ace. the rest he considers lackeys.

arrow-because of his sarcastic and hatefull personallity the only person he gets along with is blade. he is a master with the bow and arrow.

ace-considers every one his brother but is crazy and demented. he believes any one not following the organization must be punished. uses playing cards to fight.

shadow-a ninja and master of stealth, he can hide withing the shadows and kill with the flick of a wrist. one of the most dangerose members of the organization.

squid- since he was a child he has loved the water. he eventually became a scientist and figured out a way to fuse him self with a squid. uses multiple weapons but generall uses his tentacles.

darkwing-a demon of night dark wing has the appearence of a half man half bat. uses swords to fight.

the jester-is a lunatic and laghs at the face of death(literally). he uses axes in his attacks, but his sharpest weapon is his wit.

steel-wears heavy armor and is very hard to damage. he doesnt have much of a personality and chooses to remain silent. when he does speak you can hear the intelligence in his words. uses flails and other heavy weapons.

their goal is to resurect their fallen master who was destroyed in war years ago.

i leave it to you to decide the plot and the names of the heroes and the organizations master. you can change the names of the villians if you want i suppose. (to any one who reads this plz pm me and tell me what you think.)

just do DBZ lol

Originally posted by deeppurplehaze95

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I'm having the same problem but I have an idea, (kepp in mind I will probably use this myself as well)

setting: Erytuhar

Main character: Lucas (or make it a choice) (Boy)

Plotline: Normal kid (15) lives alone in small village whne he gets a notice that an unkown relative died and in his will, gave Lucas three items; a necklace with a large red bead, an unopenable box (shut with magyk), and a sword with the depiction of a dragon on the blade. Lucas gos to market to try and pawn the necklace but is attacked by a thief trying who steals the sword. Lucas gets to the pawn shop and the owner takes him to a back room to examine the necklace, telling him it's a Ryoushi. A Dragon's Eye. He gos on to tell Lucas that he can use the Ryoushi to preform certain Magyks depending on the type of Ryoushi. The one he ahs grants him the power to use fire. Lucas asks why the man is telling him this and the man answers by teleporting them to the hidden hideout of O-Card (the Organization for the Capture of and Analysis of Ryoushi for Dragon-race) and tells Lucas that he needs recruits. The player is given a choice to join or go find and fight the thief that stole the sword. If the first, then the player gets introduced to the various members including a Techie, a crazy, and a swordsman, the Pawn shop owner is the strategiest. Then Lucas tells them about the thief. O-card agrees to help him retrieve his sword amd send the swordsman with him. If the player chose the second choice they come directly to the thief without the swordsman. after defeating the thief, you get the sword and the techie appears and takes you back to the hideout to examine the sword. He figures out that the sword reacts to Ryoushi and will change form depending on what Ryoushi is inserted in the hilt. the player then gets four missions to choose from.

1. Training in the wild (this can be done infinately)

2. Search for Ryoushi in the castle up north.

3. Take down the thief's remaining followers

4. Leave and go to Glysdon (unlocked after beating the previous three)


That's all I got for now, I'll work on the four missions in depth later. Right now I have to sleep

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Personally I like this one, I know its just something for now, but its def a good start....keep up the good work man!!!!!

Originally posted by Cookieman

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Alright, once I get back into the motions again with RPG Maker. I'll probably will be hitting you up. I got really good with the program, then stopped using it because of my College football season takin' all my time. But once I get the drive to do it again, I'll use the story for sure.

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Based on this, I guess the deal is already done.
Cookie: Just pm one of the globals or me if you want it to be reopened