The Problem

I’ve?written several reviews, but I feel like that the quality of each review is the?same as the last. I don’t think I’m progressing at all.


The Solution

I’ve made this listing on how users can help me?with my problem while earning Viz. How you can help and the rules are listed?below:


How to Help1

Criticize my reviews! That’s right, I’ll be?giving 100 Viz for each review you criticize. Since I’m too poor on viz, I can only?give a user 100 Viz for each review they criticize, regardless of how many?criticism is stated. So the user can earn a total of 300 viz!


Rules

-Criticisms?must state flaws and how to fix them. If you say: ‘The depth needs more?details’ or ‘You should write more on the graphics’, then state how I can do?so. It’s pretty useless naming these flaws if I can’t figure out how to fix?them.

-If you don't state how to fix them, you only get 50 Viz.

-Criticisms?must be different for each review, unless provided by a detailed and valid?reason.

-Praise?won’t give you any viz, but it’s welcomed.

-If?your criticism is already stated by another user, I’ll unfortunately only give?you 10 Viz. If you abuse this, I won’t give you any Viz.


General Info.

-I?omitted my first review because it has too much mistakes on it, so I won’t?reward people who commented on it.

-My?reviews will ALWAYS include Breakdowns, please don’t tell me to exclude.

-I’m?writing reviews to improve my writing skills, so grammar and punctuation?criticisms are more wanted.

-Trying?to avoid using colons since they summon people.

-Trying?to avoid using html tags.

-If?you want to be eligible for this, post on both this thread saying which review?you posted on.


How to Help2

Another reason I write reviews is to make the?games noticeable to the public. So in this section, I want you to take?screenshots of the games! I’ll only be rewarding one screenshot per game, as?I’m too low on Viz to provide more. I’ll be awarding 100 Viz on the screenshot?per game. Here are the rules:


Rules

-Only?one screenshot per game will be rewarded.

-Screenshots?need to have a description on them relating to the game or screenshot.

-If?you take the same screenshot as another user, you must provide a different?description.

-Screenshots?with no description will only be awarded with 10 Viz.

-This?does not apply if you already have screenshots in the games, but you can take?another one to be eligible!

-If?you want to be eligible for this, post on this thread saying which game you?took a screenshot in and on what category it’s located in. Also post what the?description is in this thread.


General Info.

-You?can earn a total of 300 Viz in this section.

-Try?to get a unique screenshot, so people will rate them!

-You?can find the games when click on the reviews, on the top portion.


Reviews

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=63124

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=63199

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=63338


So?in conclusion, you can earn a total of 600 Viz if you do all the above! It’s?going to take a while for me to verify everything, so please be patient to receive?your Viz.

Also, you’re not required to do everything. If?you want to do just one of them, it’s fine.

***This offer will expire on the 20th of August, Vizzed Time, OR when I run out of Viz. Whichever comes first. Any submissions after the 20th will be ignored.***

I'll begin with a critique of Little Magic and I can be very critical. The proofread and rewrite portion of any writing project can be difficult for some. I consider it a challenge and hope that you will not consider my comments over critical. If I decide to help you with the other two this post will be edited to indicate my intentions.  

thephantombrain :

Very well then, but make sure to post the criticism on the review itself instead of this thread. By posting here, I now have verification that you did/are going to do a critique of my reviews.