I like the game well because it has moves from generation 4-5 and also abilities, but there are some changes that I wish I could make like instead of Pokémon with low levels to train your Pokémon I say I would want to have some areas with a little higher level Pokémon. Some places have glitches like game freeze or something else and I wish they would have a little less glitch situations. Rather than dragon starters why not have any kind of starter from any region you can choose. Last but not least some trainers or leaders have too high Pokémon to defeat so I would want to have some battles that have the Pokémon with a little high or low level.

Okay I like your positive attitude towards the game, but I think that you can go into a lot of detail and elaborate more on the concept and all categories of the game. I t would really help if you went into depth wit each category of the game like graphics sound and addictiveness, etc. I think it would make your reviews a lot more detailed and throughout on the game. Plus length wouldn't be a problem. I am currently playing this game and it is awesome far, especially with the dragon type Pokémon as starters. It is just awesome! I know I am going to enjoy this game very much and it is going to turn out to be an excellent hack to play. Overall not bad, just work on elaborating on your review and breaking it down into categories and give your explanation or summary for that part of the game in paragraph form. Nice work and keep up the good work and keep reviewing! 

Well you could have added details and show how why you made the scores that way for each category otherwise you tried a good job on trying to make the review all you have to do is reach out a little further in order for this to be a real good review. Just try to study on making a well made review so from all this I'm saying do not try to rush so hard on making a review because it actually takes time to make a perfect persuasive review, just keep on trying and you'll get there. Otherwise you have done a very good job and keep up all the good work so you can be the best at making a perfect review for people to read! 

Try to make your review spaced out and make it look professional next time. 

Yeah, this review could have some work done to it. It could have more categories, like graphics, audio, background, etc. 8/10.

lego2390 : This is not really a review sorry. This is just your opinion on battles in pokemon diamond and black