07-05-13 01:03 PM

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The trolls part 1, I hope you enjoy!

I am writing as I am the main character. This story might not make sense for some of the viewers.

Last night, me and Johnny were watching some viral videos.
"Ouch Charlie! OWWWWW!" This was "Charlie bit my finger" video on youtube.
"Ugh, this gets boring watching it every time." Said Johnny.
"Then what the baggins should we watch? Should we make our own one?
"Nah, if you are doing so. I am out."
"Ok." I said.
"Bye Samuel." Said Johnny
"Bye"
I slided my phone out of my pocket and called Sarah. One of my best friends.
"Hey, wanna make a viral video about trolls?"
"Of course!"

The next day, she brought some new camera. Some guy at the mall gave it to her.
"The guy looked kind of fishy, but he was a nice guy. The camera looked so good as well! She said.
So I got some actors from my media club and with some red troll masks.
"Hurry the baggins up dude!" Said the leader of my club, Eddie Crumpet.
"OK!"
I took a shot and they were sucked into the camera instantly!
"What the.." Said Sarah.
I looked at the picture I have taken and it just showed stick men with troll faces... walking around a playground...
"TROLOLOLO!" Said a troll in the picture.
Then he popped out of the camera!
"RUN!" I said.
We were running away from them as fast as we could.
We passed two of our friends.
Jimmy Poppins and Deane Martin.
"Hey guys!" Said both of them in unison.
"Shut up and run!" I said.
"What the..." They spotted the trolls and joined us in the run.
"Quick in the restaurant!" Sarah said.
We entered there and passed through all the people in there and went into the janitors closet.
"We are safe?" Said Deane.
"Not yet." I said.
I looked through the key hole, just to see trolls, trolling some rich people.
Pulling their chairs.
Going under tables.
Even giving them Molotov's as beer!
"We are screwed..." Said Jimmy.
"WHERE THE HECK DID THESE TROLLS COME FROM!" I said.
"We need to find out... find out." Said Sarah.

Part 1 done.
The next parts will make sense and explain why this is happening.
Stay tuned!

The trolls part 1, I hope you enjoy!

I am writing as I am the main character. This story might not make sense for some of the viewers.

Last night, me and Johnny were watching some viral videos.
"Ouch Charlie! OWWWWW!" This was "Charlie bit my finger" video on youtube.
"Ugh, this gets boring watching it every time." Said Johnny.
"Then what the baggins should we watch? Should we make our own one?
"Nah, if you are doing so. I am out."
"Ok." I said.
"Bye Samuel." Said Johnny
"Bye"
I slided my phone out of my pocket and called Sarah. One of my best friends.
"Hey, wanna make a viral video about trolls?"
"Of course!"

The next day, she brought some new camera. Some guy at the mall gave it to her.
"The guy looked kind of fishy, but he was a nice guy. The camera looked so good as well! She said.
So I got some actors from my media club and with some red troll masks.
"Hurry the baggins up dude!" Said the leader of my club, Eddie Crumpet.
"OK!"
I took a shot and they were sucked into the camera instantly!
"What the.." Said Sarah.
I looked at the picture I have taken and it just showed stick men with troll faces... walking around a playground...
"TROLOLOLO!" Said a troll in the picture.
Then he popped out of the camera!
"RUN!" I said.
We were running away from them as fast as we could.
We passed two of our friends.
Jimmy Poppins and Deane Martin.
"Hey guys!" Said both of them in unison.
"Shut up and run!" I said.
"What the..." They spotted the trolls and joined us in the run.
"Quick in the restaurant!" Sarah said.
We entered there and passed through all the people in there and went into the janitors closet.
"We are safe?" Said Deane.
"Not yet." I said.
I looked through the key hole, just to see trolls, trolling some rich people.
Pulling their chairs.
Going under tables.
Even giving them Molotov's as beer!
"We are screwed..." Said Jimmy.
"WHERE THE HECK DID THESE TROLLS COME FROM!" I said.
"We need to find out... find out." Said Sarah.

Part 1 done.
The next parts will make sense and explain why this is happening.
Stay tuned!

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07-05-13 01:08 PM

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Good story. Some grammar errors such as when you said "slided" you should have said "slid". Otherwise great idea for a story and i actually enjoyed reading it. I think you should definitely continue the story. Good job!

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07-05-13 01:17 PM

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jaws123 :
Thanks man!
I will continue the story!
As good feedback will make me try harder and to improved it.
Sorry if some people did not find it funny.
All it matters if you found it intriguing.
I will need to plan part 2 as well.