Here is my review of Paper Mario for the Nintendo 64!
Paper Mario is the first of the Paper Mario Series!

Story: 9 The Story Is That Bowser goes to Star Haven and Takes the Star Rod and Captures the Star Spirits, Locking them inside cards and hiding them in the Minion Fortresses. Mario then goes to a party at Princess Peach's Castle. Then Bowser Uses the Star Rod to create His Castle Under Peach's Castle to lift both castles into the sky. Mario Faces Off Against Bowser but fails because the Star Rod made him Invincible. Mario Then Wakes Up In Goomba Village and goes on a journey to save The Seven Captured Star Spirits and Take Back The Star Rod From Bowser! So The Story Is Very Packed and very Interesting to me 

Sound: 7 The Sound Track is not bad but I do not like much, my favorite would be Tubba Blubba's Theme.

Graphics: 4 For The Nintendo 64 The Graphics are not that good at all. The Super Mario Bros For NES has better graphics than this game.

Depth: 10 The Game Does Take about 5+ Hours To Complete and What I like about the game is the Save Blocks, They are in every perfect area to be in. They Are New Items such as Life Shroom, Ultra Shroom and many, many more. This Game also introduces Badges which changes Mario's abilities, Up Defense, and much, much more.

Difficulty: 5 The Game is not too hard to beat even though it is long and the controls are very easy to learn. some puzzles and mazes in this game may be hard to learn at one point, but its not too hard like you can't play it.

Addictiveness: 5 Some People may like to play this game more than one time, but for me, I like to play it only once because I do not like the game too much, but it is not too bad.

Overall: So That Pretty Much Wraps Up My Review Of Paper Mario!
The Game In My Opinion, I believe they could do better. 

This was a neat and awesome review coming from you. It had nice long detail, and it was verbally great. Nice work, and keep it up. Sorry for not reading the whole thing either. I really just was speed reading, and skimming through it .

tiber1976 : Hello there Tiber! I see you're a rival in the TdV! You're not far behind me!

Anyways, down to business! Awesome review man, you included various descriptions & details in this review which is great to see. Your spelling and grammar was actually pretty good, some tweaks are necessary here and there but other than that, I'm sincerely impressed.

You capitalised some words that didn't need it: "The Story Is That.." No. Don't do this! It makes your review look really unprofessional and can really make readers lose interest, i.e. me., luckily I didn't though! 

Also, I like how you laid your review out into different sections, that's nice to see. This made the review easier to read and took away from the strain of the capital letters. Good stuff. Also, you started with story which is something different; this is starting to get more common which is really brilliant.

Overall, not a bad review! Work on what I have said and you will improve! Good Luck in your next review!

Good review, but next time double-check your capitalization and be a little more specific. Keep reviewing and you'll get better in no time!