Hello! My name's Kruger or a.K.a TailsMage7! I've played this game up to the 2nd gym and am still continuing, so far the game has been very addicting, so I decide to make a review. This is my first one so it might be a little...different?

GRAPHICS 6/10 The graphics are okay, but for me it didn't give me the block-y graphics I like the best. Where you can see every little block. But it's still good.

SOUND 10/10 I didn't have any problems with the sound, it's still the addictive Pokemon music that everyone loves! I love the Pokémon battle music the best!

ADDICTIVENESS 9/10 It's a really,, really addictive game! The only reason I gave it a nine because...well, it's Vizzed, there are so many games it's hard to play just one and I got addicted to others too.

STORY 7/9 The story is good, there are still a bit of surprises, but it's still the same old "Beat Pokémon trainers, catch 'em all, beat the Elite 4"
But you can't really change that so seven!

DEPTH 9/10 I'm only at the second gym and I've played for more than 3 hours! There is so much stuff to do, that you'll lose track of time in all of it's amazing things!

DIFFICULTY 8/10 It's a little difficult in the beginning, but once you get used to it, it's so much easier and much more fun.

OVERALL 8.1/10 AMAZING GAME. I love it so much, me and my little cousin play it side by side and race and always go, "WOW! I DIDN'T KNOW THIS POKEMON WAS IN THIS GAME!"

I know this is your first post but can you add a little more detail in your next review?
but overall, this is a good review just try to add a little more into it.

tiber1976 : I think that was a little abrupt. You could have said some positive things about his review before actually throwing in a rhetorical question like that. Personally, I thought it was mean. I know you're a nice guy, I see you about the forums. I know you were correct with the more detail part.

Any who, Hello! .. How are you? ..

I like your small introduction at the start, it was very informative in my opinion! You also give us a little insight into how far you are into the game which is awesome. However, I don't think you should introduced yourself as that is for the newbie forum. You stated it was an addictive game so I hope to see a lot of detail in the 'Addictiveness' section! I appreciate this is your first review, so I won't be TOO hard on you.

First off, you gave valid points in your graphics section, that the graphics weren't what you would have preferred; this was also a personal preference which is great! I never see those in a review, thanks for that! I would say to use a word choice in your reviews. 'Okay' isn't really as informative. You could have said 'fairly average' instead, and this would have made a bigger impact on me.

I can see throughout your review detail and development is a let down. I think you should develop your points a lot more; this will ensure that your review is a detailed response to the game, and therefore you will grab the readers attention!

There are some grammatical errors in your review, but it's nothing to get into to much detail about!

Overall, nice, solid review. Keep it up & and work on development and structure! 

I would just like to say, Good Luck in your next review!