Pokémon Light Platinum is by far the most well-made and original Pokémon hack I've ever played, and I've played tons of Pokémon hacks!        Graphics - Same as Emerald, but with new character sprites! Love it!                                                                                                                          Sound - Again, same as Emerald, meaning AWESOME.                                                                                                                                                            Addictiveness - This one's a no-brainer. It's frigging POKEMON. Definitely a 10!                                                                                                                    Story - Very original and well thought-out! If I didn't know it was a hack, I would think this game was real!                                                                      Depth - Lots to do after the Elite Four. Tons of legendaries to catch, and tons of battles to be won at the PWC.                                                           Difficulty - Same as any Pokémon game. Not incredibly easy, but definitely not so hard that you wish to rip your hair out.                                                                                      

Your review is very to-the-point. That can be a good thing, but it's also very short. You could try to lengthen your review a little by going into detail a bit more about the game's story (without giving away plot spoilers, obviously). Good luck, I'd love to read more from you!

this is kinda short, but...this is a ok review, my rating for you is a 8.2/10. I gave you bonus just for trying...XD

XxStarryKnightxX : decent review,but what's up with the spacing. tips: You should go into more detail as to why this game was the best pokemon hack you ever played, All because It's a pokemon game it doesn't give us any ideas,as of why this game was addicting to you, You should explain more about the story and why it was also very original and well thought out... In other words you're review is not bad,but You can try expanding it so we can get a little more idea and information about this game and you're thoughts about it.
other besides that keep up the good work

XxStarryKnightxX : Hey there! How are you?

This was a short review, which isn't bad, it can very effective in some cases. You gave some very great points but you were just being obvious and stating something everyone could see, you could have developed on this and therefore made a massive impact on our perceptions. Take this as an example:

"Same as Emerald, but with new character sprites! Love it!" -  What was the same as Emerald? - The Scenery? What about the Scenery? Evidence to support this? - What do you love about the character sprites? Was it the face there were more pixels involved? More detail? etc.

I'm only saying this for you to improve, I'm in no way being mean. I want to you get better and better at reviews, so you will make bigger impacts and attract an audience to your reviews, you obviously want them to be thirsty for more of your reviews?

I would just say really work on developing. "This one's a no-brainer. It's frigging POKEMON. Definitely a 100" There is no support what so ever in that point. You just give us your opinion with no reasoning or evidence, this will score you no marks what so ever.

Work on your depth too. 

I'm not disappointed with this review, it was effective in that we weren't reading streams of text, like my reviews. Long reviews can be extremely effective also. More detail = More professional. 

Good Luck! & Work on what I said!  

True I really agree with you its amazing and I love how ash is in the game and also love how much exp. You get from one Pokémon  so great review and epic game! and one last thing is that you can get pichu after like 10 min. which it AMAZING!!!

this hack is my favorite pokemon hack also. probably one of the best pokemons i have ever played in my opinion.