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The Creepypasta I wrote

 

06-20-13 09:39 PM
Lightning Fang07 is Offline
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A Light Fang original Creepypasta related story.

Curses Nail

“It’s been three years since the incident…”A trainer say crying softly over a grave outside of the Burned Tower

of Ecruteak City… The simple little grave beside the tower was well kept

by the town who had felt sorry for the trainer who on this very day

three years ago lost their trusted partner.
—————————————————————————————————-
*Three years ago*

A young trainer walked into the city of Ecruteak his partner an Eevee

who happily sat upon its trainers head. Everyone looked upon this

joyful new traveling trainer happy at the innocent youth as he heads

toward the Pokémon center to heal both his Partner Eevee and team.

“Come to battle the Gym leader young man?”

The Nurse Joy asked the trainer who simply gave her a simple yes but

plans to do some training in the Burned tower and perhaps catch a rare

to find Magmar in there. When Nurse Joy returns his team to the young

man he smiles as his Eevee pops out to be beside its trainer for the

challenge for Normal types versus Ghost his eevee will need to learn to

bite… Everything had been going fine as he and Eevee trained and

successfully learned Bite but the simpleness of this training would

become much worse as the young trainer decides to go down the ladder to

where the three legendary dogs use to be… The basement but the strangest

part was of the brightly light upper floor the basement even with the

huge holes from the floor above, it was dark… Then things turned

terrible.

“Why is it so dark down here?”

The trainer questions how the light from above does nothing to the

lower level even with the holes but he brushes aside the eeriness of

the dark lower level of the Burned Tower but by doing so he sealed a

terrible fate. The sudden cry of a Pokémon frightens the young trainer

and his Eevee.

“A ghastly?!”

The trainer says in surprise as the Pokedex says that Ghastly don’t

reside in the Burned Tower or that they should be White with Red eyes

but again ignoring the sense of possible fear the trainer and his Eevee

go into battle against the white ghastly prepared to use the newly

learned move to win.

“Eevee use Bite!”

The Trainer declares and his Eevee pounces at the ghastly teeth ready

to bite but they go right through the ghastly which was unheard of so

the Eevee lands and tries again once again passing through until the

Ghastly decides to act a spectral like nail appears and drives itself

into the Eevee but unlike any other case of Ghost type using Curse this

one caused his Eevee to shriek and flail about in what looks like

sheer pain… Shortly after using the move the Ghastly vanished but the

trainers Eevee continued to shriek in pain as he picks her them up but

is shocked to find them BLEEDING!!!

“I HAVE TO GET YOU TO THE POKÉMON CENTER!”

The Trainer shouts and runs fighting back tears of fear for his

precious Pokémon partner but with every step he takes the Eevee

continues to Shriek and thrash about in his arms. The Trainer tries

running in hopes he can make it to the center before its to late but

this only makes the pain his partner is in get worse. By the time he

reached the Pokémon Center his Eevee was silent perhaps from the blood

loss but when he hands them to Nurse Joy she rushes the Eevee to ER

which terrifies the Trainer.

“I’m sorry but, she was to far gone to save.”

Nurse Joy tells the trainer that his Eevee had died from a Nail found

piercing her heart but when the nail was removed from the poor deceased

Pokémon’s heart it vanished… Later that month the trainer had his Eevee

buried beside the tower where their final adventure together had taken

place.
————————————————————————————————
*Present Day*

The Trainer readied to leave and began to walk away from the grave

but took a look back… He swore he saw sitting on the grave was the

spirit of his Eevee she was looking at him happily unaware she was dead

even with a mysterious nail driven into and sticking out of her back.

“I’ll see you next year… Visit again master.”

The spirit says then fades away as the trainer leaves.

A Light Fang original Creepypasta related story.

Curses Nail

“It’s been three years since the incident…”A trainer say crying softly over a grave outside of the Burned Tower

of Ecruteak City… The simple little grave beside the tower was well kept

by the town who had felt sorry for the trainer who on this very day

three years ago lost their trusted partner.
—————————————————————————————————-
*Three years ago*

A young trainer walked into the city of Ecruteak his partner an Eevee

who happily sat upon its trainers head. Everyone looked upon this

joyful new traveling trainer happy at the innocent youth as he heads

toward the Pokémon center to heal both his Partner Eevee and team.

“Come to battle the Gym leader young man?”

The Nurse Joy asked the trainer who simply gave her a simple yes but

plans to do some training in the Burned tower and perhaps catch a rare

to find Magmar in there. When Nurse Joy returns his team to the young

man he smiles as his Eevee pops out to be beside its trainer for the

challenge for Normal types versus Ghost his eevee will need to learn to

bite… Everything had been going fine as he and Eevee trained and

successfully learned Bite but the simpleness of this training would

become much worse as the young trainer decides to go down the ladder to

where the three legendary dogs use to be… The basement but the strangest

part was of the brightly light upper floor the basement even with the

huge holes from the floor above, it was dark… Then things turned

terrible.

“Why is it so dark down here?”

The trainer questions how the light from above does nothing to the

lower level even with the holes but he brushes aside the eeriness of

the dark lower level of the Burned Tower but by doing so he sealed a

terrible fate. The sudden cry of a Pokémon frightens the young trainer

and his Eevee.

“A ghastly?!”

The trainer says in surprise as the Pokedex says that Ghastly don’t

reside in the Burned Tower or that they should be White with Red eyes

but again ignoring the sense of possible fear the trainer and his Eevee

go into battle against the white ghastly prepared to use the newly

learned move to win.

“Eevee use Bite!”

The Trainer declares and his Eevee pounces at the ghastly teeth ready

to bite but they go right through the ghastly which was unheard of so

the Eevee lands and tries again once again passing through until the

Ghastly decides to act a spectral like nail appears and drives itself

into the Eevee but unlike any other case of Ghost type using Curse this

one caused his Eevee to shriek and flail about in what looks like

sheer pain… Shortly after using the move the Ghastly vanished but the

trainers Eevee continued to shriek in pain as he picks her them up but

is shocked to find them BLEEDING!!!

“I HAVE TO GET YOU TO THE POKÉMON CENTER!”

The Trainer shouts and runs fighting back tears of fear for his

precious Pokémon partner but with every step he takes the Eevee

continues to Shriek and thrash about in his arms. The Trainer tries

running in hopes he can make it to the center before its to late but

this only makes the pain his partner is in get worse. By the time he

reached the Pokémon Center his Eevee was silent perhaps from the blood

loss but when he hands them to Nurse Joy she rushes the Eevee to ER

which terrifies the Trainer.

“I’m sorry but, she was to far gone to save.”

Nurse Joy tells the trainer that his Eevee had died from a Nail found

piercing her heart but when the nail was removed from the poor deceased

Pokémon’s heart it vanished… Later that month the trainer had his Eevee

buried beside the tower where their final adventure together had taken

place.
————————————————————————————————
*Present Day*

The Trainer readied to leave and began to walk away from the grave

but took a look back… He swore he saw sitting on the grave was the

spirit of his Eevee she was looking at him happily unaware she was dead

even with a mysterious nail driven into and sticking out of her back.

“I’ll see you next year… Visit again master.”

The spirit says then fades away as the trainer leaves.

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06-20-13 09:52 PM
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Mohammedroxx3
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Lightning Fang07 : Wow! awesome job! I really like how you described everything from 3 years ago and then to present day! Keep up the awesome work!

Local Mods : Move to stories / simulation / art forums ?

Anyways awesome job and keep making awesome stories like this!
Lightning Fang07 : Wow! awesome job! I really like how you described everything from 3 years ago and then to present day! Keep up the awesome work!

Local Mods : Move to stories / simulation / art forums ?

Anyways awesome job and keep making awesome stories like this!
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06-20-13 09:54 PM
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mohammedroxx3 : Thanks and thanks for mentioning the better forum to put it in I'll move it now and maybe more people will notice it..
mohammedroxx3 : Thanks and thanks for mentioning the better forum to put it in I'll move it now and maybe more people will notice it..
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06-20-13 11:44 PM
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Local Mods : So sorry to double summon you guys to one thread, but I wanted to make sure you noticed this post before moving this.

Lightning Fang was unaware of how moving threads worked, and posted this in the Stories forum again. So you might want to just close or trash this one.
Local Mods : So sorry to double summon you guys to one thread, but I wanted to make sure you noticed this post before moving this.

Lightning Fang was unaware of how moving threads worked, and posted this in the Stories forum again. So you might want to just close or trash this one.
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