Okay, here is the new update to the popular Pokémon red romhack "proud eyes edition"

Difficulty : 7 / 10

Still the basic battle system, but with some of the changes...it promotes you to beat the game at a very low level. 

* if you over-level your Pokémon early...it really takes away from the challenge *

Depth : 7 / 10

Well...you can get your diploma in this hack. 

* the poke'dex really helps you out *

Story : 5  / 10

The same as the original...no text has been edited.

Addictiveness : 10 / 10

Since you are able to earn your diploma in this game...it is really a race to see how fast you can do it  " 

* you will be walking and surfing for hours trying to catch them all *

Sound : 7 / 10

Same music as the original...no music has been edited.

Graphics : 10 / 10

Wow...just wow !!

* then new battle sprites just makes you fall in love * 

Overall : 8.7 / 10.0

Hmm...this game is still the top GEN-1 Pokémon hack that is being emulated on cell phone / mobile devices. 

* a guilty pleasure for people around the world *

If you want to play a simple Pokémon game that will leave you with a smile on your face...try out this Pokémon red romhack  !!

Your review is OK, though it could use more detail into the categories. Also, I'm with you about this game being awesome. *to myself: Cade, you idiot.*