It's really cool I always wanted to play an apocalypse Pokémon game even better its a zombie Apocalypse. This game is basically Pokémon ruby and sapphire but with some twist from the normal story, it kind of reminds me of that awesome tv show called walking dead, u start in a meadow alone it has an eerie setting to it and a seemingly out of place patch of dessert sand with 3 poke balls on it. Baltoy Paras and I forgot what the other  was when u choose a Pokémon u leave the meadow and see birch being attacked by a zombie. The zombies even use Pokémon there Pokémon are zombies too. Man I got hooked on this game the story makes it more exciting than normal Pokémon. What was really cool was the demon corpse in the woods trying to take over your body by beating u. Heads up she has 2 Pokémon forgot what 1 was but the other was a zombie murkrow.There is 1 thing i will review to get surf go north of rubusto and take the magikarp from the dead fighter guy the magikarp is holding  the hm for surf. That's it for my review don't want to give to much away that's the basics see ya next time.
P.S. This was my first ever review.

Good review, but I've got a few pointers.
Organize your writing. Note the "be professional" tip on the side of the review page. Use subheadings like story, graphics, sound, etc.
Use proper grammar and spelling. Normally I don't tell people this but on the review page it says to use these, so you'd do good to follow the tips. 
Other than that, not bad for a first review.