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here is mine

Adventure of the parallel world

Chapter 1 the train

On a train to Fort Wayne Indiana on the train alien terrorists set up a time bomb that was set to explode in thirty minutes and destroy the entire train. Almost everyone was getting out. I Blake heard crying behind a door. I went in that door and found an alien. He had a captive I found a baseball bat laying around a grabbed it I used on the alien to attempt to save the person he kidnapped. After the epic battle the alien grabbed his captive and ran to the front of the train with twenty-seven minutes to go I went to the front of the train and saved him he just vanished into thin air disappeared. I then ran out as quickly as possible wimpier aliens attacked on the way I beat then up easily I then jump out and entered an abandoned school

Chapter 2 the other world

In the abandoned school I went to a random room I found a portal and entered the world. I was in a tower full of machines. There was one way to go because there was no portal back to my world yet. And there was only one unlocked door in that room. It had gloomy feeling to it
I entered the door and guards from the evil Matthew army captured me and threw me and some more people into a portal. I was in a field. The only thing I saw in the distance was a cave with a house behind it. I went into the cave

well.... here we go

MAGIC DIAMOND

joe,a kind and soft-hearted poor boy with a happy but starving family, found a magic diamond that can grant a wish. At first, he didnt believe it. but he still tried it... he wished to be the richest man in the world. after that, he went home. The once small and dirty house became a palace made of gold,full of servants that welcomed him and soldiers that were escorting him. inside he saw his family wearing expensive clothes, the table full of bread and fruits....so the diamond was true....

as time goes by, he became richer and richer. the town became poor because of his evil deeds he made to become richer. he was frightening the town's people to give their lands and wealths to him. if the people resists he kills the men and kids, makes the older women her slaves and he orders the younger women to give their body to him as payment for not giving their wealth. Once he becomes bored of their body, he orders his soldiers to rip off the women's head or he makes them his servants.

his family tried to stop him but he resisted. because of that, her mother became mad, slapped him and her tears bursted out. but instead of calming and obeying his mother, he even said that she was pathetic and laughed, after that, he went inside his room.

after that day, the rebels, together with his soldiers kidnapped him together with his family. they tied them tightly and said all the things that made their lives miserable. the death of their family, the crying of their children, their young daughters calling for help but they cant do anything but look, all of these because of JOE. the town's people decided that the right punishment for him is... death. they started to kill his young sister mercilessly.... he can see the fear on her face and tears flowing down her cheeks until she died. he felt a sharp stab in his heart. Next was his mother. she was crying while looking at him. He started to cry and said "mom". after he said it to her, she smiled sadly and said " i love you joe with all my heart, you are my precious son.... but i love you more when you where still the kind joe i know..." he replied "i love you too mom.... mom!!!"
she said "i'm glad to hear... you still know how to love... just like my sweet the joe". then she died. after that, he realized all the wrong things he had done, worshiping the money instead of happiness, love and God"

"it's your turn to die joe" then they stabbed him to death

...............................................................................................................................crrriiiing!!!!!!ccrrrriiiiiing !!!!!!!

"Stop your alarm clock already joe!" his mom yelled......MOM???..... "wake up now, you'll be late for your work....."
he touched his mom's face with questioning eyes and after some seconds, he already understands....everything that happened was just a dream! "i love you mom i love you. this good joe infront of you will never ever change just for money into bad one again ever!!(sob)"..."i love you too joe,i love you very much....umm... what's wrong with you?anything happened?"





thats all.... i hope you like it
its made by me and this one's original
please make a comment about it

juliet your story is really meaningfull you should worship god and care about those you love.