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11-17-12 02:41 PM
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This is my 1st review so I don't know how to do it really much...



ok so we have a bad game right here. In my opinion it is bad. It is the 3rd generation of Pokémon that are good but this game is hard in my opinion so that is what makes this game pretty bad in my opinion as previously said. So here is the review. It will be 2 paragraphs. Here we go!

ok so what do we have here? Pokémon emerald. It is the 3rd version of Pokémon ruby and sapphire. It is sort of like the Ruler of the 2. They say it is a (or the games are) a group. The region is henna in this game. They have a lot of hacks of this game but the 1st generation is the most popular in the world. This was paragraph 1. Soon to come, paragraph 2.


This is my 1st review so I don't know how to do it really much...



ok so we have a bad game right here. In my opinion it is bad. It is the 3rd generation of Pokémon that are good but this game is hard in my opinion so that is what makes this game pretty bad in my opinion as previously said. So here is the review. It will be 2 paragraphs. Here we go!

ok so what do we have here? Pokémon emerald. It is the 3rd version of Pokémon ruby and sapphire. It is sort of like the Ruler of the 2. They say it is a (or the games are) a group. The region is henna in this game. They have a lot of hacks of this game but the 1st generation is the most popular in the world. This was paragraph 1. Soon to come, paragraph 2.


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11-17-12 02:55 PM
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I don't want to sound mean but this isn't a review in my opinion. All you said is the game was bad because it was hard. Yeah I understand that its your first review. Next time be more specific about the game. Like what was hard about it. Just stuff like that. Just work harder next time and I'm sure you will have a juicy review.  
I don't want to sound mean but this isn't a review in my opinion. All you said is the game was bad because it was hard. Yeah I understand that its your first review. Next time be more specific about the game. Like what was hard about it. Just stuff like that. Just work harder next time and I'm sure you will have a juicy review.  
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Your review is confusing, uninformative, and... not even a review. If it was bad because it was hard, what made it hard? also, please take the time to look at your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. 
Your review is confusing, uninformative, and... not even a review. If it was bad because it was hard, what made it hard? also, please take the time to look at your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. 
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(edited by goodboy on 06-04-13 11:15 AM)    

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Personally, I do not think that this is a review. You should consider checking over your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Also, consider following the same format that other people use to write their reviews. Overall, Graphics, Sound, Addictiveness, Depth, and Story. Also, you should go into a lot more detail. Be sure that you have the right information also. I hope that you take the advice that I have given you and try to make great reviews!
Personally, I do not think that this is a review. You should consider checking over your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Also, consider following the same format that other people use to write their reviews. Overall, Graphics, Sound, Addictiveness, Depth, and Story. Also, you should go into a lot more detail. Be sure that you have the right information also. I hope that you take the advice that I have given you and try to make great reviews!
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goodboy: Don't be so mean? It's not spam, he tried his best, it was his first review..

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For your first review, and you even stated you don't know much about reviews, I have to give credit, where credit is due. At least you tried to write a review, and gave valid points.

I would just say to structure your answer, describe and then explain each of the sections; Graphics, Sound, Depth, Story etc. 

Also, explain your points a lot more, why was it bad? What was bad about it? Use what I use, P.E.E, Point. Evidence. Explain.

Not a bad review, just develop your points!

Some people are too mean and quickly highlight what you DIDN'T do, rather than what you did do. I'm not like that. Don't be put off by it, keep trying!

Good Luck!(:
goodboy: Don't be so mean? It's not spam, he tried his best, it was his first review..

Positive Feedback!

For your first review, and you even stated you don't know much about reviews, I have to give credit, where credit is due. At least you tried to write a review, and gave valid points.

I would just say to structure your answer, describe and then explain each of the sections; Graphics, Sound, Depth, Story etc. 

Also, explain your points a lot more, why was it bad? What was bad about it? Use what I use, P.E.E, Point. Evidence. Explain.

Not a bad review, just develop your points!

Some people are too mean and quickly highlight what you DIDN'T do, rather than what you did do. I'm not like that. Don't be put off by it, keep trying!

Good Luck!(:
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I think it is funny how so many said it was not a review, but only a few really gave helpful tips and points as to what you could do.

If your age as said on the site is accurate and you are 8, I see why you wrote this thinking it a review. 
In the future, don't just tell us "what we have here". Details such as 'this is a hack', 'it takes place here', 'it is 3rd generation', are not review points. Reviews are meant to take multiple aspects of the game itself that you experience by playing it and discussing the good and bad about those things you are talking about.  Those rating topics are there to help you come up with things to talk about.

Don't feel down about the posts here. Just use those as ways to make yourself better.
I think it is funny how so many said it was not a review, but only a few really gave helpful tips and points as to what you could do.

If your age as said on the site is accurate and you are 8, I see why you wrote this thinking it a review. 
In the future, don't just tell us "what we have here". Details such as 'this is a hack', 'it takes place here', 'it is 3rd generation', are not review points. Reviews are meant to take multiple aspects of the game itself that you experience by playing it and discussing the good and bad about those things you are talking about.  Those rating topics are there to help you come up with things to talk about.

Don't feel down about the posts here. Just use those as ways to make yourself better.
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CoolVanilluxe999 : Nice try on your first review! I know you are young and just starting out.

You need to add more detail to your review about the actual game/gameplay etc. Just talk about the stuff you liked while playing it.

Also, don't post a review that's not complete. It's better to write them in notepad or something and make sure they are complete before submitting online.

I'm moving this thread to the game discussion forum. Feel free to PM me if you edit it into more of a review format.

keep trying!
CoolVanilluxe999 : Nice try on your first review! I know you are young and just starting out.

You need to add more detail to your review about the actual game/gameplay etc. Just talk about the stuff you liked while playing it.

Also, don't post a review that's not complete. It's better to write them in notepad or something and make sure they are complete before submitting online.

I'm moving this thread to the game discussion forum. Feel free to PM me if you edit it into more of a review format.

keep trying!
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