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09-30-12 12:27 AM
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campaign to go to exotic lands ,
make guns in archery range ,
blacksmith making swords ,  
cutting boards in lumber camp ,
if their is a fight-game on ,  
buy out the whole market ,
mining cause gold my thing ,
grind food for you at the mill ,
war-war-war ,
so I set up the barracks ,
I'm the aztecs of this world ,
experience the real world ,
no new heroes ,
cause I'm one ,
eleven new units for you ,
civilizations can't compare to me ,
I'm zeus to the god ,
make a evolution with me ,
from the dark age ,
to the imperial age ,
so you flourishing by me.
campaign to go to exotic lands ,
make guns in archery range ,
blacksmith making swords ,  
cutting boards in lumber camp ,
if their is a fight-game on ,  
buy out the whole market ,
mining cause gold my thing ,
grind food for you at the mill ,
war-war-war ,
so I set up the barracks ,
I'm the aztecs of this world ,
experience the real world ,
no new heroes ,
cause I'm one ,
eleven new units for you ,
civilizations can't compare to me ,
I'm zeus to the god ,
make a evolution with me ,
from the dark age ,
to the imperial age ,
so you flourishing by me.
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Ghost.Busters,

   Alright, there's a couple things I have to say about this poem.

Nice job on referencing (even if unintentionally) Age of Empires: The Conquerors.
This isn't exactly a poem, it's more like verses from a hip-hop song based on the complexities, difficulties and intricacies of living life in the various ages this world has experienced.
   Your idea is good, but try refining it into a tighter form, traditional poetry maybe, with a rhyme scheme of ABBA ABBA CDCD, or many others. If you're up for it, and you do try to refine it, please post your results here! I would enjoy seeing the improvements.

- - ARLD 'Richard'.
Ghost.Busters,

   Alright, there's a couple things I have to say about this poem.

Nice job on referencing (even if unintentionally) Age of Empires: The Conquerors.
This isn't exactly a poem, it's more like verses from a hip-hop song based on the complexities, difficulties and intricacies of living life in the various ages this world has experienced.
   Your idea is good, but try refining it into a tighter form, traditional poetry maybe, with a rhyme scheme of ABBA ABBA CDCD, or many others. If you're up for it, and you do try to refine it, please post your results here! I would enjoy seeing the improvements.

- - ARLD 'Richard'.
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