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The Imposible Destiny It was a nice buietiful morning. nothing more to expect other then a bueitiful sunrise, the nice soothing songs of the birds, and last but not least the refreshing smell of pancakes sitting on a plate with maple syrup on them waiting to be eaten, at least thats what some other people think. so here we have a some lazy kid sitting in bed, with a messed up room. hard to belive thats our kid .... ok fine, that was lie that just the next door neighbor. There on the house to the right, a kid, sitting on a porch with his backpack. waiting for his school bus. so there he sits and waits for a few minutes. then a few minutes later he gets on the school bus and is going to school. There he is sitting learing, seeming innocent. but in another place. it a totally different story, but dont get your hopes too high, that was only a hint. after a few wasted hours, he leaves. But right now, at this exact second he is being targeted. you dont know who, you dont know where, why, and how. Destinies can be quite mysteruis, nobody knows whats going to happen. But enough talking about destinies and get back to this kid. but now, who you are hearing right now is the narrator, which would be you, so now why wont go ahead and have a look at his point of view, now shall we ? Mornings, mornings, mornings. I could be a morning person if morning happened around noon. but oh well thats life, wether you like it or not. so it is another lame day at another lame school. ( another hours later) ah now finaly rest. tommorow is the weekend. i got a ticket to a movie theater. my uncle said he would take me. My uncle was busy so he coudnt watch with me, so he went back. He gave me a cellphone, and told me to call if there was an emergency, and if the movie finished so he can pick me up. so on about 17 minutes after the movie all the lights and things suddenly shut down. some people git mad and thought that there was a problem with the player. after a few minutes everybody started to use their cellpohones for light. the staff of the cinema came and told us there was nothing wrong with player. some mistake must of happened. then all the cellpohones sigals started going crazy then they all said no signal, and shut down. then i quickly tried to callmy uncle but the same thing happened, no signal. Some one must of have done this. then we heard some gunshots and screaming. This is an robbery ! but why in a cinema. i didnt even care. no one could call 911. so i got under my chair for safety. and played dead, just incase these people were murderers not robbers. then i felt some hand. i was hoping it was the firefighters or cops. but i couldnt even see in the pitch black. these people must be wearig night vision goggle to see through this. Then a saw a blinding light even wih my eyes closed. then i started to scream wether it was a rescurer or murderer. then i was still in the bright light. now i was getting really dizzy. Then it all stoped the bright light went. now i could see perfectly. i was in some forest. with orange leafs. there is no forest wih orange leafs. maybe the bright light was all a dream and while i was sleeping. or maybe i slept through the cinema. You know what, whatever that was it was not a dream. it was a nightmare. i was about to get up but my legs were tied. and my arms were tied to my back. then some random guys came with huge guns. i was now starting to freak out. suddenly they put the gun up to, my head. i thought this was either a end to my nightmare. or a end to my life ....... ok whatever this is this is bad. he was about to pull the trigger i had no chance of getting out of here. then a shiny metal small silver thing came shooting out of no where and hit the guy in straight in the forehead, whatever that small thing was, it was sharp, cause i saw blood coming out of his fore head. another guy wearing a hood came out of no where and kicked the man with the gun in the face. it was a powerful kick cause he went flying. but what do i care, this was my chance to make a run for it. but legs for still tied together, and so were my arms. then i remembered before there were to guys holding a gun. then other got away. But he was still shootin one if the bullets hit me on the shoulder another on the leg. The guy in the hood caught sight of me and ran straight at me picked me up on his shoulder. Then after a few seconds he put me down laying a tree and took out a knife, a long one, or should i say a sword, i thought people dont use those anymore . so whats important is now the guy who just saved is about to kill me. is this like a race to kill me ? so know i was a goner for sure. but still, i am not sure if this is a nightmare or real life. Luckily for me, he was just cutting the rope off my feet and hands. so now i am starting to think he was sent here to save me, and if he was then, he did his job, and he did it good. Now, me and the hooded guy were just sitting there. i was too shy to say something, or to be more clear, i was afraid. then he got up and started walking then he pointed to me, and then he pointed forward. and started walking, I do not know what he means by that, but my best guess was follow me, and i was right. we started walking for a while. then we got to the silver mountains. it was a buetiful sight but it was cold. i started to sneeze. then we i saw a black thing far out. we got closer and it was a horse. i guess he left it here. but oh well we were in luck cause it would it would help us easily get through the mountains. then it had a sac on it back. The man in the hood opened it up, and took out some blankets and rags. he gave them to me and i think he wanted me to wear them. I wore the sweater and some layers of pants, and covered myself in a blankets. i felt much warmer. then he took out two bottle, one with water and the other with brown stuff, that looked like milk. and a cup. he put some water and the cup shaked it a bit and spilled the water out. so he washed the cup and put the white liquid in it. he gave it to me and i gave it a taste. Surely enough, it was milk. he put the bottles and cup back picked me up and put on top the horse. for a second i was scared. then he got on right in front of me. i held on tight to the saddle, and the horse started to walk slowly. Unluckily it started to rain. my clothes and blankets started to soak. The horse started run fastly now. Then a huge scary looking creature jumped out of no where. and started to chase the horse. The growling noise it made sounded more terrible then a zombie voice. it body was shaped like a gorrila's, but with brown fur, and it had the head of a bear.. The claws were huge. This thing was getting faster and and he just tried to get a bite of the horse. then it jumped and it was going to get us for sure then the hooded guiy took out his sword and threw at this beast. The sword pirced right through its skin. The bad thing was he hit it in the middle of his jump. Luckily the hooded man got the hosre to turn right quickly and we made it. The beast died, but i do feel very bad, cause all it ever wanted was a littl meal. Then our horse was tired out. we decided to stop and rest, and as we did, the rain stopped. he got the sac. and took out some carrots, the coffe bottle, water, a knife, and two apples, and one plate. then he walked away and came back a few minutes later with wood. Good thing the rain stopped now we can make a fire. i took off some of the blankets he gave me before cause they got soaked from the rain. He took up and knife and started to cut up carrots and apples and out them on the plate. he gave them to me. then showed me the bottles of water and milk. and gave me a cup. I picked water,and he fielled up my cup. so i started to eat. i tasted the water. and it was just the best water i have ever drank before. he took a bunch of other carrots and gave them to the horse. Then he tied him to a thin tree. Then horse layed down and started to rest. it was sunset now. i yawned i few times. but i didnt know where to sleep. it was all muddy and cold. and the blankets were wet. i had to use the bathroom, but there was no bathroom, well i guess i had to do it the classic way and found my self a bush. Now i am a getting really tired. then i found a tree that had a whole in it and decided to rest. it wasnt very muddy but,I put some leafs and sticks to prevent the mud from entering. and now i covered the ground with a lot of leafs to make it comfy. the Hooded guy poked in and then, he gave me a new blanket. this one seemed thick and warm and dry. now i guess i could have some nice sleep. but now my head was going mad with questions .... who is that hooded guy ? ...... who were those men all the way in the beggining who tried to kill me ? ..... who, where, how, why, when ?. All i know for now i am really tired and these questions are making me more and more sleepier ....... The Imposible Destiny It was a nice buietiful morning. nothing more to expect other then a bueitiful sunrise, the nice soothing songs of the birds, and last but not least the refreshing smell of pancakes sitting on a plate with maple syrup on them waiting to be eaten, at least thats what some other people think. so here we have a some lazy kid sitting in bed, with a messed up room. hard to belive thats our kid .... ok fine, that was lie that just the next door neighbor. There on the house to the right, a kid, sitting on a porch with his backpack. waiting for his school bus. so there he sits and waits for a few minutes. then a few minutes later he gets on the school bus and is going to school. There he is sitting learing, seeming innocent. but in another place. it a totally different story, but dont get your hopes too high, that was only a hint. after a few wasted hours, he leaves. But right now, at this exact second he is being targeted. you dont know who, you dont know where, why, and how. Destinies can be quite mysteruis, nobody knows whats going to happen. But enough talking about destinies and get back to this kid. but now, who you are hearing right now is the narrator, which would be you, so now why wont go ahead and have a look at his point of view, now shall we ? Mornings, mornings, mornings. I could be a morning person if morning happened around noon. but oh well thats life, wether you like it or not. so it is another lame day at another lame school. ( another hours later) ah now finaly rest. tommorow is the weekend. i got a ticket to a movie theater. my uncle said he would take me. My uncle was busy so he coudnt watch with me, so he went back. He gave me a cellphone, and told me to call if there was an emergency, and if the movie finished so he can pick me up. so on about 17 minutes after the movie all the lights and things suddenly shut down. some people git mad and thought that there was a problem with the player. after a few minutes everybody started to use their cellpohones for light. the staff of the cinema came and told us there was nothing wrong with player. some mistake must of happened. then all the cellpohones sigals started going crazy then they all said no signal, and shut down. then i quickly tried to callmy uncle but the same thing happened, no signal. Some one must of have done this. then we heard some gunshots and screaming. This is an robbery ! but why in a cinema. i didnt even care. no one could call 911. so i got under my chair for safety. and played dead, just incase these people were murderers not robbers. then i felt some hand. i was hoping it was the firefighters or cops. but i couldnt even see in the pitch black. these people must be wearig night vision goggle to see through this. Then a saw a blinding light even wih my eyes closed. then i started to scream wether it was a rescurer or murderer. then i was still in the bright light. now i was getting really dizzy. Then it all stoped the bright light went. now i could see perfectly. i was in some forest. with orange leafs. there is no forest wih orange leafs. maybe the bright light was all a dream and while i was sleeping. or maybe i slept through the cinema. You know what, whatever that was it was not a dream. it was a nightmare. i was about to get up but my legs were tied. and my arms were tied to my back. then some random guys came with huge guns. i was now starting to freak out. suddenly they put the gun up to, my head. i thought this was either a end to my nightmare. or a end to my life ....... ok whatever this is this is bad. he was about to pull the trigger i had no chance of getting out of here. then a shiny metal small silver thing came shooting out of no where and hit the guy in straight in the forehead, whatever that small thing was, it was sharp, cause i saw blood coming out of his fore head. another guy wearing a hood came out of no where and kicked the man with the gun in the face. it was a powerful kick cause he went flying. but what do i care, this was my chance to make a run for it. but legs for still tied together, and so were my arms. then i remembered before there were to guys holding a gun. then other got away. But he was still shootin one if the bullets hit me on the shoulder another on the leg. The guy in the hood caught sight of me and ran straight at me picked me up on his shoulder. Then after a few seconds he put me down laying a tree and took out a knife, a long one, or should i say a sword, i thought people dont use those anymore . so whats important is now the guy who just saved is about to kill me. is this like a race to kill me ? so know i was a goner for sure. but still, i am not sure if this is a nightmare or real life. Luckily for me, he was just cutting the rope off my feet and hands. so now i am starting to think he was sent here to save me, and if he was then, he did his job, and he did it good. Now, me and the hooded guy were just sitting there. i was too shy to say something, or to be more clear, i was afraid. then he got up and started walking then he pointed to me, and then he pointed forward. and started walking, I do not know what he means by that, but my best guess was follow me, and i was right. we started walking for a while. then we got to the silver mountains. it was a buetiful sight but it was cold. i started to sneeze. then we i saw a black thing far out. we got closer and it was a horse. i guess he left it here. but oh well we were in luck cause it would it would help us easily get through the mountains. then it had a sac on it back. The man in the hood opened it up, and took out some blankets and rags. he gave them to me and i think he wanted me to wear them. I wore the sweater and some layers of pants, and covered myself in a blankets. i felt much warmer. then he took out two bottle, one with water and the other with brown stuff, that looked like milk. and a cup. he put some water and the cup shaked it a bit and spilled the water out. so he washed the cup and put the white liquid in it. he gave it to me and i gave it a taste. Surely enough, it was milk. he put the bottles and cup back picked me up and put on top the horse. for a second i was scared. then he got on right in front of me. i held on tight to the saddle, and the horse started to walk slowly. Unluckily it started to rain. my clothes and blankets started to soak. The horse started run fastly now. Then a huge scary looking creature jumped out of no where. and started to chase the horse. The growling noise it made sounded more terrible then a zombie voice. it body was shaped like a gorrila's, but with brown fur, and it had the head of a bear.. The claws were huge. This thing was getting faster and and he just tried to get a bite of the horse. then it jumped and it was going to get us for sure then the hooded guiy took out his sword and threw at this beast. The sword pirced right through its skin. The bad thing was he hit it in the middle of his jump. Luckily the hooded man got the hosre to turn right quickly and we made it. The beast died, but i do feel very bad, cause all it ever wanted was a littl meal. Then our horse was tired out. we decided to stop and rest, and as we did, the rain stopped. he got the sac. and took out some carrots, the coffe bottle, water, a knife, and two apples, and one plate. then he walked away and came back a few minutes later with wood. Good thing the rain stopped now we can make a fire. i took off some of the blankets he gave me before cause they got soaked from the rain. He took up and knife and started to cut up carrots and apples and out them on the plate. he gave them to me. then showed me the bottles of water and milk. and gave me a cup. I picked water,and he fielled up my cup. so i started to eat. i tasted the water. and it was just the best water i have ever drank before. he took a bunch of other carrots and gave them to the horse. Then he tied him to a thin tree. Then horse layed down and started to rest. it was sunset now. i yawned i few times. but i didnt know where to sleep. it was all muddy and cold. and the blankets were wet. i had to use the bathroom, but there was no bathroom, well i guess i had to do it the classic way and found my self a bush. Now i am a getting really tired. then i found a tree that had a whole in it and decided to rest. it wasnt very muddy but,I put some leafs and sticks to prevent the mud from entering. and now i covered the ground with a lot of leafs to make it comfy. the Hooded guy poked in and then, he gave me a new blanket. this one seemed thick and warm and dry. now i guess i could have some nice sleep. but now my head was going mad with questions .... who is that hooded guy ? ...... who were those men all the way in the beggining who tried to kill me ? ..... who, where, how, why, when ?. All i know for now i am really tired and these questions are making me more and more sleepier ....... |
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