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08-07-12 04:09 AM
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Angel in a world of glass
The time for sleep has come and passed
And with it, life, the bloody stain
Beats gently to the pouring rain.

Awake and greet the coming day
Held by time and seas of gray
If storms bring darkness, love implore
That you should crash upon my shore.

I will lift you from the sands
And treat your wounds with my own hands
Expose your heart and set me free
Into a dream that's meant to be.

A world beyond the painted skies
Paved above the crashing tides
A place untouched by pain and time
Somewhere only yours and mine.

Through all the nights I've wondered why
I'll know the truth before I die
Heaven really does exist
My angel, you are proof of this.
Angel in a world of glass
The time for sleep has come and passed
And with it, life, the bloody stain
Beats gently to the pouring rain.

Awake and greet the coming day
Held by time and seas of gray
If storms bring darkness, love implore
That you should crash upon my shore.

I will lift you from the sands
And treat your wounds with my own hands
Expose your heart and set me free
Into a dream that's meant to be.

A world beyond the painted skies
Paved above the crashing tides
A place untouched by pain and time
Somewhere only yours and mine.

Through all the nights I've wondered why
I'll know the truth before I die
Heaven really does exist
My angel, you are proof of this.
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09-04-12 08:18 AM
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This is another good or nice poetry from my / your friend GuardianZack . We are proud of you . Your the man Guardian Zack.
This is another good or nice poetry from my / your friend GuardianZack . We are proud of you . Your the man Guardian Zack.
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09-05-12 06:17 AM
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Thanks, man. It's nice to know there are still people that can appreciate my type of artwork. Even if I only succeed in sparking interest or inspiring one person, then my efforts are not wasted. The feedback really means a lot to me.
Thanks, man. It's nice to know there are still people that can appreciate my type of artwork. Even if I only succeed in sparking interest or inspiring one person, then my efforts are not wasted. The feedback really means a lot to me.
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Wow that's really beautiful... I don't know if I completely understand it. (I've never been very good at understanding a lot of poetry) But I am not blind, this is beautiful, and I think you have talent. It has a lot of emotion. Thank you for posting it!
Wow that's really beautiful... I don't know if I completely understand it. (I've never been very good at understanding a lot of poetry) But I am not blind, this is beautiful, and I think you have talent. It has a lot of emotion. Thank you for posting it!
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guardian zack:how do you come up with these things ive allways bin pretty good withg poems but that touched my soul
guardian zack:how do you come up with these things ive allways bin pretty good withg poems but that touched my soul
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james44028 : There are some people who are born to create, and others to destroy; then there are those like me who are born just simply to try and give meaning to it all. The fact that I have such a gift is irrelevant- the important thing is having others to give it to.
james44028 : There are some people who are born to create, and others to destroy; then there are those like me who are born just simply to try and give meaning to it all. The fact that I have such a gift is irrelevant- the important thing is having others to give it to.
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Wow...
All I can say is... Wow.  I am completely and utterly stunned.  This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read.  Not only did it flow smoothly, the rhymes were great as in your other poem.  Furthermore, the topic was absolutely beautiful.

I loved how every little line itself was like its own piece of poetry, and that each piece just melded so smoothly together to make the whole. The imagery is awesome.

I can't even tell you how much I like this.

WOW.
Wow...
All I can say is... Wow.  I am completely and utterly stunned.  This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read.  Not only did it flow smoothly, the rhymes were great as in your other poem.  Furthermore, the topic was absolutely beautiful.

I loved how every little line itself was like its own piece of poetry, and that each piece just melded so smoothly together to make the whole. The imagery is awesome.

I can't even tell you how much I like this.

WOW.
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Wow , Nice . Another good poem from my friend Guardian Zack .. Hey man , keep up the good work ..
Wow , Nice . Another good poem from my friend Guardian Zack .. Hey man , keep up the good work ..
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