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04-01-12 12:31 PM
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I was 5, my dad abused my mother.I grabbed a knife and stabbed him..right in front of her.
All I've done my whole life is run, I'm 20 now and I am a murderer. Now I'm not like all murderers however..I don't kill those who are innocent I kill those who deserve it. Think of it this way, You do wrong I correct the wrong by removing you from the world. I wouldn't worry though, It's painless. I've seen guys abuse,kill,rape,and all sorts of other things but they have all paid for it. The police are always after me, I don't see why the don't understand I'm only doing good.



I've been all over the world, I have a girl the most amazing girl and a daughter, they don't know what I do for a job.Ok so I do a little bad, I tend to take the guys I murder credit cards, but hey A guys got to support his family and it's not like they'll be using it again. I'd do real work to get actual money but the police would catch me and This is more important. I feel it's what I have to do and my mother says i'm a good boy. I don't get why I do this, It's just what I feel is right.
Fixing the problems god brought in by sending them right back to him. Today I am going to murder a guy whose wife is beat by him everyday and get this..they are only together cause he raped her and forced her to be with him.



Today...marks one year since that day, I was murdered that day. I was murdered by the bad guy, I always thought good won but it seems that's not true, I am dead a ghost who wanders the earth haunting those who do bad.
I was 5, my dad abused my mother.I grabbed a knife and stabbed him..right in front of her.
All I've done my whole life is run, I'm 20 now and I am a murderer. Now I'm not like all murderers however..I don't kill those who are innocent I kill those who deserve it. Think of it this way, You do wrong I correct the wrong by removing you from the world. I wouldn't worry though, It's painless. I've seen guys abuse,kill,rape,and all sorts of other things but they have all paid for it. The police are always after me, I don't see why the don't understand I'm only doing good.



I've been all over the world, I have a girl the most amazing girl and a daughter, they don't know what I do for a job.Ok so I do a little bad, I tend to take the guys I murder credit cards, but hey A guys got to support his family and it's not like they'll be using it again. I'd do real work to get actual money but the police would catch me and This is more important. I feel it's what I have to do and my mother says i'm a good boy. I don't get why I do this, It's just what I feel is right.
Fixing the problems god brought in by sending them right back to him. Today I am going to murder a guy whose wife is beat by him everyday and get this..they are only together cause he raped her and forced her to be with him.



Today...marks one year since that day, I was murdered that day. I was murdered by the bad guy, I always thought good won but it seems that's not true, I am dead a ghost who wanders the earth haunting those who do bad.
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04-01-12 12:55 PM
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Cool short story, crazycatpup. I really enjoyed that. You show another face of the murderer, completely different of the original and typical murderer. Too bad, now he joined a better world. But if he can't murder anymore, at least he can haunt and he can't be killed, so I think it's a good ending
Cool short story, crazycatpup. I really enjoyed that. You show another face of the murderer, completely different of the original and typical murderer. Too bad, now he joined a better world. But if he can't murder anymore, at least he can haunt and he can't be killed, so I think it's a good ending
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Cool story bro. That's something that can entertain the little children people in camp sites for ghost stories. No, seriously, that's the perfect story for it. Anyway, good job with the story!
Cool story bro. That's something that can entertain the little children people in camp sites for ghost stories. No, seriously, that's the perfect story for it. Anyway, good job with the story!
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Nice story Crazycatpup! I like creative people. I think your story reflects a lot of what happens in the world and very sad to think what some people go through.
Nice story Crazycatpup! I like creative people. I think your story reflects a lot of what happens in the world and very sad to think what some people go through.
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