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Khinti Y'ov Vole




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Khinti Y'ov Vole
- Sorry I've been away for so long! Here's a new love poem
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Posted on 03-17-12 09:36 AM SourcedRemorses is Offline     Post: 241 words - (ID: 551763) - Post Rating: 0 - Report Abuse | Link | Post's Words Ignored |
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Hard heavy hearts pound,
Rushed breaths all around,
Bittersweet between my teeth,
Wholly flustering of the heat
Spreading over your silky soft skin,
Your velvet words, a hymn
To my ears – mine, to yours
Honest, all flaws.

Conversations, decisions
Desperations, the coming visions,
Our hearts grew and grew,
Time did not need to say how it knew

Beloved, betrothed, beauty,
Evening’s nightly duty,
Mesmerising smile,
Get lost with me, for a while,
A lover’s sweetheart,
Distance holds us apart

Time ticks,
Eyes stick,
Hearts beat,
Coherence, leave.

A kiss, a kiss,
Here, don’t miss,
Hold, entwine, entice,
Another, no, more; paradise.
Want, need
Take me.

Breathe, breathe,
I need, I need,
So suddenly,
You, me.

Just another; you
Under, I’ll do, I’ll do,
Lost lovers,
In and under the covers
Again, our breaths withhold,
Now, our tale foretold,
Name, your name,
Again, say it again and again.

Imagination, a catalyst; no feign.

Loving art
On my heart,
Venture, hand in hand,
Everlasting stand.

Yes, I do,
Overview,
Unravel something new

Please and savour,
You, me, saviours.

Wings of the lover,
We dive under,
Get lost with each other,
Say some more, my lover,
Kiss me again, kiss me goodnight,
Kiss me day and night,
Caress and touch,
It’s never too much.

Hold me close, hold me near,
I hear your heart loud and clear.
We’ll do, we’ll do,
Now I feel you

[Link to poem on my official blog]
http://wp.me/p2cX16-4l
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Posted on 03-17-12 10:25 AM Laian is Offline     Post: 22 words - Spell checked - (ID: 551776) - Post Rating: 0 - Report Abuse | Link
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Don't feel so sorry, this poem was really good and worth waiting, man

Ah also, welcome back to Vizzed Board

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Posted on 03-17-12 10:42 AM SourcedRemorses is Offline     Post: 49 words - (ID: 551780) - Post Rating: 0 - Report Abuse | Link
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Cheers man, and I am glad too. This poem took me a while to get the rhythm right. It looked like I was talking to myself in irregular speech if anyone had walked by haha.

Nice to see you back on my poems too! I've missed your delight :]
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