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01-27-12 03:28 AM
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So many tragedies and so many melodies
Play a song, try a symphony
I’ll write you a song; you’ll play me the rhythm
Sing me the tune; I’ll play the time given
Let me hear your voice echo around the room
Give me the sweet colours from red to blue
Paint me a scene that takes your breath away
I’ll hold your hands as you spin and sway
Let the elements fill your imagination
Create a world of your own generation
Guide me through your world by the hand
Tell me things I’d want to understand

Show me the beautiful blue sky
Climb the mountains to reach up high
Let the wind blow through
Smell the sweetness in the air
Take me down to the sea side
Tell me what’s on your mind
Let’s go back up by following a stream
Tell me about your biggest dreams

Let’s talk about our wonders
Let’s discuss our ponders
Pull me down next to you as you lay in the field
The wind blows you cold; I’ll be your warm shield
Look up to the sky and spot the clouds
Tell me things that make you proud
Let’s make shapes out of the figures too
I’ll tell you things that are true
You can correct me on little mistakes
Sit up quick, see through the trees, and see the lakes?

May I take you to the sea cliff, where wonders are met?
We’ll sit together warm, and watch the sun set
Sinking into the ocean and into the distance
Tucked away in a place where the magic may whence

You take my hand and lay in the field once again
Show me that smile, look at me with your ocean-coloured eyes
Shh… don’t say anything as you cast to the skies
Here comes the full moon and stars, so bright
There are several things that are beautiful tonight

So, will you stay awake; I don’t want to miss a thing
Choose a song to pass the time, together we’ll sing
Let’s talk about our future, talk about our big plans
Places that you’re going, places that I haven’t been
Let’s get drunk, I’ll drive you to the harbour
Wish upon a star – but, do you know what stars are?
Balls of fire, burning up the black space
Falling from the landscape
Exploding in the face of God
Did you know your world has a lot?
Taste the sailing, rolling down your cheekbone
Tell me that you’re alone; let me know that you want me gone
Feel your heartache that breaks within your chest now
Try to get some rest now; sleep’s not coming easy for a while

Now look at you, sleeping so well
It’s the sweetest thing to ever tell
Sorry if my whispers disturb you
I’ll leave you until the morning; I shall walk into the blue
Sleep well in the colours of your world
Goodnight compassionate girl
I’ll be back by tomorrow

In the colours of your world
So many tragedies and so many melodies
Play a song, try a symphony
I’ll write you a song; you’ll play me the rhythm
Sing me the tune; I’ll play the time given
Let me hear your voice echo around the room
Give me the sweet colours from red to blue
Paint me a scene that takes your breath away
I’ll hold your hands as you spin and sway
Let the elements fill your imagination
Create a world of your own generation
Guide me through your world by the hand
Tell me things I’d want to understand

Show me the beautiful blue sky
Climb the mountains to reach up high
Let the wind blow through
Smell the sweetness in the air
Take me down to the sea side
Tell me what’s on your mind
Let’s go back up by following a stream
Tell me about your biggest dreams

Let’s talk about our wonders
Let’s discuss our ponders
Pull me down next to you as you lay in the field
The wind blows you cold; I’ll be your warm shield
Look up to the sky and spot the clouds
Tell me things that make you proud
Let’s make shapes out of the figures too
I’ll tell you things that are true
You can correct me on little mistakes
Sit up quick, see through the trees, and see the lakes?

May I take you to the sea cliff, where wonders are met?
We’ll sit together warm, and watch the sun set
Sinking into the ocean and into the distance
Tucked away in a place where the magic may whence

You take my hand and lay in the field once again
Show me that smile, look at me with your ocean-coloured eyes
Shh… don’t say anything as you cast to the skies
Here comes the full moon and stars, so bright
There are several things that are beautiful tonight

So, will you stay awake; I don’t want to miss a thing
Choose a song to pass the time, together we’ll sing
Let’s talk about our future, talk about our big plans
Places that you’re going, places that I haven’t been
Let’s get drunk, I’ll drive you to the harbour
Wish upon a star – but, do you know what stars are?
Balls of fire, burning up the black space
Falling from the landscape
Exploding in the face of God
Did you know your world has a lot?
Taste the sailing, rolling down your cheekbone
Tell me that you’re alone; let me know that you want me gone
Feel your heartache that breaks within your chest now
Try to get some rest now; sleep’s not coming easy for a while

Now look at you, sleeping so well
It’s the sweetest thing to ever tell
Sorry if my whispers disturb you
I’ll leave you until the morning; I shall walk into the blue
Sleep well in the colours of your world
Goodnight compassionate girl
I’ll be back by tomorrow

In the colours of your world
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01-27-12 04:12 PM
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Laian
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Nice, really nice, it was like a peaceful melody when I read this poem. I was really relaxed, needless to hear a music in the background, the music was playing in my head while I was reading. Another one to add to my favorites poems I ever read, but once again, your creations are really good, man
Nice, really nice, it was like a peaceful melody when I read this poem. I was really relaxed, needless to hear a music in the background, the music was playing in my head while I was reading. Another one to add to my favorites poems I ever read, but once again, your creations are really good, man
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01-28-12 12:56 AM
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Yeah, with this poem I let a song play, and let it compose the poem in my head. I enjoyed writing this one because you can really feel the flow and the literal 'colours'. Glad you're enjoying my writing
Yeah, with this poem I let a song play, and let it compose the poem in my head. I enjoyed writing this one because you can really feel the flow and the literal 'colours'. Glad you're enjoying my writing
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