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06-29-11 11:31 PM
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Rules to follow when replying to the Role Play starter for the character Blade (From the movie not comic)

1: If you go into a battle with Blade. Do not auto my character. In other words. Don't control my character by automatically hit him, shot him, or kill him. Give the person a chance to defend himself. Though this is to see who can give the best reply.

2: Make sure you spell check your writing and use proper grammar.

3: It haves to be at least two paragraphs long. No short paragraphs or one liners (Don't give me just one line or it will be DQ)

4: Keep it appropriate. No nudity or sexual content.

Once I pick the winner of the best reply. I'll make it in the arts and story forum. I'll reward the winner 2,000 Vizz and the rest after a Role Play in the arts and forum Role Play. However, you can't just reply here and not Role Play in the forum. That will consider a DQ. Here's the starter. Have fun and good luck.

The night was young. A roaring motor could be heard in the distance. A 1968 black Dodge Charger with black tinted windshield pulls up in a large ally way. Two cyclist stood at a back door making deals with the black market but quickly stops to look to see what was going on when Blade pulled up blinding them with his high beams. Moments of silence, but only the revving of his motor nearly deafening the cyclist. Suddenly the engine stops and the only light that shun was of the dim street and back lights. The car door opening a tall male emerges wearing a long black leather trench coat that scrapped against the cold wet concrete ground. The hilt of his custom sword stuck out through the back of his trench coat. Slowly he makes his way to the two men staring them coldly down through his shades as he pulls back his trench coat showing off his custom Heckler & Koch USP with UV light bullets made specially for vampire killing. That gun was on his right as his custom Benelli M3 Super 90 shot gun completed with two silver stakes at the bottom. Stopping just a few feet in front of them. Blade tilts his head slightly to the left giving them off a cocky grin that only lasted seconds "Hmmm. What are you two boys doing in a place like this? I think its about time I did some cleaning here" Swiftly He pulls out his custom Heckler & Koch USP aiming directly at the two vamps. They reacted by darting up the walls to avoids Blades incoming attacks all the while he unloads his clips at the vampires trying to shoot them down. Those vampires retaliated by pulling out a 50 calibur pistol returning fire. The black market dealer to refuge behind the iron door not to get caught in the crossfire. Instantly without hesitation. Blade darted off in random places to dodge the incomming hell of bullets as he dips his right into his pocket grabbing another round of the UV light bullets. Upon reloading. Blade leaps onto a dumpster leaping up onto the fire escape railing using his left hand to grab the hilt of his sword. Waiting just for a brief moment he notices the vampires was reloading all the while trying to stay out of the daywalker's way, but to no success. Blade lept on top of the roof and throws a downward slice with his sword cutting the first vampire in half. Keeping his eyes on the first vampire. He aims his Heckler & Koch USP at the second vampire firing the shot hitting him in the head. A brief moment of silence. He watches the custom sword and UV light bullet turning them into ashes. Seathing his sword and holstering his USP. Blade jumps back down into the ally way in front of the iron door. Waiting. The black market dealer opens the door and Blade quickly snatches him up pinning him against the wall. "Listen here. You will tell me where you are getting these weapons from." He said pulling out his USP once more holding the barrel to his temple. The black market dealer shakes his head laughing nearly insanely as he pulls up his sleeve revealing the mark of a Familiar. "I will never tell you daywalker" Just then. Blade heard a noise near his Dodge Charger and sees a figure emerging from the shadow. Not clear to what the figure looks like. Blade yells out. "Who's there? Show yourself."
Rules to follow when replying to the Role Play starter for the character Blade (From the movie not comic)

1: If you go into a battle with Blade. Do not auto my character. In other words. Don't control my character by automatically hit him, shot him, or kill him. Give the person a chance to defend himself. Though this is to see who can give the best reply.

2: Make sure you spell check your writing and use proper grammar.

3: It haves to be at least two paragraphs long. No short paragraphs or one liners (Don't give me just one line or it will be DQ)

4: Keep it appropriate. No nudity or sexual content.

Once I pick the winner of the best reply. I'll make it in the arts and story forum. I'll reward the winner 2,000 Vizz and the rest after a Role Play in the arts and forum Role Play. However, you can't just reply here and not Role Play in the forum. That will consider a DQ. Here's the starter. Have fun and good luck.

The night was young. A roaring motor could be heard in the distance. A 1968 black Dodge Charger with black tinted windshield pulls up in a large ally way. Two cyclist stood at a back door making deals with the black market but quickly stops to look to see what was going on when Blade pulled up blinding them with his high beams. Moments of silence, but only the revving of his motor nearly deafening the cyclist. Suddenly the engine stops and the only light that shun was of the dim street and back lights. The car door opening a tall male emerges wearing a long black leather trench coat that scrapped against the cold wet concrete ground. The hilt of his custom sword stuck out through the back of his trench coat. Slowly he makes his way to the two men staring them coldly down through his shades as he pulls back his trench coat showing off his custom Heckler & Koch USP with UV light bullets made specially for vampire killing. That gun was on his right as his custom Benelli M3 Super 90 shot gun completed with two silver stakes at the bottom. Stopping just a few feet in front of them. Blade tilts his head slightly to the left giving them off a cocky grin that only lasted seconds "Hmmm. What are you two boys doing in a place like this? I think its about time I did some cleaning here" Swiftly He pulls out his custom Heckler & Koch USP aiming directly at the two vamps. They reacted by darting up the walls to avoids Blades incoming attacks all the while he unloads his clips at the vampires trying to shoot them down. Those vampires retaliated by pulling out a 50 calibur pistol returning fire. The black market dealer to refuge behind the iron door not to get caught in the crossfire. Instantly without hesitation. Blade darted off in random places to dodge the incomming hell of bullets as he dips his right into his pocket grabbing another round of the UV light bullets. Upon reloading. Blade leaps onto a dumpster leaping up onto the fire escape railing using his left hand to grab the hilt of his sword. Waiting just for a brief moment he notices the vampires was reloading all the while trying to stay out of the daywalker's way, but to no success. Blade lept on top of the roof and throws a downward slice with his sword cutting the first vampire in half. Keeping his eyes on the first vampire. He aims his Heckler & Koch USP at the second vampire firing the shot hitting him in the head. A brief moment of silence. He watches the custom sword and UV light bullet turning them into ashes. Seathing his sword and holstering his USP. Blade jumps back down into the ally way in front of the iron door. Waiting. The black market dealer opens the door and Blade quickly snatches him up pinning him against the wall. "Listen here. You will tell me where you are getting these weapons from." He said pulling out his USP once more holding the barrel to his temple. The black market dealer shakes his head laughing nearly insanely as he pulls up his sleeve revealing the mark of a Familiar. "I will never tell you daywalker" Just then. Blade heard a noise near his Dodge Charger and sees a figure emerging from the shadow. Not clear to what the figure looks like. Blade yells out. "Who's there? Show yourself."
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06-30-11 02:24 AM
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(Ok then, I'll do the best with what you've given... One question, though. Is this based off of anything or is it completely original?)

"See you later, then," the girl waved to her friends. They headed off towards the left while the girl went right. The girl wore her school uniform: a white shirt with a light pink bow and blue skirt. She had two short pigtails held together by two red ribbons. She held a light brown purse strapped over her shoulder that had a little bear charm attached to it.

"Bye, Mika," her friends waved back. Mika turned down the eerily dark road. The movie ran into late at night, so there was no one out. The only light outside was from the few streetlights that illuminated the road. Mika walked cautiously down the street, calming herself by humming.

She kept walking until she noticed a black car skewed into an alleyway in the distance. As she approached it, she could hear sounds of what seemed to be a struggle. Curious, she hid behind the black car and watched as one of the men skillfully took out two other people with just a few moves. But Mika was more scared than curious at this point. She stepped out from the car and made to leave, but was stopped by a voice.

She cautiously stepped out from behind the vehicle. Her pink hair and clothes were illuminated faintly from behind by the streetlights. She made a move to dash away, but hesitated and instead turned towards the two men. "Who's there?" Blade asked again. He readied his weapons in case the figure turned out to be a foe.

The girl froze in place with fear. Her body was shivering in the eerie atmosphere. She tried to say something, first as a quiet whisper that couldn't be heard. Blade commanded, "Speak up!"

The tense mood quickly dissipated as the girl snapped. "I- I said, 'D-Don't c-come any c-c-closer!' I- If you dare do anything, I'll... I'll... I'll scream really loud and the police will come, I swear!" She hadn't moved an inch from her spot, but she was practically screaming at Blade now.

(How was that? Was it a bit too light-hearted? I could change it if it's not what you're looking for...)
(Ok then, I'll do the best with what you've given... One question, though. Is this based off of anything or is it completely original?)

"See you later, then," the girl waved to her friends. They headed off towards the left while the girl went right. The girl wore her school uniform: a white shirt with a light pink bow and blue skirt. She had two short pigtails held together by two red ribbons. She held a light brown purse strapped over her shoulder that had a little bear charm attached to it.

"Bye, Mika," her friends waved back. Mika turned down the eerily dark road. The movie ran into late at night, so there was no one out. The only light outside was from the few streetlights that illuminated the road. Mika walked cautiously down the street, calming herself by humming.

She kept walking until she noticed a black car skewed into an alleyway in the distance. As she approached it, she could hear sounds of what seemed to be a struggle. Curious, she hid behind the black car and watched as one of the men skillfully took out two other people with just a few moves. But Mika was more scared than curious at this point. She stepped out from the car and made to leave, but was stopped by a voice.

She cautiously stepped out from behind the vehicle. Her pink hair and clothes were illuminated faintly from behind by the streetlights. She made a move to dash away, but hesitated and instead turned towards the two men. "Who's there?" Blade asked again. He readied his weapons in case the figure turned out to be a foe.

The girl froze in place with fear. Her body was shivering in the eerie atmosphere. She tried to say something, first as a quiet whisper that couldn't be heard. Blade commanded, "Speak up!"

The tense mood quickly dissipated as the girl snapped. "I- I said, 'D-Don't c-come any c-c-closer!' I- If you dare do anything, I'll... I'll... I'll scream really loud and the police will come, I swear!" She hadn't moved an inch from her spot, but she was practically screaming at Blade now.

(How was that? Was it a bit too light-hearted? I could change it if it's not what you're looking for...)
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(edited by Someone70 on 07-06-11 09:32 PM)    

07-21-11 08:22 AM
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Assuming you will tell the winner the name of the Role-Play game, I shall begin.

Hiding in the shadows, a mysterious man was watching him. He had been watching him for some time. In fact, he was spyimg on him. And what did he learn through out all this. He was skilled, he had to admit. But so was he. He was bitter filled in having to live behind his shadow all this time. Someone had to, didn't they? They were technology brothers. But he was sick of being a servent to some powerful vampires. He watched with ill-contempt as Blade drove into the ally where they planned to make a deal tothe black market.

Well, the vampires did anyway. He was the messager. But that would all going to change. He was sick of taking orders from other vampires. He wanted Blade. He wanted him alone. He knew that Blade would kill most of them, and question the rest. So he waited. Ah Blade, he thought, some of your moves are so predictable. As the battle drew to a close he stood up, holding a Katana in his righr hand, and started to walk slowly.

"Who's there?" shouted Blade. "Show yourself"
"In time," said the man. "But first, do me a favour and kill that man. I want us to be alone. If you don't, I'll be forced to kill him myself."
Assuming you will tell the winner the name of the Role-Play game, I shall begin.

Hiding in the shadows, a mysterious man was watching him. He had been watching him for some time. In fact, he was spyimg on him. And what did he learn through out all this. He was skilled, he had to admit. But so was he. He was bitter filled in having to live behind his shadow all this time. Someone had to, didn't they? They were technology brothers. But he was sick of being a servent to some powerful vampires. He watched with ill-contempt as Blade drove into the ally where they planned to make a deal tothe black market.

Well, the vampires did anyway. He was the messager. But that would all going to change. He was sick of taking orders from other vampires. He wanted Blade. He wanted him alone. He knew that Blade would kill most of them, and question the rest. So he waited. Ah Blade, he thought, some of your moves are so predictable. As the battle drew to a close he stood up, holding a Katana in his righr hand, and started to walk slowly.

"Who's there?" shouted Blade. "Show yourself"
"In time," said the man. "But first, do me a favour and kill that man. I want us to be alone. If you don't, I'll be forced to kill him myself."
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(edited by Darkpower508 on 07-21-11 08:36 AM)    

07-21-11 11:15 AM
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Darkpower508 : Unfortunately. I hadn't had the time to post on here to let everyone know that the competition is over. Someone 70 is the winner by default within the week's time limit. I know I didn't put it in the rules, that's my fault on that end, but it's over though. No one else posted during that time. So she won.

Juliet :
big fat cat :

Can I get this thread closed please? It no longer needs to be open. The contest if over.
Darkpower508 : Unfortunately. I hadn't had the time to post on here to let everyone know that the competition is over. Someone 70 is the winner by default within the week's time limit. I know I didn't put it in the rules, that's my fault on that end, but it's over though. No one else posted during that time. So she won.

Juliet :
big fat cat :

Can I get this thread closed please? It no longer needs to be open. The contest if over.
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07-21-11 01:06 PM
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Oh well, I had fun writing it. Care to give a little constructive criticism for my extract?
Oh well, I had fun writing it. Care to give a little constructive criticism for my extract?
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