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My First Poem

 

02-28-11 05:25 PM
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Here's a poem I wrote in class today. It took about, oh, 15 minutes to make. I've decided to take a Edgar Allen Poe-sortish style.

Time passes by,
a day, a week,
a month, a year;
yet nobody forgets
the times they fear,
even upon such day
so calm and clear.

They happen to ones
so innocently bystanding
'till their alert bell
starts to go ringing;
as their beautiful day
suddenly goes nay,
while they find hazards happening.

Nothing,
not possibly happening,
can be so horrific as this;
Physically, mentally, morally, do-for-ing-ly,
no tale be told
simply by telling;
even told true to the word,
and even quite possibly absurd,
yet no tale shall tell,
the entire true occurence.
Here's a poem I wrote in class today. It took about, oh, 15 minutes to make. I've decided to take a Edgar Allen Poe-sortish style.

Time passes by,
a day, a week,
a month, a year;
yet nobody forgets
the times they fear,
even upon such day
so calm and clear.

They happen to ones
so innocently bystanding
'till their alert bell
starts to go ringing;
as their beautiful day
suddenly goes nay,
while they find hazards happening.

Nothing,
not possibly happening,
can be so horrific as this;
Physically, mentally, morally, do-for-ing-ly,
no tale be told
simply by telling;
even told true to the word,
and even quite possibly absurd,
yet no tale shall tell,
the entire true occurence.
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03-01-11 02:11 PM
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Thats really good man Thats good for your first poem
Thats really good man Thats good for your first poem
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(edited by M!cH@3l 001 on 03-01-11 02:11 PM)    

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I am intrigued by it, but what is it about?
I am intrigued by it, but what is it about?
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03-02-11 04:06 PM
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AuraBlaze : It's about all the horrifying things that happen to you and how they can traumatize you for life.
AuraBlaze : It's about all the horrifying things that happen to you and how they can traumatize you for life.
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Whoa... you're joking, right? This seriously is your FIRST POEM!? There's no way that can be true. A poem this good must at least be your tenth.
Whoa... you're joking, right? This seriously is your FIRST POEM!? There's no way that can be true. A poem this good must at least be your tenth.
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iceycold724 : Thank you very much! I have a naturally creative mind, so I suppose it's not very surprising. I also made this in around fifteen minutes, so I could probably do much better. Anyway, thank you! It makes me happy when I get positive feedback.
iceycold724 : Thank you very much! I have a naturally creative mind, so I suppose it's not very surprising. I also made this in around fifteen minutes, so I could probably do much better. Anyway, thank you! It makes me happy when I get positive feedback.
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