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10-17-10 10:09 PM
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Here's a poem I wrote about two years ago that I thought I'd share with y'all. It's meant to be thought provoking and funny. Tell me what you think!

The End of the World


Ten...
Nine...
Eight...
Seven...
Six...
Five...
Four...
Three...
Two...

I was having too much fun.
I never heard "one."
Here's a poem I wrote about two years ago that I thought I'd share with y'all. It's meant to be thought provoking and funny. Tell me what you think!

The End of the World


Ten...
Nine...
Eight...
Seven...
Six...
Five...
Four...
Three...
Two...

I was having too much fun.
I never heard "one."
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Meh, I think it's alright. But I honestly don't see the point of it. Mind explaining this?
Meh, I think it's alright. But I honestly don't see the point of it. Mind explaining this?
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vizwiz123 : I meant for it to get people thinking about what they're doing today, and to do something productive. The person in the poem wasn't prepared for "the end" because he/she was wasting his/her time.
vizwiz123 : I meant for it to get people thinking about what they're doing today, and to do something productive. The person in the poem wasn't prepared for "the end" because he/she was wasting his/her time.
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Oh I see it now. Now that I know what this poem is about, I actually like it. Good thing I'm not the person in that poem.
Oh I see it now. Now that I know what this poem is about, I actually like it. Good thing I'm not the person in that poem.
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That's a funny poem man cool though
That's a funny poem man cool though
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hmmm... I see what you were going for now that you mentioned it, but when I first read it I interpreted it the opposite way actually. I read it as the person was enjoying life too much to waste their time with the countdown. Both interpretations make valid points though. Living in sin believing there will always be time to repent could lead to an unexpectedly hot wake up call... but obsessing over the end also means that you are wasting the joy that life has to offer.... you definitely got the thought provocation right, good job.
hmmm... I see what you were going for now that you mentioned it, but when I first read it I interpreted it the opposite way actually. I read it as the person was enjoying life too much to waste their time with the countdown. Both interpretations make valid points though. Living in sin believing there will always be time to repent could lead to an unexpectedly hot wake up call... but obsessing over the end also means that you are wasting the joy that life has to offer.... you definitely got the thought provocation right, good job.
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boltslinger40k : wow that is some great insight man good job
boltslinger40k : wow that is some great insight man good job
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It's short but to the point. Not bad. I could have done with a little more lead in. But that's fine.
It's short but to the point. Not bad. I could have done with a little more lead in. But that's fine.
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I interpreted it similarly to boltslinger. But either way, it's still an interesting poem.
I like.
I interpreted it similarly to boltslinger. But either way, it's still an interesting poem.
I like.
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supernerd117 : I liked this a lot. It's nice to see a change of pace! I think that it says a lot about people in general. We tend to think in day-to-day, binary thoughts while ignoring the future consequences and the long term effects of such behaviour. I also interpreted it as how so out of tune many of us are with the world around us. There is an actual apocalypse happening (well, the effects of climate change are pretty bad, but calling it an apocalypse does sound like a bit of a stretch to me) and yet we do not even notice. Brilliant work supernerd117!
supernerd117 : I liked this a lot. It's nice to see a change of pace! I think that it says a lot about people in general. We tend to think in day-to-day, binary thoughts while ignoring the future consequences and the long term effects of such behaviour. I also interpreted it as how so out of tune many of us are with the world around us. There is an actual apocalypse happening (well, the effects of climate change are pretty bad, but calling it an apocalypse does sound like a bit of a stretch to me) and yet we do not even notice. Brilliant work supernerd117!
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Very good, although I agree that a bit more of a lead in would be nice. I also took it to be someone not noticing the end because of living life to the fullest. Simple, yet thought-provoking. Good job.
Very good, although I agree that a bit more of a lead in would be nice. I also took it to be someone not noticing the end because of living life to the fullest. Simple, yet thought-provoking. Good job.
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