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09-19-10 07:08 AM
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Year 7025, the earth now has two moons orbiting around. The cities are in different floating islands, and all the vehicles now can fly. Motors, cars, trains... name it. Cities are made of steel, no more green plants and brown soils to be seen. All foods are now artificially made, even the fruits and vegetables. They grow them using a machine made by Robert Flux, a scientist who discovered the Celar-X potion. This potion gives an incredible superhuman strength for 30 minutes to anyone who drinks it. As great as it sounds, the side effects could lead into some serious health problems. That's why it is banned for public use and is now for military purposes only.

Thomas is a military student in US Military School. A member of Squad 7 around the campus, which is the elite squad for the elite students and is also the smallest squad compared to others. UMS is known as the best military school, and their students are often sent to different places to help the authority with problems concerning the military, and at the same time serves as training for them.

metal572 : Your turn
Year 7025, the earth now has two moons orbiting around. The cities are in different floating islands, and all the vehicles now can fly. Motors, cars, trains... name it. Cities are made of steel, no more green plants and brown soils to be seen. All foods are now artificially made, even the fruits and vegetables. They grow them using a machine made by Robert Flux, a scientist who discovered the Celar-X potion. This potion gives an incredible superhuman strength for 30 minutes to anyone who drinks it. As great as it sounds, the side effects could lead into some serious health problems. That's why it is banned for public use and is now for military purposes only.

Thomas is a military student in US Military School. A member of Squad 7 around the campus, which is the elite squad for the elite students and is also the smallest squad compared to others. UMS is known as the best military school, and their students are often sent to different places to help the authority with problems concerning the military, and at the same time serves as training for them.

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09-19-10 07:49 AM
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However, there is more to the second moon than meets the eye. At one point the moon orbited the planet Kehrah, a planet of wonders. Kehrah had an army, like any other planet, this army was lead by led by a war hero named Behul. Behul was a great leader, he had saved Kehrah multiple times. During the Kerah civil war, he saw his friend be killed by an rebel solider. When the war ended, he made sure the remaining rebels were given the worse punishment allowed by law, exile. Kerah had prison planets already, but Behul felt these planets where too good for traitorous rebels who had gone so far as to slaughter innocent people. He decided to imprison them on a moon full of hideous creatures, the likes of which made even the bravest of warriors shake. Behul was sure that the rebels wouldn't survive, but they were able to adapt to the dangers of the moon, and began to form cities. Behul feared that the rebels would soon be able to leave the moon at will, and decided to take action to protect Kehrah. He used the advanced technology they had to send the moon to what he thought was a barren wasteland of a planet, Earth. The rebels still inhabit the moon, growing in numbers,size,strength,and intelligence. They have created military schools, much like UMS. Jehral is a student at the New Kehrah Freedom Force academy, and the descendant of the rebel leader, and is expected to carry on the family tradition of being a legendary solider, and a cold blooded killer.

Juliet : your turn
However, there is more to the second moon than meets the eye. At one point the moon orbited the planet Kehrah, a planet of wonders. Kehrah had an army, like any other planet, this army was lead by led by a war hero named Behul. Behul was a great leader, he had saved Kehrah multiple times. During the Kerah civil war, he saw his friend be killed by an rebel solider. When the war ended, he made sure the remaining rebels were given the worse punishment allowed by law, exile. Kerah had prison planets already, but Behul felt these planets where too good for traitorous rebels who had gone so far as to slaughter innocent people. He decided to imprison them on a moon full of hideous creatures, the likes of which made even the bravest of warriors shake. Behul was sure that the rebels wouldn't survive, but they were able to adapt to the dangers of the moon, and began to form cities. Behul feared that the rebels would soon be able to leave the moon at will, and decided to take action to protect Kehrah. He used the advanced technology they had to send the moon to what he thought was a barren wasteland of a planet, Earth. The rebels still inhabit the moon, growing in numbers,size,strength,and intelligence. They have created military schools, much like UMS. Jehral is a student at the New Kehrah Freedom Force academy, and the descendant of the rebel leader, and is expected to carry on the family tradition of being a legendary solider, and a cold blooded killer.

Juliet : your turn
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09-19-10 08:26 AM
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Jenny is also a member of Squad 7, and pretty much the leader of the group. Far superior to Thomas who is the newbie member among them.
It's just been a week since he entered UMS, 3 days since he was assigned to Squad 7 and everything still feels new to him. The VT armor which is the standard armor for students, the laser guns, squad rooms, personal jets that doesn't require ammo for its weapons... everything.

He woke up at 5 am, didn't feel like standing up so he stayed on bed for 10 more minutes. He heard someone talking outside the room, so he went out and saw Jenny talking to a guy on a big screen.

Seeing the guy is old and got a military uniform on, he must be a commander in the Military force. A high ranked soldier, maybe?

"So what did he say?" He asked Jenny after she turned off the screen.

"They saw a pretty weird big hole on the ground in Felis City. The residents said there was some sort of explosion that happened and right after that the hole suddenly appeared out of nowhere. They're still investigating this matter. Well, they're asking us to help with the investigation."

"We're not detectives, we're soldiers."

Jenny didn't answer him and just rolled her eyes. She swiped her ID to the small machine beside the door. It opened and she went outside, leaving Thomas inside.

"Hey, How did you do that? Hey, I still need to learn things around here you know. Why leave all of a sudden?"

edit: forgot to summon
metal572 : Your turn
Jenny is also a member of Squad 7, and pretty much the leader of the group. Far superior to Thomas who is the newbie member among them.
It's just been a week since he entered UMS, 3 days since he was assigned to Squad 7 and everything still feels new to him. The VT armor which is the standard armor for students, the laser guns, squad rooms, personal jets that doesn't require ammo for its weapons... everything.

He woke up at 5 am, didn't feel like standing up so he stayed on bed for 10 more minutes. He heard someone talking outside the room, so he went out and saw Jenny talking to a guy on a big screen.

Seeing the guy is old and got a military uniform on, he must be a commander in the Military force. A high ranked soldier, maybe?

"So what did he say?" He asked Jenny after she turned off the screen.

"They saw a pretty weird big hole on the ground in Felis City. The residents said there was some sort of explosion that happened and right after that the hole suddenly appeared out of nowhere. They're still investigating this matter. Well, they're asking us to help with the investigation."

"We're not detectives, we're soldiers."

Jenny didn't answer him and just rolled her eyes. She swiped her ID to the small machine beside the door. It opened and she went outside, leaving Thomas inside.

"Hey, How did you do that? Hey, I still need to learn things around here you know. Why leave all of a sudden?"

edit: forgot to summon
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(edited by Juliet on 09-19-10 08:28 AM)    

09-19-10 09:13 AM
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Jehral was respected by many, and feared by even more, but he only had one true friend. His name is Seraol, he is also a student of the NKFFA. Unlike Jehral however, he is very clumsy and timid.

Jehral walks out of his room only to collide with another student. "Watch where you're going!" he yells.

"Sir, something awful has happened!" The student said frantically.

"Well what is it?" Jehral asked.

"It's Seraol!" the student screams.

"What Happened!?" Jehral asks with concern in his voice.

"He was on a training mission, he was learning how to perform recon on enemies, but the ship malfunctioned and he crashed!" The student says.

"What!? Who let him fly a ship alone? Is there an estimate on where he landed?" Jehral said.

"Yes sir, the estimated crash site is the closest city of the planet earth!" he said.

"Earth!?" Jehral screams. "He'll never get out of there alive, and if they find him they will become aware of our presence, I've got to get him out of there!" he screamed

Jehral starts running to the center of the school and gathers two top ranked students, named Laraos and Yeriahs, he leads them to the armory where they gather everything they will need for the rescue mission. The officers don't dare to question Jehral as he leads the fully equipped soldiers to a ship. The ship takes off and starts heading towards Earth.

Juliet : your turn
Jehral was respected by many, and feared by even more, but he only had one true friend. His name is Seraol, he is also a student of the NKFFA. Unlike Jehral however, he is very clumsy and timid.

Jehral walks out of his room only to collide with another student. "Watch where you're going!" he yells.

"Sir, something awful has happened!" The student said frantically.

"Well what is it?" Jehral asked.

"It's Seraol!" the student screams.

"What Happened!?" Jehral asks with concern in his voice.

"He was on a training mission, he was learning how to perform recon on enemies, but the ship malfunctioned and he crashed!" The student says.

"What!? Who let him fly a ship alone? Is there an estimate on where he landed?" Jehral said.

"Yes sir, the estimated crash site is the closest city of the planet earth!" he said.

"Earth!?" Jehral screams. "He'll never get out of there alive, and if they find him they will become aware of our presence, I've got to get him out of there!" he screamed

Jehral starts running to the center of the school and gathers two top ranked students, named Laraos and Yeriahs, he leads them to the armory where they gather everything they will need for the rescue mission. The officers don't dare to question Jehral as he leads the fully equipped soldiers to a ship. The ship takes off and starts heading towards Earth.

Juliet : your turn
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09-20-10 05:38 AM
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Anderson, another Squad 7 member, entered the Squad 7's lobby. He saw Thomas sitting on a chair, waiting for something. He looked at his watch and saw the time was 7:06am.

"Okay, bud, you're gonna be late if you're just gonna sit there a-"

"Boy, thanks a lot. You see, Jenny locked me in." Thomas didn't wait for Anderson to finish.

"Locked?"

"Err... well, not really. I just don't know how to..." He held his ID and raised it up a bit to show it to Anderson. "To... use this thingy..."

"Oh, just simply swipe it in the machine there."

"Oh, thanks bro."

"No prob. By the way, we gotta go."

----------------------------------------------------------------------------

Meanwhile, Jenny went first to Felis City to check things out. Seeing the big hole, she offered to enter inside it. As she went deeper, she started to notice that there was a big unfamiliar thing inside.

"Kinda like a ship." She murmured.

She went closer and observed things carefully. Just to be safe, she readied her laser guns.



metal572 : your turn
Anderson, another Squad 7 member, entered the Squad 7's lobby. He saw Thomas sitting on a chair, waiting for something. He looked at his watch and saw the time was 7:06am.

"Okay, bud, you're gonna be late if you're just gonna sit there a-"

"Boy, thanks a lot. You see, Jenny locked me in." Thomas didn't wait for Anderson to finish.

"Locked?"

"Err... well, not really. I just don't know how to..." He held his ID and raised it up a bit to show it to Anderson. "To... use this thingy..."

"Oh, just simply swipe it in the machine there."

"Oh, thanks bro."

"No prob. By the way, we gotta go."

----------------------------------------------------------------------------

Meanwhile, Jenny went first to Felis City to check things out. Seeing the big hole, she offered to enter inside it. As she went deeper, she started to notice that there was a big unfamiliar thing inside.

"Kinda like a ship." She murmured.

She went closer and observed things carefully. Just to be safe, she readied her laser guns.



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(edited by Juliet on 09-20-10 05:40 AM)    

09-20-10 07:22 AM
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The ship landed in a fairly deserted part of the city. Jehral,Laraos,and Yeriahs exited the ship and head to the crash site. When they get there and saw the hole the ship had made when it crashed, a great sense of fear for his friend's life struck Jehral.

"Shall we go in sir?" asked Yehriahs

"I'm going in, I want you two to search the area and make sure that no human gets near this area." "Remember, do not engage in combat unless it is necessary." Jegral said.

"Awwww come one sir! It's no fun being on a mission when you can't fight!" Laraos said obnoxiously.

Jehral punches Laraos and he goes down, then Jehral picks him up and says
"The humans must not know of our existence! Do not question me again!"

Jehral drops him. Laraos quickly gets up and goes with Yehriahs to search the area.

Jehral starts making his way down the hole. As he went deeper into the hole, he noticed Jenny carefully observing the area.

"Damn, the humans are already here." He whispers to himself.

He decides it's best not to engage just yet, instead he decides to shadow her untill he knows how many humans are there.

Juliet : your turn



The ship landed in a fairly deserted part of the city. Jehral,Laraos,and Yeriahs exited the ship and head to the crash site. When they get there and saw the hole the ship had made when it crashed, a great sense of fear for his friend's life struck Jehral.

"Shall we go in sir?" asked Yehriahs

"I'm going in, I want you two to search the area and make sure that no human gets near this area." "Remember, do not engage in combat unless it is necessary." Jegral said.

"Awwww come one sir! It's no fun being on a mission when you can't fight!" Laraos said obnoxiously.

Jehral punches Laraos and he goes down, then Jehral picks him up and says
"The humans must not know of our existence! Do not question me again!"

Jehral drops him. Laraos quickly gets up and goes with Yehriahs to search the area.

Jehral starts making his way down the hole. As he went deeper into the hole, he noticed Jenny carefully observing the area.

"Damn, the humans are already here." He whispers to himself.

He decides it's best not to engage just yet, instead he decides to shadow her untill he knows how many humans are there.

Juliet : your turn



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09-22-10 01:05 AM
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She sensed someone was looking at her, so she looked around, but didn't see anyone.

"Meh.."

She went closer to the ship and heard a soft voice coming from inside. She couldn't hear it clearly but she was positive that she heard someone speaking.

"Hey Jenny!" Thomas shouted as he came closer to where Jenny was standing.

She got shocked for a second and realized that it was just Thomas. She tried her best to still look composed after that, and it seemed that it worked.

"Shh, you're noisy." Jenny didn't bother to look at Thomas for more than 2 seconds. Instead, she held her laser gun with her two hands and charged it up for full power beam, and looked back at the ship.

metal572 : your turn




She sensed someone was looking at her, so she looked around, but didn't see anyone.

"Meh.."

She went closer to the ship and heard a soft voice coming from inside. She couldn't hear it clearly but she was positive that she heard someone speaking.

"Hey Jenny!" Thomas shouted as he came closer to where Jenny was standing.

She got shocked for a second and realized that it was just Thomas. She tried her best to still look composed after that, and it seemed that it worked.

"Shh, you're noisy." Jenny didn't bother to look at Thomas for more than 2 seconds. Instead, she held her laser gun with her two hands and charged it up for full power beam, and looked back at the ship.

metal572 : your turn




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(edited by Juliet on 09-22-10 01:12 AM)    

09-23-10 07:24 AM
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"Damn, now there's two of them." Jehral mumbled to himself.

Jehral notices how Jenny is looking at the ship.

"They can't be allowed to enter." he thought to himself.
"If they find Searol who knows what they will do to him." he thought
"But if I reveal myself now I could jeopardize the mission and get everyone killed." he thought.

Jehral thought for a minute about what he should do, and decides to enter through the service hatch opposite the side where Jenny and Thomas were. He carefully makes his way to the other side, making sure to not be in the sight of the humans. He finds the hatch and crawls inside.

"First priority is saving Searol, then I will deal with the humans." he thought as he crawled his way into the ship.

Juliet : your turn
"Damn, now there's two of them." Jehral mumbled to himself.

Jehral notices how Jenny is looking at the ship.

"They can't be allowed to enter." he thought to himself.
"If they find Searol who knows what they will do to him." he thought
"But if I reveal myself now I could jeopardize the mission and get everyone killed." he thought.

Jehral thought for a minute about what he should do, and decides to enter through the service hatch opposite the side where Jenny and Thomas were. He carefully makes his way to the other side, making sure to not be in the sight of the humans. He finds the hatch and crawls inside.

"First priority is saving Searol, then I will deal with the humans." he thought as he crawled his way into the ship.

Juliet : your turn
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