Here's a poem called the "Lonesome Queen" something that I thought up last night I hope that you like it feedback is wonderful to tell me how am doing things have been busy for me but I still find time to think up ideas for poetry and to post it to let people see the work that I've done so far.

Then I though about instead of posting one poem I should post two so they people could see more of my work so this other one is called "One Heart".

~ Lonesome Queen By: Luna ~

One stands alone
her black hair blows wildly
in the storm she brought in
with the blood-tears creeping from her eyes

Staring at the stars
she tears her nails into her thighs

Madly her mind moves
with quickness keeping pace
knowing there is know ONE
to kiss her lonely face

All the worlds a stage
and the players play their parts
throwing her into a daze
from the closing of their hearts

Sadness soon sets in
a pain not wished for one
she dreams of lifes shared end
while hers is left undone

The music man that mattered
ripped away by will alone
left her soul bound & tattered
carving "Lonesome Queen" in stone

Can he hear her call
a million miles away
can he catch her falling
by loving her this way

She ponders love and doubt
pushing fears away
the lonesome queen stands fast tonight
and loathes the coming days
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I have one heart
it can beat slow
in times of peace
I feel it's glow

I have one heart
it can beat fast
love many or few
all through it's past

It can be big
though small at times
shared with friends
it knows no lines

No boundaries or rules
to pull emotion back
it gives of itself fully
with and without tact

It's hard to understand
the "fair-weathered" friend
for my heart and my soul
loves 'til the end

Friends that it blooms for
I feel must be true blue
that is unless...
they're using you

If you give and they take
for their own selfish ends
or they act like you following your heart
is worse than a sin

Maybe just maybe
they wanted more
not so much friendship
MUCH MORE a whore

So I'll take my "heartship"
and store it away
you may find yourself in need of it
That ONE rainy day.

That is a great poem! I like the emotion you put into it

*blushes* thank you Metal for your feedback am glad that you like my poetry I did put alot of emotion into things might work out for me if I can find a place to publish my poetry I will be making extra money to save up.