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MEH A LOVE POEM I JUST THOUGHT OF QUICKLY

 

06-28-10 07:20 PM
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THERE once was a story of a strong man name Jake
whos howl for the moon can make the whole world shake
he cryed for his long last love evrey night
to hold her in her arms for one last kiss goodnight
but when he howled for her she didn't respond
his heart broke in 2 and his howl grew
he howled louder and louder his heart burning from pain
but she never howled back no time to complain
so he finally knew that she was lost in the moon
the only way he could be with her is if he riped his heart in 2
so he riped his heart out and flew up into the sky
and there goes his long lost love kissing another wolf waving to him goodbye.

hope you liked it idk a name for it but yea im good at fast thinking love poems been there done that if any1 wants to tell me a good name for my poem i just made please do

THERE once was a story of a strong man name Jake
whos howl for the moon can make the whole world shake
he cryed for his long last love evrey night
to hold her in her arms for one last kiss goodnight
but when he howled for her she didn't respond
his heart broke in 2 and his howl grew
he howled louder and louder his heart burning from pain
but she never howled back no time to complain
so he finally knew that she was lost in the moon
the only way he could be with her is if he riped his heart in 2
so he riped his heart out and flew up into the sky
and there goes his long lost love kissing another wolf waving to him goodbye.

hope you liked it idk a name for it but yea im good at fast thinking love poems been there done that if any1 wants to tell me a good name for my poem i just made please do

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06-29-10 07:25 AM
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Nice try
But I think that this thread fits more to "Stories / Simulation / Art / Music" forum, so I'll move it there.

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Nice try
But I think that this thread fits more to "Stories / Simulation / Art / Music" forum, so I'll move it there.

[moved to "Stories / Simulation / Art / Music" forum]
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noelia : lol did you like it it took me like 10 mins to make i was watching some werewolf movie as i made it lol then i just came up with words.
noelia : lol did you like it it took me like 10 mins to make i was watching some werewolf movie as i made it lol then i just came up with words.
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I think it's a good start
I think it's a good start
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noelia : lols i thought it was decent to ill think of a new topic and post a new one today.
noelia : lols i thought it was decent to ill think of a new topic and post a new one today.
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That was pretty random. But like noelia said, its a good start, it didnt work out to well though, because it was a strong man named jake, then his wife left him for a wolf...that doesnt put a pretty image in my head.
That was pretty random. But like noelia said, its a good start, it didnt work out to well though, because it was a strong man named jake, then his wife left him for a wolf...that doesnt put a pretty image in my head.
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meepersss : did u frigging read it Jake is a wolf to...... hes a man/wolf that's what i was implying.
meepersss : did u frigging read it Jake is a wolf to...... hes a man/wolf that's what i was implying.
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95jake1 : Yes I did read it, and I usualy picture werewolves, or anything of that sort, mauling, shredding, bitting and all that good stuff. But when his wife/wolf is kissing another wolf, it puts the image of two beast like things in my head about to kiss like a twilight for werewolves. And the rhyme pattern was messed up halfway through the poem, so yes I did read it, and overanalyzed it.
95jake1 : Yes I did read it, and I usualy picture werewolves, or anything of that sort, mauling, shredding, bitting and all that good stuff. But when his wife/wolf is kissing another wolf, it puts the image of two beast like things in my head about to kiss like a twilight for werewolves. And the rhyme pattern was messed up halfway through the poem, so yes I did read it, and overanalyzed it.
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